Alright, since you haven't really recieved any feedback on Discord, I might as well give it here:
The pulse wave (or @whatever number you call these instruments, since I can't remember these as well as y'all do) has no vibrato, so it sounds a tad bit earpiercing. I'd say a weak enough delayed vibrato (something like $DE $40/20 $07 $40) would blend well enough with the song, feel free to change it to a stronger kind of vibrato if you feel like that's not good enough for you.
Now, another thing: where are the pitch bends??? The original song had quite a few pitch bends on the lead, so it's a bit too jarring to listen to without them lol
well, that's all probably; good luck