Actually, this provides a good spot for me to put the bugs I found while playing the demo:
There's so many coins that they've made cutoff in the bush. These would do better in another area that I will mention later.
Cutoff caused by note blocks. You should use ledgings on the ledges above and delete this dirt. Also, the Banzai Bill jump is actually easier than it looked.
THIS is where you should have those coins. Nobody likes a blind jump!
Squishable Goombas are cool, but remember to also apply the patch that fixes this graphical glitch caused by them.
I'm assuming you meant to add massages later, but you would want to change those before releasing another demo.
Um... how am I supposed to get that? Maybe the coin cloud should be higher up.
This 3-up moon is rediculously easy to get. Maybe a Yoshi Coin or a powerup would be better off up there.
Cutoff. Is the pit nessecary? This particular area is lacking foes for Mario to destroy!
The fish fall through the water when Sprite Buoyancy is not enabled (they fell to fast for me to even get a picture of one!) Click on the Lakitu head to edit this setting.
Again, blind jumps aren't very fun.
All in all, this level is okay, but it would be much better if these minor fixes are done in the next release. You may want to have people test your hack before you submit it (use My Files for an accessable place to put them for your testers!)
I would offer to beta test, but I am currently too busy with schoolwork to test.
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