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File Name: Sponge
Submitted: by MANGOMILK
Authors: MANGOMILK
Type: Original
Purpose: Player
Description: i drew most of these in 2018, intended for use in a hack i shelved due to ADHD lol ^^;

but yeah, these are my Sponge graphics. everyone's favorite sad orange man is here!
Screenshots:
I'm rejecting this player on this Reason:

Almost everything on this player is fine, but it lacks the .palmask for the Yoshi's colors needed to be accepted (According to the guidelines)

Include the .palmask next time and we gladly accept it.
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File Name: UnderTale - Sans The Skeleton
Submitted: by Lost_Kiddo
Authors: Lost_Kiddo
Type: Original
Purpose: Player
Description: Sans From Undertale has come to kick some koopa butt!

This is my first hack for Super Mario world!

now if you have an undertale level in your hack this might be of use to you.

P.S i think adding Sans's voice when you jump would be a cool idea :)
Screenshots:
Sorry, But I'll have to reject this graphics on this Reasons

Major Reasons:

Consistency and Quality:


Consistency is something that you need to have in any graphic, and Sans' head fails in that.



Why his head is more big when seen from behind?



The style became different when he is watching the player (Also the Eyes are different from other frames)





Head Shape also becomes a little wierd on this frame



Rotation in sans' face feels off, like his head has done it, but the face didn't



Minor reason:

You need to work on how to make the Palette work better with your graphics, I know there are limitations on what you can do with players, Try experimenting with your paletts to find favorable results
that could work with the vanilla palettes.




If you need some feedback or help with your graphics, You can find it on the Discord Server, Either on #Graphics or #Showoff, maybe someone can help before you try to submit your graphics again.
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File Name: UnderTale - Sans The Skeleton
Submitted: by Lost_Kiddo
Authors: Lost_Kiddo
Type: Original
Purpose: Player
Description: Sans has come to kick Some Koopa Butt!

Please Credit Me if you use it for your hack!

Screenshots:
I'm sorry again, but i'll have to reject this graphics once more on this reason(s):

Consistency and Quality:

Even though, you fixed some the problems with sans' head, there are some other frames that need more work before it could be accepted.

Here are some examples of what it needs to be improved:

here the smile it's a little big for sans' face, maybe making the smile smaller could work.





Maybe work a little more on sans' flying frames, they look a little creepy (and be sure to check if you recolored correctly some of them)






Your graphic needs a lot of work, you need to check everyframe for any error, inconsistency and try to improve over its quality.

Please, try to get some feedback on what you can improve on this graphic, and ask some to try it before you submit anything again, it really helps to improve you skills.

Again, you can find help on the SMWC Discord, or the Graphic subforum.

Also, please update your screenshots if you had made any major change on your graphic (You uploaded one with the luigi palette, but 2 with your old palette)
File Name: Wolfs Multipurpose Tileset
Submitted: by Wolfguy423
Authors: Wolfguy423
Type: Original
Purpose: Foreground
Slots Used: FG3
Palette Rows Used: 2
Description: I made this for my upcoming hack and figured I'd share it :)

this is my very first tile-set so if there's anything i can improve upon just let me know!

Uses the FG3 slot and Palette Row 2.

Hope you Enjoy and Happy Rom-hacking!

Give credit if used please.
Tags: grassland
Screenshots:
Sorry, but I'll have to reject this graphic, this are the reasons.

Breaks some of the guidelines

Originally posted by "General Guidelines"

3. The sample level must not use ExGFX files that aren't present in your submission.


Your level asks for the ExGFX99, But I don't think your sample level needs the SP2 graphic if it is a FG. Please check that your level only ask for the required graphics.

Originally posted by "General Guidelines"

8. Please use the palette space wisely. Do not overwrite colors unused by your submission itself.


Your graphic uses row 2 for its palette, but it also uses 0,1,3,4... for nothing else, why? Please, only add the required palettes, not anything else.

Quallity

Your graphic needs a lot of improvement to be accepted on the site. You need to improve on the details, like the dirt (it looks too simple), the shading (the dirt could use a little of it), etc.


Optimization

For the most part, the map16 is fine, it could do a little better, but the part that need more optimization is the .bin itself, there is not a lot of graphic in there, but it definitely, it could be optimized a little more

Other Stuff

Try adding more decorations to your graphics, like bushes, trees, different kinds of rocks, I don't know, something to make your graphic look more alive, experiment a little. In this state your graphics looks too simple and empty. If you need some ideas, check other grasslands graphics, search some images, ask for feedback, anything that could help you improve!

