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| Posted on 2011-08-06 10:22:29 AM |
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The game is simple.
I make a small story of atleast 4 or 5 lines of text, containing certain bold words. Then you make another story, 4-5 lines minimum, but here's the twist: Your story must contain the all the bold words from the original story somewhere in them.
After a few people post, the round will end and points will be awarded to all the posters.
Points will be judged on how much I liked the story, and how cleverly the bold words were used.
Please keep in mind that your story can be about anything, as long as it contains the bold words in it. so please don't copy the theme of the orginal, as points will also be judged on originality.
the poster with the most points wins and a new round begins.
ROUND 1:
I hate Winter. It's cold, and the power might go out during a winter storm, leaving you without a heater.
That's why I invented the Heat-O-tron 9000! It uses the cold air to make warm air, so it's very energy efficeint.
The sails will off the charts! get your own today!
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 01:31:17 PM |
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Back in the old days, we invented the 4 seasons of every year. Winter, Spring, Summer, and Fall. Each season has a different storm that happens in a certain season. Be careful, during a storm, the power of the wind is strong, the air might blow you away for sure! Hope you understand this, as this is important.
Am i doing it right?
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| Last edited on 2011-08-06 01:31:32 PM by Falconpunch. |
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 01:44:44 PM |
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I'm pretty sure.
Things like air and winter were never invented. They already existed, we just gave them names. Power could be considered an invention, since it is man-made. Power can be generated by a lightning storm, since lightning is indeed electricity.
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 01:45:38 PM |
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Originally posted by FalconpunchAm i doing it right?
Yup, you're doing it great.
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 01:53:57 PM |
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Can it be in the form of an advertisement? If so:
Is it Winter? Is cold wooshing by, leaving the air bitterly cold? Are you afraid of leaving the house due to these horrendous snow Storms?
If only there was some solution to our common problem. If only there was a solution to keep the strong winter gusts of wind a gentle, soothing breeze. If only there was a way to keep your head warm during these cold, harsh months of brutal weather...
We here at JML Direct have invented the solution to all of your problems. The ultimate Winter collection. A coat. A scarf. A hat. You name it! It's here at JML's winter Collection. At no extra cost - a blanket for in the house!!!
Want to stay warm? Wish no more! JML's Winter Collection provides Power to the cold, and life to the dead! We promise that you will be satisfied.
And now, for a limited time only - A half price deal. You can now enjoy our high-quality product for the low, low price of £100.
DISCLAIMER: We at JML are not responsible if any item self-destructs, or if our products do not keep you warm.
See here if you do not get the joke.
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| Last edited on 2011-08-06 01:54:55 PM by JDC. |
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 02:17:29 PM |
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Originally posted by JDCCan it be in the form of an advertisement?
Yup. remember, It can be about anything.
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| Last edited on 2011-08-06 02:18:05 PM by Mrnintendorulez. |
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 06:08:56 PM |
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It's winter. This is the time where the power of heat goes down WAY TOO MUCH. There is a storm which comes across ONLY in winter (for me), and that is really not good.
It could destroy even your house! So, after many hours of frusturation, I invented a force field generator!
I covers your whole house with a force field which will not only protect me from the storm, but it also warms us up as it releases warm air if the cold air EVER touches the force field (Hint: All the time) and the warm air isn't bad for the ozone!
The force field only covers the house only for 1 month so the generator has to be used once a month.
I forgot to mention that the warm air also melts the snow around the house and snow cannot get in or else it'll turn into water. So you will be seeing more rainy days in your life if you use this in December!
Overall, my creation is perfect for winter. So, I masscreated them and sold them. It sold really well. Buy my creation! It'll 100% warm you up for the winter. It's only for a measly 40$!
Disclaimer:Note that this machine needs 6 C batteries if you want make it work wireless. Also, this machine is slightly unstable.
There.
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| Last edited on 2011-08-06 06:09:08 PM by mariocool1999. |
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 06:31:43 PM |
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Awesome, guys!
