Forgive me if this is artistic license on your part, but you've got some discrepancies from the original in the bass line - see red:
First of all, thanks for your feedback! Almost all of your corrections are right, I guess this is what happens when you try to port a song during finals week at school... The only thing I disagree with is the d4 you moved up an octave. I'm pretty sure after re-listening that it moves down from the g4 that's before it.
Originally posted by VecchiaZim
(The original bass is also an octave higher, but that's your call.)
Yes, I lowered it an octave intentionally because it sounded better with the @4 sample and balanced better with the other channels.
Again, thanks! I'll submit an update with the corrections made.