Okay, this definitely sounds better. Although, around 0:10-0:21, the chorus on channels #0 and #1 are still kinda funky, like it's missing some notes at first. While it can still have more sprucing up, it is much better than the previous version regardless. Maybe even close to an improvement over worldpeace's original unreleased version.
Would also love to see a port of Crazy Rhapsody if you could.