Since Long ago I always wanted to make a hackrom for my own.
and after years of free time at my hand and the tools from this community. and finally with the help of a good friend of mine, I present to you my very first demo;
Mario And Luigi: Super Berry World!
Story: Mario and Luigi arrive to Berry Island for Vacation during winter to visit the Yoshis. But bowser alredy take over the region stealing all the food with his powerfull army with the help of his 7 Koopa Kids.
Mario and Luigi must help the Yoshis to survive this cruel winter before they starve in this new adventure!
Thank you! I going to try to improve my English and use some corrector tool and ask for help with the textboxes in the forum.
and for the FG/BG contrast; I will change the background color so will not blur with the foreground contrast, I really love the default snow palette from the original SMW. but yes, I will use a less saturated palette and not so bright background colors next time.
Not bad. I don't particularly care for some of the humor that you used in this, but it isn't a dealbreaker.
The main issues you should look into are to get someone who can speak English well to proofread your message boxes and to improve the FG/BG contrast in the first couple (outdoor) levels. They blend in a bit too much otherwise.
you got a point. I'm not that good in English either, my native language it's Spanish. But grammar errors aren't something that difficult to fix for me. So I will do my best to improve in future updates, including bug fixes.