very nice. had to lower global volume from [undefined (w225 iirc)] to w170 as it was fairly loud in game.
while i was at it, i noticed that you called label loops with a * command immediatly after without using it again, several times in the txt. this is pointless, as the following:
will produce the exact same result as:
it's worth noting that this will save like... 1 or 2 bytes at most, but it's bad practice to use label loops like that especially when you're not using them ever again. i fixed them all while i was at it bc it was very quickly done.
finally, i recommend you use some form of lower pitched @10 with strong ADSR for vanilla toms, as they're more impactful than @12s. good job!