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Picture 1: All you can see is a flat rope and a Koopa. Try to pick a different level for the title screen.


Picture 2: Overworld looks pretty good, but personally, I would pick a different name for the house. Try telling whose house it is.

Picture 3: I know it's the beginning of the level, but try to mix up the land a bit. Put a bit of a ledge for the bridge to attach to, at least.

Picture 4: Not bad. Nice choice for graphics.

Picture 5: Still pretty good. Do you need to use the pipe to continue?

Picture 6: All just clouds? At the very least, give the cloud platforms some length. A good idea would be to change what the platforms look like and make some of them ledges.

Did you do this all at once? It looks like you started to get burned out at the end. If you end up doing something that looks like it would be repetitive (picture 6), go back later and change it a bit. In fact, a good rule of thumb is to wait about a week and take another look. That way, you can look at it with a fresh perspective. If you still can't find any improvements you could make, it's good enough to make your final design.

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The background of the first level interferes with the status bar. :/
Otherwise, looks nice.
The hack is all right, but it could use a bit of improvement. I like the overworld and the level design in some of the screenshots, but a few things could be improved:

-The title screen seems a bit bland with only the rope and the koopa. Something as simple as adding some decorations in the level shown could make it look better. ;)
-That screen of flat bridge seems a bit bland. Add some land and/or decorations! :O
-The palette of the fence in the second-to-last screenshot looks ugly. Change the graphics/colors a bit so that it uses more than three colors.
-That last screenshot could use a background, and a bit more than clouds in the level itself.

This hack has a lot of potential, though... Keep at it, and I'm sure it will turn out well.

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Good to know you fixed the title screen and status bar,but,as snowguy stated,you should change the palette of the fence near the yoshi coin,and add some background on the cloud/mini-ledge part.

Other than that,the ExGFX looks good,i liked the OW a lot,and making every level name unique is a good idea.Custom sprites too.

The hack is fine,just with some minor problems.Also,what does Kyougi mean (japanese noob detected :O)

looks pretty fun

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The hack looks good, but the title screen... only a sheless koopa and a rope? The ExGFX is very nice, and the level design is good. Good luck with this hack, Cold Feet!

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Workin' in OW request...
Currently attendind Scape Santa, but I don't know what to do...
I don't know if it's a good idea to put two Switch Palaces in one world.
I'll do it, just send me the rom and tell me what you want me to do with it. You should also include a text document about what ExGFX slots are being used, what custom blocks and sprites you have, and what ExGFX you want me to use.
that's it. A few castles and three levels. You should be able to do those without any problem. For example. Just take your time, (yeah, i couldn't believe i took the time with my Yoshi hack)

and plan out some level design, yeah me too, and well, create recreate.

And here's one idea just to be generous: a star run!
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