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| Posted on 2008-09-20 12:04:46 AM |
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Demo 2: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=showhack&id=1770
EVERYTHING HERE IS BETA AND SUBJECT TO CHANGE</b>
I saw that Super UltiMario World just wasnt attracting much attention, so I decided to take this to the next Level.
Super Mario- A New Beginning has much more added to it thatn SUMW did, and I am planning to expand it Much More....
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Update: Made OW a bit lss square-ish, but the same overall. This will not mean oll my OWs are flat and Boing, just this Peticular Island.

Yay! Mushroom!

Be Patient, you gotta wait for this Rex to Drop to advance to the next ledge.

Yea, a Red Stem, Get over it. If I can fix it, I will, but I have not bothered to yet.

WHERES MARIO?
Yes, after you take a pipe from the Grasslands, you end up in a forest, where I take advantage of Layer Priority.

There he is!

WHOAH!
Look at all these coin Boxes!
I'll be-a Rich-a Plumber!
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Can you reach this Bonus Room?
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Thats all you get.... for now.... Unexpected end tag (</b>) at 561, expected </i> Tag (b) was not closed.
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| Last edited on 2009-05-12 02:36:44 PM by UltiMario. |
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| Posted on 2008-09-20 10:42:27 PM |
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This looks okay, but I would say the main area of improvement would be to standardize the graphics. It just looks strange for some foreground objects to have black outlines while others don't.
Aside from that, at least you are using a variety of ExGFX and you seem to have some level design skills. Keep up the good work!
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 12:23:26 PM |
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Well, for a start, Ive fixed the pipe up.

I had some Palette Problems beforehand with this thing so This was actually a good idea
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| Last edited on 2008-09-21 12:23:47 PM by UltiMario. |
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 12:27:50 PM |
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This hack looks good. I just wanted to say that i like the red piranha.
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 12:38:22 PM |
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I liked the design, but about the BGs...
Feather - Fire Flower = Fire Flower?? What is that? O.o
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 02:54:13 PM |
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i would love to review this and see it grow and expand 
this looks like an interesting one and won't be too difficult for me to try >_>
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 03:15:51 PM |
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the levels seem to be good. But I think the OW seems a little bit to angular. But the rest looks great. Keep up that good work.
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 03:15:57 PM |
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Thanks Guys 
Oh, and Black Yoshi, its Mario Math 
I actually DID review the Math to make sure that no two problem clashed with eachother. Yay Lineland Road BG!
OH, and if you look at my sig, you can see that things are progressing quite nicely :3
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 06:36:07 PM |
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Looks good, but, in the rex part, there is a alternative way, or other way the player can get stuck
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 09:09:37 PM |
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Ok, Ive been working on this really hard, and have level 2 done, heres some screenies.

People normally critisize me when I use anything in my Palette thats Pink. But hey, its Peach's Castle.
This is a bit innacurate, the time limit is now only 200

Oh noez! Gordos!
I seem to have not supplied a single screen showing that Piranhas That float shall exist in the hack... cept now they're Gordos and look normal.
You think one long level (now cut down 450 Seconds) and one shorter level (200 Seconds) is enough for a Demo?
[Thats 65 (Not Hex) Screens of Gameplay, 3-4 average levels.]
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| Last edited on 2008-09-22 01:52:57 PM by UltiMario. |
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| Posted on 2008-09-21 09:15:04 PM |
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wow, that's a very creative way to look at Peach's castle.
If anything, there should be some yellow and stuff in the color pallette too. just because she has a crown and golden hair but that's just my honest opinion ya know ;)
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| Posted on 2008-09-22 01:54:42 PM |
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I have inserted a handful of custom Sprites, and I will use some of them in my hack.
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| Posted on 2008-09-22 02:06:10 PM |
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I say make the pink a little duller, maybe mix in some white somewhere.
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| Posted on 2008-09-22 03:23:25 PM |
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Does this Look any Better?

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| Posted on 2008-09-22 03:40:30 PM |
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That looks so much better, the pink doesn't hurt my eyes as much.
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| Posted on 2008-09-22 08:25:39 PM |
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Ive Dulled the Castle Palette a Bit more, and I believe my hack is bugfixed and ready to submit. I'll do one last playthorugh, first, though.
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Originally posted by SystemYour hack, Super Mario: A New Beginning (Demo 1), was rejected.
Reason: Two issues worth noting - the graphics used in the bonus room were submitted by someone who had stolen them from another hack, and the author of those graphics did not want them used in other hacks, so if those would be replaced with another graphic, then that would make this hack approvable. Second thing was just an error in the slopes used in the bonus room.
I can fix the slopes.... but.... but... but....
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Not fair 
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Originally posted by FPI
So is this in the ExGFX-section or isn't it? If yes, no one could reject your hack because of stolen ExGFX right?
By judging from the screenshot it looks like something SCORPION would do, actually he ripped off TSRP2's bonus room GFX and modified it a little for his own hack. If he is now saying it's his, it's just wrong and stupid. But yeah overall I don't know. Personally I don't have a problem when you use this, but it looks a bit glitched in the BG.
Yep, That means I can use the GFX Freely. If whoever Claimed it was SCORPION, then we should ignore that.
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| Last edited on 2008-09-23 06:20:09 PM by UltiMario. |
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| Posted on 2008-09-28 08:26:21 AM |
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I have Hackers Block for this one level :/
I'll show you part of it right now, but I'm having difficulty Setting this Up.

Yea, the Waterfall IS ExAnimate, for anyone who is Wondering
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| Last edited on 2008-09-28 08:27:10 AM by UltiMario. |
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| Posted on 2008-09-28 10:08:45 AM |
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I think the BG is too bright.This ca nconfuse the player.Dark it some.
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| Posted on 2008-09-28 11:32:25 AM |
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i don't even know what's what in that picture...
if the middle brown part is the background, I think you should take it out.
Only because I don't like matching foreground and background.
Like Beuli said
Kind of Confusing
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