It's pretty hard to actually comment on this, as there's rather little gameplay. I do like that you're trying to go with a bigger plot rather a simple horror hack like the first Haunted Desert (which wasn't very scary, by the way) and I hope you continue it.
The overall presentation of everything is good, but very confusing at first if you haven't played the first hack. The hack feels like a weird mix of Chrono Trigger, Mushroom Kingdom: Under Crimson Skies, and game.bps (except without all the scary bits). It works out rather well for RPG fans like me. The attention to detail (parallax scrolling, scrolling HDMA) is also neat. There were a few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing too major.
For now, I can only wait for a more complete demo of this. Your foundation is solid and I can't wait to see where it will all go.