The original song is awesome. This remix is okay.
The drums are meh, original SMW drums were always pretty weak, but it's not like this song needed strong percussion in the first place.
The reverb definitely fits here.
The bass is a bit too high, but the instrument used for bass here doesn't seem like it was used for bass in original SMW, so I don't know if this instrument could go any lower-octave than this or not.
I was never a fan of the background noise of the song, so I think recreating that here is unnecessary.