Okay, so I know this is likely your first hack (Well, first shown hack, at least), but I'll comment on the images. Don't take offense to them.
Originally posted by mario hacksimage
1st image: Okay, so the plot is that Mario woke up in a featureless void from the Mario as seen on the left, and in the second Mario we get a screen from "Mario is Missing"'s SNES intro (Either that, or that's a closeup of the Mario on the left) where Wart is somehow escaping from the screen (I presume that Mario just woke up and the screen was basically what was happening in his dream) and says this in a very unconvincing fashion:
Originally posted by Warthahaha mario i find a magic wand with can do all things what i want be real mwahaha try to stop me now plumber
Well, Wart sounds like he's drunk or something with his poor use of grammar (No, seriously, what he's saying sounds like something out of
Engrish.com) and making Mario fall for a trap while he's also using sarcasm, but Mario doesn't seem to know that. Here's a version without the grammatical mistakes:
Originally posted by WartHahaha! Mario, I found a magical wand, it can do what I want, including making me real! Try to stop me now, you Faucet Freak!
In the future, you may want to consider "hiring" translators.
2nd image: Well, I think this is Mario and Luigi's home since there's Mario jumping and there's the
M and
L symbols in the house, along with a somewhat eye-straining Background.
3rd image: In here, Mario becomes Error while he finds an E-Tank in a "Zelda II: Legend of Link" house.
Images 4 & 5: Your typical grasslands.
6th image: From the timing of your screenshot, it looks like Mario's walking on the air.
7th image: The same as before, but now it's Autumn.
So, in a nutshell, at least Wart's getting some recognition and is the main villain of the game, which is a plus for me, the graphics kind of clash in the 3rd screenshot -unless one world is planned to be NES themed-, and you should ask people for help with grammar and stuff in the hack, since it's clear English isn't your first language, not to be rude, of course.