Falconpunch- Nice and short, I like how all the seaons were used alongside Winter.
+1 All words were used +3 fairly original +2 words were set in a theme
Final score: 6 points.
superdragonyoshi1- I liked the realistic tone.
+1 All words were used +5 very original +2 words were set in a theme
Final score: 8 points.
JDC- cool and very funny!
+1 All words were used +3 fairly original +3 Long tale
Final score: 7 points.
mariocool1999- Alot like the orginal, but it's still got some pizzas to it.
+1 All words were used +1 potential originality +3 long tale
Final score: 5 points.
Meaning today's winner is superdragonyoshi1! Congrats!
ROUND 2:
Back in the early days I never realized all the nightmares I could ever had would be caused by one game...
I have no idea how, but the Super Mario World catridge I got was accually Kaizo Mario! I spent countless days trying to beat it (savestate-free of course) but it never happened.
ABRUPT END!
now make your own!
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 06:41:02 PM |
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I, for one, had a lot of n-n-nightmares when I was younger. It A-all ends the s-same. I wakes up... early... Yes, e-early, in the morning everyday. Why? Nightmares. S-Scray nightmares!
I used to think about all the p-pain and... and... agony I undergoes, and how I spent countless days in t-trauma over these nightmares. It was ... was.. impossible to o-overcome, so I went to a doctor. He s-said "Why, these youngsters, they'll get over it".
I hate doctors now.
He w-was wrong, my fr-friend!
That menacing doctor! He u-used to think it was s-some kind o' Game, y'know. He was wrong. I H-Hate these damn doctors. They lie. Lairs, I T-Tells you...
A-Anyway, my issue ain't resolved. I-I have to see specialists.
Still havin' N-Nightmares, you see..
One goes by the name of Dr. Supero. T-That's what "he" says anyway. T-There's nothing Super, about that! In my Ooo-opinion, of c-course. Heh.
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| Last edited on 2011-08-06 06:42:07 PM by JDC. |
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 06:42:16 PM |
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Early in the night, I was playing a RPG game. I beat the final boss, eated some pizza. I wanted something better, but there wasn't nothing better than pizza, so I went to sleep. I had a strange dream, in it Super Man was being forced to eat vegetables by his mother. He tried countless times to run away and eat a good food, but he couldn't. It was a nightmare to him, I just heared him screaming, "no, no, NOOOO!". Then, I woke up. This day, I learned that eating pizza is the best thing in the world.
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 07:36:08 PM |
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Oh, coolio!
Last night some nightmares jolted me awake. I got scared from it, so I went to the kitchen to pour myself some water. Don't ask why, I like water.
As I was making my way back to my room to sleep again, I felt like I was being stalked. I sighed, since now I felt wide awake. Checking the clock I found it was really early in the morning, about 12:15 AM.
Usually when this happens I open my DS and play whatever game is in there, so that's what I did. The Game Boy slot was empty, so I played the DS cartridge game. Tonight it was Super Mario 64 DS, one of my favorite DS games.
I started a new file. I was just playing the night away. The hours that passed seemed countless, since somehow I was able to beat it 100%.
I went back to check the time. 12:15 AM.
What the hell is going on here?
To be continued......
HEY COOLIO 1900
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| Last edited on 2011-08-06 07:37:11 PM by superdragonyoshi1. |
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| Posted on 2011-08-06 07:45:30 PM |
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I was playing Paper Mario TTYD on the wii because my gamecube kept giving me the red text of death. I was pretty good at the game. Then I
thought of doing a pre-hooktail run of the pit of 100 trials. I had no guide to aid me but I thought it was easy. I stocked up on 2 life shrooms, 2 Ultra shrooms, 2 jammin jelly, 2 shooting stars, a thunder rage and a POW block. I also bought ev... ...Lets skip that, shall we?
Anyways, going to the PO100T this early in the game is a stupid idea, but I still went in. Boy, it was a nightmare for me, it was extreme fun for the enemies. The first 50 floors weren't too bad, but by the time I enter floor 61, it all changed. I had to rely on supergaurding to not only keep my HP up, but to also DEAL DAMAGE TO SOME ENEMIES.