The Graphic forum or Discord are good for help too.
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File Name: Super Mario Maker 2: Super Mario World - Raccoon Luigi
Added:
Authors: KaidenThelens
Type: Original
Purpose: Player
Slots Used:
Palette Rows Used: 8
Description: A version of Luigi from Super Mario Maker 2 I made with Raccoon sprites, and some extras as a bonus.

Requires MUCH Better Raccoon Patch.

Mod note: There is an Issue with the Patch in its current state not displaying some frames like they should, but it should not affect the use of this Graphic when the patch is updated in the future.
Tags: male, patch needed
Screenshots:
Upon being discussed with the staff, This has to be rejected on this reasoning:

This graphic it's fine on it's own, but with the current state of the Patch that is using not being updated, we cannot accept this graphic until that Patch is up to date. I'm sorry.
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File Name: Snowmbas and ColderKoopas
Submitted: by Starman97
Authors: Starman97
Type: Original
Purpose: Sprite
Slots Used: SP2
Palette Rows Used: 9, A, B, C
Description: Basically Goombas and Koopas but for snowy areas.
Tags: goomba, koopa, winter
Screenshots:
I'm sorry, but I'm rejecting this graphic, this is my reasoning.

- The hat on the koopas, it doesn't look quite good to be honest, looks a little wierd, In some of the frames, looks like a... sausage. Check for some references if you want to draw better hats.

- The goombas, they look so simple, Maybe adding some details to them could help them to look better (even adding 1 or 2 colors for shading could help).

- Only add the graphics that you said you were going to add. Why there is also an edit of the happy coin and a piranha plant vine here?

If you need help to improve, checking this place or ask for some advice on the discord server could help you a lot.
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File Name: Snowmbas and ColderKoopas
Submitted: by Starman97
Authors: Starman97
Type: Original
Purpose: Sprite
Slots Used: SP2
Palette Rows Used: 9, A, B, C
Description: These custom looks are for stuff like snowy levels for classic enemies of SMW.
Tags: colderkoopa, goomba, koopa, snowmba, winter
Screenshots:
Rejecting a second time.

Ok, you improved things on your graphics and fixed some things that I told you in the last post, that's good.
But there's still a reason to reject your graphics this time.

Even though, you made the hat look more hatty, they could look a lot better, using only white colors on the hat doesn't look that good to be honest, maybe using the main colors for the hat could work, and maybe make the hat a little bigger.

I really suggest that you look for more feedback apart from the one Im giving to you before uploading the graphic again, and if you have an improved hat on your graphic, I think we could accept it on the section.
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File Name: SMW Styled Shine Sprite
Submitted: by Murphmario
Authors: Murphmario
Type: Original
Purpose: Sprite
Slots Used: SP1
Palette Rows Used: 0
Description: An alternate Star sprite based on Super Mario Sunshine's main collectable. Useful for beach levels.

Uses no custom palette files.
Tags: sprite, star
Screenshots:
Sorry, but I'm rejecting this graphic.

The reason is that they feel a little too simple (And in a personal opinion, lonely) to be accepted to the section, they also feel squashed form the right side.
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File Name: Extra Grassland Decorations
Submitted: by MarioIsTheBest1234
Authors: MarioIsTheBest1234, Nintendo
Type: Ripped
Purpose: Miscellaneous
Slots Used: BG2
Palette Rows Used: 2
Description: There was some vanilla decorations used because I recolored and removed the eyes from the Overworld Big Hill and I also used the vanilla trunk.
Tags: big hill, extra, fence, grass, tree trunk, vanilla
Screenshots:
I'm sorry but I'll have to reject this.

Technicaly you made them better... but they lost originality because you decided to go the easy route and do a copypaste of the overworld mountains, and because of this I think they are starting to breaking the core values.

I'm gonna say it again, and please don't ignore it, Take your time drawing your graphics thinking on how can you make them look good, anyone can edit the vanilla graphics, search for inspiration, ask for feedback, etc. (The previous posts told you already) If we see no effort next time you summit this graphic again, it will be rejected again. Please, REALLY take your time.
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File Name: Super Mario world Styled - Sans the Skeleton
Submitted: by Lost_Kiddo
Authors: Lost_Kiddo
Type: Original
Purpose: Player
Slots Used:
Palette Rows Used:
Description: Sans from undertale is here to give some koopas a bad time.

includes:
Updated Sans Model
Sans has an OW sprite now

and that's it :D

If you plan on using this for a hack or such please give me credit!
Tags: player, player sprite, sans, undertale
Screenshots:
Ok, Quality has been improved, but, I still have some reasons to reject this player graphic.

The head and face are mainly those reasons.

-Sans' smile on a lot of frames is to big for its own good, it needs to be smaller to look better
-The shape of the head could be improved a lot just by making it more round.
-Needs more consistency on both of that aspects.

