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| Posted on 2010-09-26 03:54:26 PM |
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Hi SMWC! It's a me, Mario GameGuy10!
This is my first hack. It's called Super Mario Bros. 4.
Story: Mario visits the Mushroom Kingdom. Bowser kidnapped Peach again! He went real mad this time. He wants to kill everyone with a nuclear bomb! Can Mario save the whole Kingdom?
Powerups:
-Mushroom: Make Mario Bigger
-Flower: Fire Mario now throws bigger and straight fireballs!
-Feather: Give Mario a Cape
-Powerdown: Like SMB3
Screenshots:
"Nintendo" Logo:
Title Screen:
Main Overworld:
Peach's Castle! Toad Says:
Outside of Mario's House:
Inside of Mario's House:
Luigi Says:
No levels yet. That's all for now.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 03:56:02 PM |
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The plot is kinda generic, and the overworld is a bit too much square. Try making large land masses instead and stuff. Other than that, the hack looks good so far.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 04:05:53 PM |
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Based on the screenshots it looks pretty decent (a little generic) but that title is EXTREMELY over used, I suggest you change it to something a little more unique or at least add a subtitle.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 04:09:59 PM |
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I will have to agree with Neosz, the title can be changed a bit. The rest looks fine, but make the OW less square.
I like the house you made, and I see the beds are colored to be Mario and Luigi's, that's nice.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 04:34:23 PM |
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The hack looks nice so far and I like the title screen. But as Neosz says, the name SMB4 has been used several times. Try not to use names like Super Mario Bros. <insert number here> or "Super _____ World."
The OW is a bit too square right now.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 05:36:09 PM |
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Um... The Mario's House Graphics were not made by me. They were made by vysethelegend47. You can download it from the site its self.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 05:46:18 PM |
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The Mario's House GFX came with custom palletes. Use those.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 05:50:36 PM |
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It Looks Good for me, but I recomend to make the overworld not too square, and like others users says,try to make the story more interesting.
Short Story:Looks good , but needs to be fixed a bit.
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| Posted on 2010-09-26 06:32:04 PM |
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Originally posted by GameGuy10Um... The Mario's House Graphics were not made by me. They were made by vysethelegend47. You can download it from the site its self.
I meant the design of the house, not the fact that you made the house GFX. It looks nice anyway.
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| Posted on 2010-09-27 07:29:45 PM |
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New! I started the first level!
Unfinished. That's all for now.
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| Posted on 2010-09-27 08:13:51 PM |
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Not Bad.
Try to make the level not too flat, and make the underground palletes a bit more darker.
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| Posted on 2010-09-28 02:21:56 PM |
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dakress:
Thanks. But there's a problem. I can't use slopes with this FG, and they weren't from SMB3.
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| Posted on 2010-09-28 04:18:16 PM |
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GameGuy10, at least try to make some small holes in the levels.
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| Posted on 2010-09-29 04:05:18 PM |
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Hack looks beautiful, but the OW looks very square and nasty :p
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| Posted on 2010-10-05 12:02:58 AM |
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No secret exits? You could split the larger World 3 island into multiple ones.
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| Posted on 2010-10-05 04:20:00 PM |
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This looks like it needs a lot of work...
1. The overworld is FAR too square. Try adding bumps, and making it unusual shapes (e.g., Hexagon, triangle, half-circle, etc.).
2. The levels look a bit linear. Try making forks (In a sense...) in your levels.
3. Not another sequel... Give it a more unique name, like "Mario's ___ Adventure", or "Mario and the ____". Get creative.
Don't give up! Nothing can be accomplished if you don't try. Don't let anyone stop you. NO ONE, even if a n00b says your hack is going to suck. 
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| Posted on 2010-10-11 07:08:56 AM |
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Why don't replace for red dot the stages with two exits??
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| Last edited on 2010-10-11 07:16:29 AM by Roberto zampari. |
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| Posted on 2010-10-11 05:01:21 PM |
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i'd give it a new name because there is already a Super Mario Bros. 4, not to mension i have been already making a hack with SMB4 in it.:\
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| Posted on 2010-10-17 01:25:20 AM |
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Super Mario Bros. 4 is a poor choice for a hack name, considering the Japanese version of Super Mario World is subtitled "Super Mario Bros. 4".
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| Posted on 2010-10-17 03:23:30 AM |
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This... actually looks quite good. Aside from the extremely-overused title and the odd pallet (NOT palette) of cement blocks in a cave that look unnatural and serve almost no purpose whatsoever, I have no complaints so far. Those graphics are solid!
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| Last edited on 2010-10-17 03:24:48 AM by Suns. |
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