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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:01:25 PM |
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Help me name it/the character please!
I'm looking for critique on my first level level design. What do you think of these: (I need to learn how to work Spoilers)
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(↑ Help with this please; it was the coin block points that were messed up)
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| Last edited on 2012-03-03 07:26:40 PM by RedstarPremium. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:02:37 PM |
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I can't really see anything. Are you sure you formatted your post correctly?
Edit: Screenshots are needed for me to judge this.
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| Last edited on 2012-03-03 06:03:36 PM by Veck. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:03:44 PM |
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Originally posted by Magnum Mario XI can't really see anything. Are you sure you formatted your post correctly?
No, no I'm not. How about I edit it and just give the links, eh?
EDIT: I fixed them.
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| Last edited on 2012-03-03 06:35:19 PM by RedstarPremium. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:35:11 PM |
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Let's say you're a good hacker for a starter, if you're a starter. Your OW is good, but needs something more. And your levels, sometimes I can see much big slopes, bad IMO. Also, did you drew these graphics? They're on a VIP style of lol, if you know what I'm talking about.
Originally posted by RedstarPremiumIt was the coin block points that were messed up.
You've edited tile 13 from GFX01. You can remove this or use I patch I cannot remember which...
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| Last edited on 2012-03-03 06:36:08 PM by Koopster. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:37:57 PM |
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Originally posted by AustinLet's say you're a good hacker for a starter, if you're a starter. Your OW is good, but needs something more. And your levels, sometimes I can see much big slopes, bad IMO. Also, did you drew these graphics? They're on a VIP style of lol, if you know what I'm talking about.
Originally posted by RedstarPremiumA little mishap that I don't know how to fix.
You've edited tile 13 from GFX01. You can remove this or use I patch I cannot remember which...
I am in fact a starter hacker and the point of the level was that it's name is "Slip 'n Slide (Horizontal)" and the next level is "Slip 'n Slide (Verticle)" as a running theme. I drew these graphics, yes, and I was hoping that someone would notice that I drew them to resemble the VIP series. Thanks by the way! (By the way, what is IMO? I'm new here)
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| Last edited on 2012-03-03 06:38:59 PM by RedstarPremium. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:41:06 PM |
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IMO means "in my opinion". Don't worry, I just noticed this days ago 
By the way, you drew amazing graphics here, I think you'll be a good graphics designer on the future.
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| Last edited on 2012-03-03 06:42:57 PM by Koopster. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:45:06 PM |
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Originally posted by AustinIMO means "in my opinion". Don't worry, I just noticed this days ago
By the way, you drew amazing graphics here, I think you'll be a good graphics designer on the future.
Why thank you! I actually made my own Game Maker game but that's for another forum!
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:48:08 PM |
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I think for a first hacker you're starting well. I liked the graphics there.
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:49:38 PM |
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You've got some good screenies so far, but your overworld looks like a redesign of the original. I suggest you change the general shape of it.
Edit: Nice graphics, by the way. For a beginning hacker, you seem to have some basic knowledge of how everything works, so good luck on your hack.
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| Last edited on 2012-03-03 06:51:06 PM by Veck. |
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:53:34 PM |
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Yeah I find the overworld to be the hardest part of it all. I dunno. I just can't find the right tiles. And that freaking points thingy! I have A LOT to learn about ASM also. I find it overwhelming and I wish I had "special" help; but oh well. I'm sure I'll learn with experience.
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| Posted on 2012-03-03 06:59:49 PM |
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Judging by the screenshots, your level design looks good although you can improve a little more, your OW is a bit square and I think you must add slopes and decoration to it.
Overall, it's a very nice hack.
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