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| Posted on 2010-12-22 02:16:06 PM |
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Originally posted by Lord WhiteHey, I noticed you had collages or montages or whatever they're called at the beginning of this thread. Can these kinds of graphic designs be submitted here in this thread?
No this thread is for Roberto's pics, you can post yours in the "Don't want an art thread?" thread.
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| Posted on 2010-12-22 02:21:08 PM |
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I meant the Art forum itself. Sorry for the 'thread' thing.
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| Posted on 2011-01-12 05:26:19 PM |
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You asked me to check out your latest picture...why me I might ask? But since you did, and since I'm a nice enough person I do believe, I think it shall critique it to the best of my ability.
Jimmy from Ape Escape. I never played that game so to me this is a generic person. I'm sorry, I wish I could be more specific there.
I'll start with the lines on him. They seem to be done in one motion, and preferably, with me, I sketch them out and then re-draw over them to make it professional looking and well designed. Some of the lines seem to just go over the lines they should be stopping at. The feet also look like they are morphed together.
Coloring. Even if he's white he can have skin tone. The colors you did put in, try to fill the entire space with that color and leave nothing. Try to not even show marks that reveal which way you drew. Some of the colors bleed over into others.
Positive things. You did a face and eyes that I just cant draw. I can never make my people look good when I draw them. You did a good job on not making him look handicapped or something. His all together figure is actually human shaped. I am proud you can do that (I have trouble with it). Just straighten out the legs, which way are they facing?
Keep up the work. I am expecting you to get better, and will keep checking in on this thread. I don't know why you messaged me to critique it, but hey, there you go.
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| Posted on 2011-03-10 10:22:15 AM |
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I'M BACK:
After to two months,created THIS:
Sorry about some details,but don't worry about this.
Well,what think about that pictures?
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| Last edited on 2012-01-24 07:24:23 AM by Roberto zampari. |
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| Posted on 2011-03-10 12:49:04 PM |
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Because you asked... alright. I don't recognize the upper two, but the left one seems pretty okay. The right one... idk, a little bit generic I would say, but perhaps he was designed to be that way.
I like your Bomberman drawing, out of the rest it does stand out. The rest... eh, could use some improvement in my opinion. Especially the 'AWESOME' face, if you want it to resemble the original face, that is - the eyes should point to another direction. ;)
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| Posted on 2011-03-10 05:04:01 PM |
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They're mostly all okay, but I think you need to work on them more. They're all kinda rough-looking.
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| Posted on 2011-06-13 06:26:04 PM |
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LOOK THIS:
ENDOU MAMORU from Inazuma eleven series
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| Last edited on 2012-01-24 07:22:01 AM by Roberto zampari. |
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| Posted on 2012-01-24 07:23:14 AM |
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SIX MONTHS LATER:
PULSEMAN
Epic,don't think?
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| Last edited on 2012-01-24 07:43:30 AM by Roberto zampari. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-05 08:41:42 AM |
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ALERT,EPIC MASTERPIECE APPEARS:
1.S.N.N
2.Roy
3.Blumiere
4.ZMann
5.Robertozampari
6.Sonikku
7.Dinomar
8.HuFlungDu
ENJOY?
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