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| Posted on 2010-06-10 05:17:15 PM |
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Hey there
Okay, first thing: I hope I spelled the title right, caus' my english sucks..
Okay, as the title says Mario needs to rescue somebody .. he don't know who .. he just needs to. I know, amazing plot..
My hack includes ExGFX, music, sprites, HDMA and some ASM.
Well here are some pictures:
Hey Kids..

Title Screen .. yeah, the first level is the intro video, too. (I fixed the grammar error..)

World 1.

Picture of the first level.

And a video of the first level.
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Oh .. and I just noticed that there's a little graphic bug if you get 10 points .. like by getiing a coin or so. I'll fix that.
That's all for now.
Over and out. *kkrsh*
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| Last edited on 2010-07-20 12:35:17 PM by Fr3akGamer. |
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| Posted on 2010-06-10 05:41:01 PM |
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Hey there back.
Its 'rescuing' but other than that, your English is pretty good. Your hack looks like fun from the first level as well. The one thing you may want to change are the bushes that Mario can stand behind. If Mario jumps up through a cliff with one of those bushes, he is in front of the cliff but behind the bush that is on the cliff. Good job otherwise.
PS: I love Kirby music.
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| Posted on 2010-06-10 05:43:08 PM |
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Thanks. I'll fix the errors now. ;)
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| Posted on 2010-06-10 05:52:59 PM |
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Also, you should try messing around with the overworld pallette to make it more unique. Great level, though!
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 03:38:09 AM |
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Things I changed and fixed so far:
- grammar error in the title
- overworld palette of world 1
- some little things in the first level
Okay, here's a picture of new overworld palette .. looks better now, huh?

And a little screenshot of the second level:

That's all for now.
Over and out. *kkrsh*
(Btw, 100th post! )
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| Last edited on 2010-06-11 04:55:23 AM by Fr3akGamer. |
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 04:35:59 AM |
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Sieht echt gut aus. Die OW Palette gefällt mir.
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 04:37:06 AM |
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Nice 100th post! 
The OW palette looks fantastic and I don't see any cutoff or perspective errors either.
The design of the first level looks great. It's not too hard or too easy. It's just the right difficulty. The palette looks nice too and the BG fits nicely. Music also fits.
Can't really comment much on the 2nd level but it looks good from what I see in the screen. I like the BG.
One last thing to point out, in the level name, shouldn't it be King Koopa's Land?
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 04:56:27 AM |
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Originally posted by MarioFan22One last thing to point out, in the level name, shouldn't it be King Koopa's Land?
Oh yeah, of course. Thanks. ;)
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 08:49:32 AM |
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Originally posted by Fr3akGamerOh .. and I just noticed that there's a little graphic bug if you get 10 points .. like by getiing a coin or so. I'll fix that.
Use this patch.
This looks pretty good so far. Nice work!
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 09:03:00 AM |
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I already got this from a friend of mine, thanks anyways. ;)
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 12:48:48 PM |
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The background of this level looks nice.
And the OW palette indeed looks better with that palette instead of the old one.
However there are a few minor layer priority errors, that don't need to be fixed, but it would be nice to see them fixed.
Anyways, the hack looks promising, and I hope it won't get lost like the other one...
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| Last edited on 2010-06-11 12:54:22 PM by leod. |
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| Posted on 2010-06-11 01:35:43 PM |
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You must fix the layer priority problem,but that is a mini bug,your hack looks great!

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| Posted on 2010-06-11 03:24:32 PM |
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Thanks guys! Oh my .. sorry for bad grammar, I'm drunken, lol.
Whatever, more pictures and videos tomorow.
Over and out. *kkrsh*
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| Posted on 2010-06-13 09:49:47 AM |
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Yay, a video of level 2 - normal exit! 
<object width="640" height="505"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/6xzw3v_JO0s&hl=de_DE&fs=1&color1=0x5d1719&color2=0xcd311b"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/6xzw3v_JO0s&hl=de_DE&fs=1&color1=0x5d1719&color2=0xcd311b" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="640" height="505"></embed></object>
Over and out. *kkrsh*
Fr3akGamer
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| Last edited on 2010-06-13 09:50:38 AM by Fr3akGamer. |
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| Posted on 2010-06-13 10:28:58 AM |
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I have a few complaints, but other than that, it looks good.
1. You should be able to go in front of the green pillars that hold the mushrooms up. It looks weird (at least in my opinion) if you go behind them.
2. The blue pillars (which I assume are solid) should be a darker color, as to indicate that they are in fact solid.
3. Take the moon out of the background. It looks odd in the daytime.
Other than that, great job!
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| Posted on 2010-06-13 10:31:50 AM |
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Very nice work, FreakGamer. I really liked the music, and the whole athletic level feel in it. Great work! ;)
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| Posted on 2010-06-14 04:08:41 PM |
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I'm searching for some beta testers. Anyone interested?
Over and out. *kkrsh*
Fr3akGamer
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| Posted on 2010-06-14 04:45:56 PM |
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Your hack seems pretty great! I will have some free time now (school ends in the Wednesday for me), so I can be one of your beta-testers.
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| Posted on 2010-06-15 01:41:20 AM |
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I could try some beta-testing. I've never done it before but you got to start somewhere.
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| Posted on 2010-06-15 01:54:41 AM |
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Allright. I'll send you the ro.. I mean IPS file and you can test it. Thanks. ;)
Over and out. *kkrsh*
Fr3akGamer
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