I really enjoyed this hack. Good Musik, nice sections...everything you wish for a kaizo hack.
I haven't checked in this version, but in the previous version, there was a "softlock" when you entered the Bonus Game (100 Stars) the second time. The Pipe with the Muncher on top looped you to the same room and the only chance was to kill yourselfe which resulted in playing the whole previous stage again.
If you allready fixed this, then just ignore this commend
I also liked the puns in your hack - they made me grin every time.
I made a playthrough on the previous version, too, where I found some cheese. Maybe you will find some more parts which have to be fixed - maybe you allready fixed everything...
Nevertheless - this hack was very fun and enjoyable to play. Take your 5 Stars