Here is and example on how you could improve this player.

To the left is your sans

To the Right is your sans with the things that can be improved.



You can use this example as a base to fix your graphic, and please, try to be consistant with your graphic, I have noticed that you have that problem with your graphic since the first reject.

Ok, now with the ow sans.

I only have 2 problems with this one.

Sans facing to the left/right sides is not really consistant with sans facing up and down, you need to fix that.



Also, I think sans is not green last time I checked, you need to make a palette for that sans too with the right palette, because there is no .pal for the ow player.
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Oh hi, welcome to my humble post of humbleny humbleness, I don't have so much graphics this c3 , but I have some quality gfx players (I think they are.. dont judge me.)

(Also, thanks to MM102 for his tools for custom graphics, they make my work so much easier)

Well, now to the show:

First, 2 normal custom players.

Mario Cave Styled

Somewhat inspired in cave story, I present to you my attempt to make a custom Mario graphic in the style of cave story.








Alternative Mario.

One day I was bored and without internet, so I decided to make a Custom Mario, maybe some day I'll make a Luigi to go with him.






Second, a 32x32 Player

Snas undertale.

I just wanted to do a sans just because, but I felt 16x32 it wasn't enough space for a good sans, so this one uses the 32x32 patch.










As an extra, you can test this graphics by downloading this .bps for yourself.
Click here for free bps and free nitro

And here they are , the download links for the graphics.

CS Mario
Alt Mario
Sans undertale from undertale

As an second extra, I have been remaking an Overworld form and old cancelled collab, with some custom graphics , just because I was bored.
Still incomplete, but I wanted to show it In some place. (not to be released.)



well, that was my post, go enjoy some other post and stuff and thanks for your time.

ñ.
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File Name: Mega Man X3 - Abandoned Factory (Vile Stage)
Added:
Authors: Erik
Type: Ripped
Purpose: Background
Slots Used: BG1
Palette Row(s) Used: 3
Description: The Vile factory background from MMX3
Tags: mechanical, ruins
Screenshots:
Obsoleted by Anoraku's Version, which is a more accurate rip

Backup is here
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File Name: Sutte Hakkun - Snow
Added:
Authors: Masterlink
Type: Ripped
Purpose: Background
Slots Used:
Palette Row(s) Used:
Description: My version of this pretty background, uses palette 1 (without overwriting the status bar colors), 3 and 7.



Have fun!



Mod edit (2019/02/16): the submission was unnecessarily using a status bar color. Recolored the faulty tiles so they'd not need that one anymore. Also added palmask file.
Tags: mountain, needs remoderation, snow
Screenshots:
Obsoleted by by Anorakun's version wich it has more details and doesn't ruin the layer 3 palette.

Backup
why this didn't append to the thread... wierd, i did the thing but it didn't.
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Ok, my first time doing one of this kind of thing.

I've been doing some character mockups of pizza tower on my twitter lately and some friends sugest me that I do a thread for requests of that style. Well, here is the thread. and here is some examples if you don't wanna search for my twitter.



Just some rules here:
1.- Post some references.
2.- No overly complicated things. keep it simple.
3.- Only one request per person.
4.- C3 ends, requests ends
5.- Only characters in simple poses will be made.

When Im done with the request, I will post them In a bunch and on my twitter.
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Ok, time to post some requests and bully some pepino. If yours doesn't show off today, tomorrow I will make it.

This one is for VinylHeart


Ayami, weon, I didn't know how to make her, so i made the best I could.


Heitor Porfirio, here is your pizza koopa


MoxieCat. you're here.


Pink Gold Peach, here is your monkey marsupial


Noivern, here you have your pokiman


Blizzard Buffalo, hre you have it, trasero rojo.


ninj, your man is ready


Sorry if I didn't make all at the moment, didn't expect this to be this popular lol. tomorrow for sure.
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Ok, second post, more request are here!

Deeke, your wacky cartoon Eszett



edgar, your oc i suposse, it's dificult to work with something so small.



danwaleby, think I did what you wanted, but if not, here, have a squid.



Ruberjig, wah.



Anorakun , here he is asserting dominance.



bebn legg ,eat your vegetables



Dustyized , here is your fairy anya looking girl.



Daizo Dee Von , Your yoshi Sir,



Dispace , heiho.




Rykon, please ask for something more simple, I cannot do that request, it's to complicated.
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Originally posted by Heitor Porfirio
I don't know how many request sets you're going to make, but what if you made Orange Inkling Girl, from Splatoon?


Sorry, but you're out of luck

Originally posted by me on the first post

3.- Only one request per person.

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