Bowser Strikes Back (New level) - Works in Progress

This is a hack I've been working on for a couple of weeks now, and after finishing a few levels, I decided to post some screenshots.

What's been done so far:
-ExGFX and Custom GFX
-Custom Blocks
-Custom Music
-Custom Sprites

Story:
"After Mario rescued the princess from the evil clutches of King Bowser, the world was restored to peace. But one day...Bowser returned to the Mushroom Kingdom and kidnapped her again! But this time, he traveled to an alternate world. Meanwhile...while Mario was on vacation at Yoshi's Island, he received a letter..."

And here are some screenshots:

The main Overworld.

My Nintendo logo.

The title screen.

The Intro Cutscene Part 1.

The Intro Cutscene Part 2.

The rest are just screenshots from the first level. The BG Palette is almost 100% Accurate btw:

Ooh. This is new!

Hmm...I wonder what's in that door?

Hey look! A "?" Block. Let's see what's in inside!

It's a mushroom!

I wonder if I can get that P-Switch with this koopa shell...

Hey! It worked! I wonder what this does...

Cool! Free coins!

Uh oh! Gotta watch out for thwomps!

Yes! I made it through!

I wonder what this shell is for...

Nevermind, it's useless.

Time to go down the pipe.

I'll post more screenshots later. Tell me what you think so far.

Niiiice overworld!

I've removed my NoFades patch until I can find the brightness code for Star Road warps.

Thank you. The overworld was one of the hardest parts for me, glad you liked it.

an advice: change the title of the game: there is already a "bowser's return" hack.
anyway you are clever: you made a reasonable ceiling.
correct some 16x16tiles

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Originally posted by Dinomar

an advice: change the title of the game: there is already a "bowser's return" hack.

Are you sure? I checked both the hacks, and the featured hacks pages of this site, and I didn't see a "Bowser's Return"

The overworld is spectacular but some parts of the levels are cutoff. (like at screen shot 7)

Originally posted by MATTAN

The overworld is spectacular but some parts of the levels are cutoff. (like at screen shot 7)

Hold on. I'll go fix it right now.

Originally posted by Jimmy52905

Originally posted by Dinomar

an advice: change the title of the game: there is already a "bowser's return" hack.

Are you sure? I checked both the hacks, and the featured hacks pages of this site, and I didn't see a "Bowser's Return"

ARGH D:< i hate that Arbewhat!!!!!!!
existes already a hack called "Bowser's return" and Ice Man made it.
now there isn't anymore that hack because a stupid guy called Arbe deleted all our hack. anyway who said that you can't call this hack "Bowser's return"??

PS:
that hack, Bowser return seems that was resubmitted, but i haven't idea the why there isn't that hack.

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Yea, I made a hack called Bowser's Return a long time ago. Please change your hack's title, if you would be so kind. Other than that it looks nice, though, I'd suggest changing the item box graphics somehow.

Originally posted by Ice Man

Yea, I made a hack called Bowser's Return a long time ago. Please change your hack's title, if you would be so kind. Other than that it looks nice, though, I'd suggest changing the item box graphics somehow.

Oh. Sorry about that. I'd change it, but I can't really think of another Title that suits this hack. Any suggestions?

Oh and:

Originally posted by MATTAN

The overworld is spectacular but some parts of the levels are cutoff. (like at screen shot 7)

I fixed that part of the level:

Does it look any better?

Originally posted by Jimmy52905

The Intro Cutscene Part 2.

Aren't those note GFX from me? o_0 I don't remember submitting it...
Anyway, this hack looks very nice so far. Keep it up!

fault to Arbe D:<
well i noticed some thing:
1 screen: use cement block below mario

2 screen: Good no criticism

3: the same of the 1

4: N/A

5: correct the corner

6, 7, 8, etc: the same of the 5, then correct the grass: isn't coinciding with other grass.

EDIT: WYE ninja

Originally posted by WhiteYoshiEgg

Originally posted by Jimmy52905

The Intro Cutscene Part 2.

Aren't those note GFX from me? o_0 I don't remember submitting it...
Anyway, this hack looks very nice so far. Keep it up!

Oh. Sorry about that. I borrowed the graphics in your hack because I thought it would look good in mine. I can change it if you want, I just thought you wouldn't mind if I used it.

Originally posted by Dinomar

fault to Arbe D:<
well i noticed some thing:
1 screen: use cement block below mario

2 screen: Good no criticism

3: the same of the 1

4: N/A

5: correct the corner

6, 7, 8, etc: the same of the 5, then correct the grass: isn't coinciding with other grass.

EDIT: WYE ninja

1 and 3: Thank you for pointing that out, I'll try that.
5: Already did, just haven't posted a screenshot.
6 and 8: Once again, already did just no screenshots.
7: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=thread&pid=156226&r=1#id156226

Originally posted by Jimmy52905

Oh. Sorry about that. I borrowed the graphics in your hack because I thought it would look good in mine. I can change it if you want, I just thought you wouldn't mind if I used it.

No, it's ok - you can still use them. I just wondered where you got them.

jimmy, you 're ninja

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The red-ringed places has got cut-offnes

Maby the waterfalls aren´t cut-offed but it looks wierd.

Thanks for pointing that out. Hows this:

Better than the old one. Also, why the clouds are blue? I think they'll be better if their color would be white.

The clouds are blue because they share the same palette as the snow. And I couldn't add another palette because I had already used all of them.

The icicles on the cliffs of the ice world are pure genius

I must say. I like what I'm seeing here. Keep it up!