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My new hack: The legend of Pirra
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Oh yeah... I'm making a new hack called The Legend of Pirra.
STORY: Once upon a time there was a beautiful land called Pirra, where lived the Toads and Yoshis. But Bowser attached the land and kidhappened Peach, the Toads and the Yoshis' eggs. But a fugitive Toad could tell this happen to Mario. Our hero went to Pirra to rescue Peach and the others. The Toad says Bowser gave the seven little palaces to your children and took the Great Castle. Mario have to walk in uknown places to go to the horrible cave that Bowser lives now.

Demo.

World 1: Happy Island

Levels: ||||||||||
Overworld: ||||||


(Mario is entering a pipe in Happy Island 1)

(A Venus Fire Trap in the POW area)

(Sapphire cavern)
I'm very slow. If someone can give me some ideas, this will be very good.

I think world 2 will call Cactus Desert
World 3 the Precious Cave
and the world 4, the Birdo Lake

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Fierce Deity is cool.
Workin' in OW request...
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You cannot link pictures directly from your computer, you must use a photo uploading site. Like Photobucket.com

"But Bowser attached the land and kidhappened Peach"

epic misspelling, but it's only minor grammar mistakes.

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I wonder what a HFD opcode would do in ASM...
Sorry, because I can't work with PhotoBucket, do you understand???

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First off, nice plot. I like it, even though it sounds kind of simple. The title though is a bit confusing, since you haven't described any legend that the land of Pirra does have.

Also, what do you mean by not working on Photobucket? Photobucket.com is a free image hosting site, and you can create an account there to host images. Well, you should host in somewhere. To host my images and stuff, I use ImageShack</a>, though I highly recommend using either PhotoBucket or Tinypic, as ImageShack's hosting progress is REALLY slow. Also, I'd be glad to help you with names and stuff, though I have to see some screenshots of the worlds/levels in order to have a better idea of how they are.
Broozer, the legend says Pirra contains a secret mushroom that can destroy all enemies. But Bowser has taken it, and Mario have to find the mushroom if he wants to save Pirra.

Very thanks because you taught me using PhotoBucket.

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Please get some screenshots uploaded as soon as possible.

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If I moderated your hack, there was apparently a 90 percent chance it was rejected.
Now I started the 2nd world. The Cactus Desert.

Cactus Desert:

LEVELS: || (2/10)
OVERWORLD: |||||

Happy Island:

LEVELS: ||||||||||
OVERWORLD: ||||||||||


The map

Green Palace

Cactus ship final room.
I've taken some other shots like these:


Yellow Palace


Title Screen



Cactus ship

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Looks good.Nice choice of palletes in my opinion,and a OW that matches the theme.I just have one question.Does the title screen menu cut-off the "The Legend of Pirra" text?If it does,that's a minor (?) problem.
Originally posted by spacefan645
Looks good.Nice choice of palletes in my opinion,and a OW that matches the theme.I just have one question.Does the title screen menu cut-off the "The Legend of Pirra" text?If it does,that's a minor (?) problem.


I've fixed this and taken new shots. I'm working slower because my PC isn't working well (it's a laptop).



Some caves

A Toad House based on DW-TLC.

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Good to know you fixed it,and,i love that FG/BG.Are those caves based off of the ones on DW?Because i remember seeing them.

EDIT: I have the same opinion as Brrrrrzr,you should at least change the Toad House a bit,so it isn't the exact same thing as the ones on DW.
I've never been a fan of hacks that use the same graphics that SDM:TLC does - well, I mean, the Toad House GFX for example. The cave levels look alright, but the Toad House looks exactly like in Demo World - you should modify it a bit in my opinion, so that it doesn't look so similar to the houses from DW - I would suggest to use shop blocks or something. Oh, and also, the wooden floor in the Toad house screenshot looks a bit weird... I guess that's because the dirt isn't well-assembled. I would suggest to play around with the map16 stuff, to get a better result of the dirt thingy.

The overworld of Cactus Desert looks great, however. :)
Originally posted by Brrrrrrzer
I've never been a fan of hacks that use the same graphics that SDM:TLC does - well, I mean, the Toad House GFX for example. The cave levels look alright, but the Toad House looks exactly like in Demo World - you should modify it a bit in my opinion, so that it doesn't look so similar to the houses from DW - I would suggest to use shop blocks or something. Oh, and also, the wooden floor in the Toad house screenshot looks a bit weird... I guess that's because the dirt isn't well-assembled. I would suggest to play around with the map16 stuff, to get a better result of the dirt thingy.

The overworld of Cactus Desert looks great, however. :)


Thanks, Brrrrrrzer. I'll fix this, but in another PC (my one... crashed.)

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This looks like a great hack!
I REALLY like the cave levels. They look really detailed and well done.
Nice job Manuz!
I'm finishing the 2nd world now.
Here are new screenshots:


Cactus Desert 2
-> Credits for Broozer's Underwater BG.
Cactus Desert 3

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Wow, the new screenshots are great:) that volcano background is really cool, but the status bar has bad palette. I'm curious, are the jellyfishes ExAnimated?
Wow,the ExGFX in this hack is great so far \o/,the backgrounds too.I would also like to know if the jellyfishes are ExAnimated.

On another note,there's one thing on the second screen:Is there a white block coming out of the platform? O_o

Oh,the status bar on the first screen needs to bew fixed,as snowballben just said.
Originally posted by snowfan645
Wow,the ExGFX in this hack is great so far \o/,the backgrounds too.I would also like to know if the jellyfishes are ExAnimated.

On another note,there's one thing on the second screen:Is there a white block coming out of the platform? O_o

Oh,the status bar on the first screen needs to bew fixed,as snowballben just said.


Yes, the Jelectros (SMB3 jellyfish) are ExAnimated.

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I'm now starting to edit the Precious Cave (World 3), but I haven't taken shots of the world yet.

New shots: Fixes and news


Animated jellyfishes and mario status palette fix

Another palette fix

A shower-styled pipe!

Morton's castle (The Morton BG tiles are ExAnimated)

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Originally posted by Manuz


Glad to see someone using one of my newest backgrounds. ^_^

Anyway, the new screenshots are looking great, Manuz! However, in Cactus Desert 3, the foreground graphics doesn't match with the rest of the environment in my opinion - maybe you could use the SMB3 underwater set instead of the regular grassland set for underwater levels. Oh, and also, it's great to see that you fixed the status bar's palette - I know lots of people who say that are going to fix the palette of the status bar, but they do not fix at the end - and you're not one of those people. ;)

Also, what's Morton Koopa doing inside that rocky block? That's looking a little bit weird for me... O_o

Oh, and by the way, I think you should show off some stuff regarding your level design, as most of the people around here like playing hacks with a good level design - a video, maybe?
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