I didn't play the hack, but both of your screens look like blatant level edits of Nintendo's levels. People don't want to play Nintendo's Levels when they're playing a ROM Hack, they want to play entirely new levels. From what I can see, you just wanted to make the original Super Mario World Harder. People have already done that in hacks, and they have turned out to not be very good, since it's basically all the same levels, with a few added enemies or blocks here and there. Sorry.
So, here's what you can do. Clear every object and sprite out of a level by pressing Ctrl+Del while in Lunar Magic, and then maybe change the tileset settings (What Enemy Graphics and Blocks Appear in a Level) and maybe the Palette (Colors). Then, you could make entirely new and creative levels in SMW. Play some featured hacks, to get some ideas, read some stickies, y'know.
Also, welcome to Smwcentral.
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People don't like to see Barely Edited Levels in a Hack, People want a New and Exciting Experience.