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Mario's Short Journey - My New Mini Project - Testers Wanted?

Hello and welcome to my new mini project, Mario's Short Journey.

Difficulty: Medium

Progress of the Hack: 35% Complete

The Story is simple, Mario is tired of long and boring journeys, so he decided to find the shortest he could find, Defeating Iggy Koopa!

As of now the current exit count is 4, but it's planned to be about 7-8 exits.

The Overworld looks something like this. (Fixed by Ninja Boy <3)

The Player will travel in 3 level for now.

Field of Koopers (:)):

Clouded Perseption Perception:

And Thwomper's Fleet, Featuring Thwomper, the first miniboss. Can YOU find the secret treasure that lies within?

I hope you have fun playing these 3 levels! #smw{:peace:}

Lots of love, S1Z2 #w{<3}
I haven't had a chance to play the demo but one big thing that caught my eye even in the screenshots you posted.
Your OW is full of perspective issues and doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

Here's your current OW.

Here's My take on it.

Noticed how I flattened out the land on the bottom where it meets the sea. You want a consistent height across the land mass unless it would make visual sense for an area to be smaller, like a ramp leading down to a beach.

I expanded the lower waterfall out horizontally and extracted it one tile. It helps break up the flat wall which you had going on and gives a little bit more texture.

I added some variate to the lower flat edges this just again helps give some texture so everything isn't all the same.

The upper waterfall and the hill personally doesn't look quite right but unless I know what the top was suppose to look like it is visually ok.

Just thought I'd hope in and give some OW advice #smw{:peace:}
I'll fix those right up!

I kind of overlooked the perspective issue because i was busy with the levels.
I made like 30 OW maps (because I was bored) and almost all of them get thrown away or unused.
This one was one of my favorites, and I didn't want it to get unused like the rest, so I just copy-pasted it.

Thanks for this, I'll update the screenshots and the demo right away.

Lots of love, S1Z2 #w{<3}

PS: The top part isn't anything, and it won't be anything. This will be as I stated, getting to Iggy in the castle, and that's it. Short Journey huh?
Again this is a MINI project. I'm not putting maximum effort into it. (as I still have YASMA to handle, and that's another big can of worms).