I have to say, you've improved a lot since the last time I've played one of your hacks.
The demo was quite enjoyable to play through. The levels were pleasant to look at and I never noticed any graphical glitches. The Koopas transforming into fake Marios in "La Grotte Verte" was a nice surprise. You also warn the player beforehand, which I consider very good practice, especially since this is the first world.
However, there are still some fairly minor issues. For instance, the tutorial in "Green Island" could've been incorporated into a longer level (like "La Grotte Verte", where the double jump is put into use). The enemies coming out of nowhere near the end "La Plaine aux Koopas", even if the areas were marked by coins is a pretty bad idea. If anything, mark such areas by arrows. The boss of "Chateau 1" (a golden Thwimp) can be beaten very, very easily by just spinjumping, which is weird, since Thwimps are normally "immune" to spinjumps.
Now for some nitpicks: Your French, while still "readable", was plagued by spelling and punctuation mistakes. The word "monde", for instance, was misspelled as "momde" in the title screen. At the end of "L'Aventure commence", when I enter a pipe, I expect to come out of one, not just appear like that.
All in all, despite the minor issues, this demo is pretty good. Its difficulty seemed
easy to me, though it's perhaps a good start to a normal hack. I am gladly
accpeting this demo.
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