Song Name: Kitsune2 - Avast your Ass
Author: TNS
Reasons for Removal:
It's nice to see you're using the right AM4 header, but the rest of the song needs work.
1. The instrumentation is poor. @9 doesn't sound like the synthesizers used in the original. Why not research ADSR and use it with @1 or @11? That would be more accurate.
2. No looping at all throughout the text file.
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d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
This can easily become:
[d8r4^8d8r4^8]14, which can be further reduced to [d8r4^8]28. Learning to loop is key if you want to become a music porter.
Verdict: keep at it.
Author: TNS
Reasons for Removal:
It's nice to see you're using the right AM4 header, but the rest of the song needs work.
1. The instrumentation is poor. @9 doesn't sound like the synthesizers used in the original. Why not research ADSR and use it with @1 or @11? That would be more accurate.
2. No looping at all throughout the text file.
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
d8r4^8d8r4^8
This can easily become:
[d8r4^8d8r4^8]14, which can be further reduced to [d8r4^8]28. Learning to loop is key if you want to become a music porter.
Verdict: keep at it.