Posts by Lemon Productions from YouTube

I'll take your word for it.

Screenshots, please.

Then you should've made the thread WITH the screenshots; otherwise, this will probably get taken down.

If you've got visuals to show (screenshots, videos and whatnot), then post them as soon as you can and it'll be alright. In the future, though, you shouldn't start a hack thread if you can't show visuals right away.

(rationale: what kind of feedback are you expecting if you're just announcing you're making a hack?)

There's a cut-off in the 5th screen. The block of ? boxes in the bonus room looks pointless. The first few screens have cement block spam. It all looks kinda randomly placed. Screens 07 thru 0A look empty.
Also, unless you're using SA-1, I don't think there's any point in placing one Banzai Bill right after another since chances are only 1 of them would spawn.

I don't know what I expected, but not this, I'll give you that.

IDK why you made a separate thread just to post the screenshots when you could have just edited the first post of your other thread.

I think you should just change the zoom function back to 100%, or if that doesn't work, just drag it until the lower right corner fits into your screen and change its resolution there.

Did you try Ctrl + 0?
That should set it back to 100%

That image is quite the stretch (and I would know that because I sometimes experience that problem too)

Anyway, I'm not sure if this is your first hack (judging this was your first post), but without constructive criticism, this doesn't look relatively bad for a first hack.

Trust me, my first hack had all of the things that you shouldn't have in a SMW hack (i.e graphical glitches, goal traps, spammed cement blocks, stacking munchers, etc.) I just wished I still had it today

As for suggestions, replace those cement blocks with grassland tiles. In my opinion, cement blocks should only be used as much as question blocks or in 1 x 1 tile spaces (i.e. 1-wide walls or 1-height ground).

Also, you shouldn't place two Banzai Bills that close together since Mario and other sprites may turn invisible. If you're using SA-1, you should try without it so you don't abuse the amount of sprites you put in a level.

Overall, you're doing pretty good, just keep at it!

Yeah if you're starting now just keep practicing, you never start off with amazing level design, just try to inspire yourself on other hacks (or even games) and try to vary more so your level doesn't looks so... straight, add hills, pits, things that make the player do something other than moving forward other than enemies, just take off all enemies from your level and you will see there isn't really much stuff.
You should start improving with time, trust me my first hack was way worse than that.

Eh, doesn't look too good to be honest.
I would really suggest you to read through this to get started.

Whats the point of posting screenshots then if when people comment on them you just say wait till the level is done? Wtf

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No.

Do you really expect us to believe this is real when there's ingenious MS Paint skills w/ a 10 year old voice acting?

*10 years old voice acting....

ROM uploads aren't allowed here. I recommend removing the link from your post. If you want to share hacks and/or translations here, you should do it in patch form, which is acceptable.