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| Posted on 2009-10-12 12:06:20 PM |
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my first castle
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 12:22:03 PM |
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Originally posted by Potato Lantern
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You have bad palleted koopas.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 12:42:36 PM |
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@ skedar: Nice castle level! The status bar palette may need a bit of work though - and you may want to add another 100 to the clock since you almost ran out of time yourself, and a new player to your hack may want to explore a little more. Otherwise, really nice job 
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 12:50:57 PM |
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Originally posted by Bud8Amp88@ skedar: Nice castle level! The status bar palette may need a bit of work though - and you may want to add another 100 to the clock since you almost ran out of time yourself, and a new player to your hack may want to explore a little more. Otherwise, really nice job
yes your right extra time is gonna be added. thanks.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 01:22:01 PM |
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Drawing has never really been a strong point for me, but I decided to take a shot at a tileset for a new level I'm working on. This is a test of sorts...and it looks okay to me. I still plan on adding more stuff...but this is a small sample of what I have so far. I would appreciate any kind of suggestion on how to improve.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 01:29:35 PM |
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That looks real good Foursword - The docks especially give that tileset a real "Maritime" look, and it's way better than the same ol' Super Mario World bridges that seem to be in every hack at least once.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 02:04:16 PM |
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Originally posted by ghostlycool666Originally posted by Potato Lantern
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You have bad palleted koopas. I think that was intended for cool, wire-frame like enemies. Notice how they fit on the neon background. Just sayin'.
Wow, I really think this looks cool potato lantern!
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 02:47:56 PM |
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Î'll change the palette later.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 03:19:01 PM |
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@Foursword4: That's really excellent for a first try. The only thing I dislike, and this happens to a lot of beginners, is that the grass is too thin. I mean, it still looks good, but when you designate only an 8x8 area for the grass, there's not much room for detail. I'm really liking your decorations and the water.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 07:21:23 PM |
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Thanks for the comments, there is the true OW. it takes me hours and hours but it is now done.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 07:38:52 PM |
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Wow! That OW looks fantastic - the paths look like something you'd see in an RPG almost. The only thing I noticed was there was no entrances to any sub-maps (pipes, cave entrance, etc.), so are you just going to be using the warp stars to get to/from the sub-maps, or are there going to be sub-maps at all?
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 08:49:53 PM |
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Artsy2: thanks, you pretty much covered it.
Foursword4: that's quite nice for a first try, my only issue with it would be palette related: In my opinion, the grass's "shadow" on the dirt should be a dark shade of gray, not green.
GRIM: That OW has some great design. The graphics are great, too. My only suggestion would be to use those new GFX COMPLETELY, not a mixture of them and the original SMW OW GFX.. although I AM curious how you managed to fit in the new GFX AND SMW's original OW GFX.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 09:09:10 PM |
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@Grim: That OW looks great! I don't have any suggestions to make about it.
I already posted this level in it's hack thread, but I want your opinions on how I can improve it:
The Mountain Foothills
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Any suggestions?
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 11:15:40 PM |
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Originally posted by The Eerie Expiriment@Grim: That OW looks great! I don't have any suggestions to make about it.
I already posted this level in it's hack thread, but I want your opinions on how I can improve it:
The Mountain Foothills
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Any suggestions?
I'd try changing the palette for the arches, they look weird as is right now.
Even though the level isn't near being completed, I decided to make a video of this because it's just THAT AWESOME.
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The layer 3 "Lava" effect was given to me by Imamelia.
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 11:52:59 PM |
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Originally posted by GRIM, THE LORD OF DEATH
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this is a awesome OW
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| Last edited on 2009-10-12 11:57:40 PM by S.N.N.. |
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| Posted on 2009-10-12 11:57:12 PM |
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Originally posted by FIRST POST2. When replying to something posted by someone else, give constructive criticism and please refrain from quoting images.
Please keep that in mind next time, B.D.G.
Atma: The lava looks rather interesting, though I don't like how it "jumps" up right at the beginning. Does it actually change height like "Mondo" did, or does it do something else? I know you said that it changes current in the message box, but that usually refers to direction, so I'm a bit confused.
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| Last edited on 2009-10-12 11:57:24 PM by S.N.N.. |
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| Posted on 2009-10-13 12:27:59 AM |
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Just showing some Layer 3 images I made.
The Layer 3 here is the water and the sun in the back. I tried to replicate a sunset of sorts, I might fix the HDMA so it looks better.
A GIF showing a Layer 3 Lava I made. Of course, the lava interaction was given to me by Atma, whom imamelia gave the code. I made it a GIF so u cna haz see teh animationz  (Of course, the GIF looks very crude, it looks better ingame...)
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| Posted on 2009-10-13 12:37:07 AM |
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It already looks awesome here.
But the water-sun connection seems a bit.... Cutoff, you might say.
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| Posted on 2009-10-13 12:41:57 AM |
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Looks very nice Ladida, like always
But just like Yonowaaru stated, the sun looks a bit cutoff.
Maybe you could change the pallete from the water to match it with a sunset?
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