Couple of instances throughout the text that could be optimized better such as [r1]2 can be [r2]4 and every other occurrence of r1's. Every byte counts once you you're at a size like this. The mixing can be better such as dialing the kicks a tad down and add panning to the square wave part like the original did. It also sounds a bit slow and even lags due to the greater than 60 tempo. Nonetheless great job! Also fuck you for listening to the fucks.