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| Posted on 2010-05-12 01:54:40 PM |
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So this is my thread.
My thread about my haikus.
You can read them here.
This whole thread won't be in haiku, but you know. I'm good at writing them.
May 12:
Noticed by no one,
Like an invisible man,
I stand at back wall.
I felt like this yesterday, I was sad. This was true, at the talent show I couldn't get a good seat, so I had to stand at the back wall, and no one was talking to me.
I guess I'll write one of these a day. I wrote that yesterday, so I'll skip today and write another one tomorrow.
May 13:
Fuck you, Casandra.
You can die, for all I care.
Go with your new friends.
One of my friends completely... what's a good word for it... left me and my other friends for another group of friends that she doesn't even like, for no apparent reason. It pissed us all off. Ergo, haiku.
May 14:
Pumped, it is Friday.
Desert Bus LP tonight.
Also my friend's house.
YAY! 
May 15:
Saturday morning,
I lie here with my laptop.
Disturbed by no one.
Saturday mornings always make my week, and even though it's 5:45 PM, that was probably the best part of my day. Not that the day was bad, just that the morning was really awesome. I was on my laptop for like 4 hours, plus I had a cinnamon raisin bagel with strawberry cream cheese!
May 16:
At my cousin's house.
She's loud, mean, and obnoxious.
I did not have fun.
Feel bad for me, that's all I ask. 
May 17:
Tired on Monday.
Almost fell asleep in math.
Good thing Cass woke me.
Bleh. Staying up until 12:30 to watch Survivor + getting up at 7:00 for school = unhappy Umlaut.
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| Last edited on 2010-05-17 01:11:47 PM by UmlautBanana. |
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| Posted on 2010-05-12 09:04:30 PM |
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Haikus aren't my favorite form of poetry, but they definitely say a lot, despite the fact that they are so short. I bet it takes some good, long thinking to condense so much into so little.
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| Posted on 2010-05-13 03:28:45 PM |
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Man, your haikus are good.
We all like the haikus.
They are short but sweet.
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| Posted on 2010-05-13 03:34:54 PM |
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Nice, I like haikus. the need som thought.
Originally posted by NeutronMan, your haikus are good.
We all like the haikus.
They are short but sweet.
That isn't a haiku tough.
It's suposed to be
5
7
5
not
6
6
5
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| Posted on 2010-05-13 03:40:38 PM |
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Originally posted by MachomanThat isn't a haiku tough.
It's suposed to be
5
7
5
not
6
6
5
Your came down too tough.
There was no need to berate.
He did nothing wrong.
Also, this is rapidly collapsing into a general haiku thread.
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| Posted on 2010-05-13 04:31:58 PM |
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Originally posted by DemonsulAlso, this is rapidly collapsing into a general haiku thread.
Don't jump the gun, it's only 5 posts in.
Also, new haiku for today. They say violence isn't in the spirit of the haiku. F DAT.
Also, it does take a lot of thought and some good word choice to condense feelings into three short lines of really specific syllable counts.
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| Posted on 2010-05-14 03:34:36 PM |
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Haikus are good.
But some don't make sense.
Refirgerator.
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| Posted on 2010-05-14 06:47:58 PM |
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Most haikus are great, but some are nonsense, like Magikoopa said.
I'm liking your haikus, Umlaut. I see you can transform them in a fun thing. I'll go here everyday.
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| Posted on 2010-05-15 06:16:44 AM |
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Originally posted by DrawingYoshiMost haikus are great, but some are nonsense, like Magikoopa said.
I'm liking your haikus, Umlaut. I see you can transform them in a fun thing. I'll go here everyday.
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| Posted on 2010-05-15 03:26:33 PM |
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Nice work, keep practicing and you'll be as great as Hannah some day
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| Posted on 2010-05-15 03:32:00 PM |
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Hannah Montana
Is the worst singer
Ever.
Oh, and magikoopa won with the refrigerator
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| Posted on 2010-05-15 03:35:36 PM |
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<UmlautBanana> Also, updated my haiku thread.
<Obsidian> SMW
<Obsidian> A site no good for haikus
<Obsidian> What a crying shame
<Link13|W98> bye who ever sees this message
* Link13|W98 (Mibbit@caffie-7A54F8B7.socal.res.rr.com) has left #smwc
<Obsidian> Link13 has left
<Obsidian> Now we are all in despair
<Obsidian> ...I love haiku speak
<UmlautBanana> Obsidian, did you see my haiku thread?
<Obsidian> Sadly I did not
<Obsidian> Your name is making me starve
<Obsidian> I want bananas
<UmlautBanana> It's in the Art board
<UmlautBanana> You might want to check it out
<UmlautBanana> I updated it
<Obsidian> Nice haiku there sir
<Obsidian> It gives me great pride to see
<Obsidian> Other people rhyme
<UmlautBanana> Rhyme?
<Obsidian> ...ffffff that was a stretch <_<
<SpudAway> lol
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| Last edited on 2010-05-15 10:23:03 PM by Obsidian Serpent. |
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| Posted on 2010-05-15 03:43:42 PM |
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Originally posted by Hannah MontanaNice work, keep practicing and you'll be as great as Hannah some day
That's not nice! You need to be more constructive with your critism.
I like it. They are funny!
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| Posted on 2010-05-15 03:45:25 PM |
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Nice work. And oh look is mah name(obsidian's post)
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| Posted on 2010-05-16 08:52:58 AM |
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Originally posted by NeutronHannah Montana
Is the worst singer
Ever.
Oh, and magikoopa won with the refrigerator
I just copied this.
Anyway, Nice Haiku for yesterday.
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| Posted on 2010-05-16 09:51:12 AM |
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Horray for bots that generate haikus!
Sunshine is the
unmanliest person in the
fuck. Tits in the fuck.
Of course not as good as yours, but still lulzy.
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| Posted on 2010-05-17 01:12:59 PM |
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Originally posted by AqualakituHorray for bots that generate haikus!
Sunshine is the
unmanliest person in the
fuck. Tits in the fuck.
Of course not as good as yours, but still lulzy.
What generator is this? Also, why the random XChat line break icon?
Oh, and I updated the thread with yesterday's haiku, and today's.
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| Posted on 2010-05-17 02:02:14 PM |
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Once again, great haikus.
For how long are you gonna do these?
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| Posted on 2010-05-17 03:41:07 PM |
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Probably until I get bored with it. Until then, though, look forward to my daily haikus, and thanks for the compliment! ^_^
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| Posted on 2010-05-19 01:02:11 PM |
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Originally posted by UmlautBananaMay 16:
At my cousin's house.
She's loud, mean, and obnoxious.
I did not have fun.
Now I see your cousin is exactly like my sister. When a bug appears, she starts to scream a lot and nobody can stop her. Anyway, she's really funny.
EDIT: Didn't even noticed Magikoopa's haiku in my other post
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