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Systrem Studios - Cave of Bones [DOWNLOAD UPDATE 3]

Cave of Bones

I made a level full with bones! What do you think? What should i change?

Update 3:
- new palette
- changed things

Screenshot 1 (OUTDATED)
Screenshot 2 (OUTDATED)

Download UPDATE 3
I tested your level.

First of all: you're not allowed to reveal your name in the entry. So remove your signature in the first message box.

About the level, it was decent. There weren't many things going on, but the level WAS decent. It was a bit too easy (I only got hurt by accident). The level felt even a bit short if you ask me (but this isn't an issue).

Looking on the design side, it was good. Even it is in the safe side, I liked the design. I'm a fan of simplistic design so you conquered me with your design. The only sad thing is the linearity of the level (there are few thing to do different than go right).

About aesthetics, there are few of them. You could add a bit more. Even though the palettes aren't custom, they fit nice in.

Now, to issues: in the start and the end of the level there are that walls with priority enlabed that hide Buzzy Beetles. That's an unfair obstacle, so you should either move the Buzzies to a place where the player can see them or simply disble the priority of the walls.

That's all.

SCORES:

Design: 17/30
Creativity: 9/20
Aesthetics: 6/10

OVERALL: 32/60
nothing to say

Layout by RanAS

Nice Level!!!

Design: 24/30
Creativity: 13/20
Aesthetics: 5/10

Overall: 42/60 #smw{:peace:}#wario{^_^}