I managed to get to floor 80, but the last 20 floors will be SUPER HARD to get through. I already lost my life shrooms, thunder rage, and one of my Ultra Shrooms but I still kept going.
Once I got to floor 86, I felt like I was stuck in a game and the only way to get out of this nightmareish game is to defeat bonetail. I ALMOST died at floor 89, but thanks to my exellent 1337 supergaurding skillz, I managed to get through. But... I knew that floors 91-100 will be a living hell for me.
The enemies consist of Swampires (which are impossible to lose if you have zap tap on), Bob-ulks (Not a giant threat unless something happens...), Poison Puffs (which are annoying), Amazee Dayzees (I heard they attack MORE OFTEN in the pit) and the dreaded E L I T E W I Z Z E R D S... This space trash can is the reason countless people never completed their pre-hooktail runs. Stupid stopwatches... This is the reason why I brought shooting stars in. Stupid line of 5 of them and the last one carrying a stopwatch...
Anyways, despite the odds against fighting these enemies, I managed to get to floor 99. Then, it happened. 5 ELITE WIZZERDS. THE LAST ONE HAD A STOPWATCH. My partner is dead and the other is in peril, so I ran away and equiped double dip. Took care of the elite wizzerds with 2 shooting stars and leveled up from the fight. THANK GOD. But I knew what was next...
The Bonetail fight was REALLY boring rather than hard. I had no items. I kept repeating this pattern many times: Fire drive + stylish x2, sweet treat, rather rinse repeat. After a boring 20 minutes, I did it. I defeated bonetail.
It took 6.5 long hours, but it was over. One of the hardest challenges of Mario ever is done for me. I saved my game after that. Now the game is easy as crap from here out.
That took longer than expected...
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| Last edited on 2011-08-06 07:47:50 PM by mariocool1999. |
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| Posted on 2011-08-07 01:49:54 AM |
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I hope it's okay to repeat the bold words more than once in each story, because I used the word "game" quite a bit in mine. Also, it's a lot longer than 4-5 lines of text, but even so, I had to shorten it quite a bit. I felt the length was necessary to give you the gist of the story. It drives me crazy when I can't leave all the details in my stories anyway. :<>:
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When me and my friends were in our early teens, we use to act rebellious and play a crazy game around 12:00 AM. Most every night, we'd drive around our neighborhood and find random houses filled with innocent people sleeping in their cozy beds and attempt to pull mean pranks on each house we found. Whoever successfully pulled off the most pranks before it became 2:00 AM was the winner. Now, I wasn't sure playing that stupid game for countless hours each night was a good idea or not, but I was a victim to peer pressure. I'd have nightmares every night of the cops showing up and sending me to jail for life. Little did I know that I really would soon get caught pulling one of our dangerous pranks.
I remember it all very well. It was 1:00 AM on a Saturday night when a cop drove by and noticed me throwing toilet paper rolls across a victim's house. He stopped, got out of his car and came over to me and my friends. He then got into this long spiel about how we should never pull pranks and how "super dangerous" they are. He took all of us back to our parent's houses and let us off with a warning, though I don't think we needed one, seeing as how our parents scared us far more than enough to stop us from ever playing the game again. After that, we realized how stupid it really was, and began occupying our time doing better deeds for the town to make up for all the damage we had done.
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| Posted on 2011-08-07 10:48:10 AM |
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Originally posted by Mr. WeegeeI hope it's okay to repeat the bold words more than once in each story, because I used the word "game" quite a bit in mine. Also, it's a lot longer than 4-5 lines of text, but even so, I had to shorten it quite a bit. I felt the length was necessary to give you the gist of the story. It drives me crazy when I can't leave all the details in my stories anyway. :<>:
The rules said 4-5 lines Minimum, you can as high above it as you want.
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| Posted on 2011-08-12 10:10:03 AM |
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Sorry to sound impatient, but is this going to be updated?
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| Posted on 2011-08-12 11:20:02 AM |
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Whoops, I lost track of this. Won't happen again!
JDC - Studders. Everywhere.
+1 all words were used +3 very original +2 Average length +2 words were set in a theme
FINAL SCORE: 8 points.
Mario's Hat - Oh no Superman.
+1 all words were used +3 very original
FINAL SCORE: 4 points.
SuperDragonYoshi1 - FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS ON THE NEXT EPISODE OF YOSHI Z!!
+1 all words were used +1 potentail originality +2 average length
FINAL SCORE: 4 points.
mariocool999 - Did that really happen?
+1 all words were used +2 fairly original +3 long tale
FINAL SCORE: 6 points.
Mr. Weegee - that sound like somthing from TV.
+1 all words were used +3 very original +3 long tale
FINAL SCORE: 7 points.
Meaning today's winner is JDC! Congrats!
ROUND 3:
I was taking a walk around town, when I bumped into my favorite person ever! It was Luigi, eating some mushrooms. they looked baked, like the kind that come in fish salads. I asked him what's up, and he told me that bowser had kidnapped peach again and was holding her in the real world.
I was instantly reminded of Megaman Wish Upon a star and went home to watch that.
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| Posted on 2011-08-12 12:20:30 PM |
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Don't you think there should be a scoreboard somewhere?
(I'll write the story later)
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| Posted on 2011-08-12 03:24:10 PM |
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Originally posted by Mrnintendorulez
mariocool999 - Did that really happen?
You know it. Most of it was true. Except for the part about no life shrooms. I still had both on my run. Lost em both in floors 81-99.
Anyways...
One day, I was going to the store to buy those white mushrooms because I don't have any left and the fact I don't want to eat those phalloides ones from the wild. But, all of a sudden, a portal came out of nowhere and I was sent into it.
Then, I came to a dimension that looked wierd. Everything was pitch-black. Well, everything had an outline that kept flashing red, green, blue and yellow. I tried entering a store to GET THOSE MUSHROOMS, but...
...I was kidnapped by what I think are ninjas. Then I woke up in my bed. Apparently all that didn't happen... ...Or so I thought.
EVERYTHING had that flashing outline and inside the outline is pure black. I knew I was screwed when I saw the 2 ninjas who got me and they strapped me on to the bed. Apparently, they were named "idiot" and "stupid". Then, they pressed some buttons and then came down a TV.
The TV turned on by itself and IT. PLAYED. SOMETHING. SO HORRID. THAT. MY EYES. FELT LIKE MELTING. They decided to walk away and leave me here to die. But something didn't feel right.
I heard a ticking sound. It became louder. Then idiot and stupid came back with a BOMB. Getting blown up is my second least favorite way to die. The ninjas tried to quickly escaped but I saw a switch and I pressed the button of it and the door fell onto idiot and stupid.
My straps broke and I quickly escaped the building by taking the short route; jumping out of the window. There was no window and the floor I was on was very low to hurt me. I ran very fast and then the bomb detonated. All it did is cause ANOTHER PORTAL to appear and I tripped and it sucked me in.
And then I came across a land that looked similar to the mushroom kingdom. I thought "oh no i'm not free yet." TO BE CONTINUED!!!
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| Posted on 2011-08-13 08:32:07 AM |
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Originally posted by JDCDon't you think there should be a scoreboard somewhere?
(I'll write the story later)
Scores are only for each round, there isn't a permenent winner when it ends.
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| Posted on 2011-08-15 02:34:52 PM |
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It seemed like any other day in the great forest. Me and my fellow mushroom friends were sitting at our favorite spot as we always did, enjoying the wildlife.
There was not much more we could do. It was then a strange figure decided to walk into our very home and kidnapped me and a few other mushrooms.
The kidnapper did something very strange to me, taking away all that made me an ordinary forest mushroom. He gave me a human life.
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| Last edited on 2011-08-15 02:38:52 PM by Senjan. |
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