Removed: Todama Surpriser's Adventure by Zerio
Before I say why this hack was removed, please tell me this: Why do you say you misspelled "surpriser"? It looks correct to me. O_o
Oh, an interesting hack, but lacking at certain points. However, there was only ONE reason this hack was removed, but I will start by saying the minor things so you may fix them.
The text at the bottom is badly-colored. Please choose a better color. Also, I hope you fix the title itself in the end, because it honestly looks terrible right now. However, since this is a demo, it's perfectly fine. I mean, why finish EVERYTHING for a demo, right?
Hmm... This level looks familiar...
You put the Yoshi Coin on a subscreen boundary (move it up a tile to fix), so if you don't grab the top, you can get infinite lives from this one coin! Oh no!
Which I did, as you can see.
Also, we have some cutoff tiles here and at the bottom of that pipe.
........wait a second. Why does that pipe on the right look familiar? O_o
...Oh no... Don't tell me this level is...105...edit...
You didn't edit the underground AT ALL. :| Please, CTRL+DEL and start anew! Also, do NOT enter that pipe on the right! Oh wait, you HAVE to...
Congrats, you're trapped in Bad Bonus Land. You HAVE to wait for time to run out here to get out...PLEASE FIX.
Oh heck no, it is. Fairly obvious edit of 105 (YI1).
Please, use Ctrl+Delete to remove everything from the levels and start from scratch! Do not make blatant level edits!!
More Blatant Edit
Still More Blatant Edit + Cutoff Tile! You put a Turn block there, sooo...
More Cutoff Tile! Please remove the corner tile in the wall, it's not needed. Further more, that gray glop? That's lava! It's cutoff, too. But why use it? Bottomless pits work the same way, so just remove the lava, and leave it at that! It works!
This is the start of level 2. Looks harmless! But wait, you have a cutoff tile. Move the pipe to the left one tile, and extend the wall to the ground. Bam, you fixed it.
Oh...no...NOOOO!! Blatant Level Edit Deja Vu. (I need to stop ripping off of M2k2.
) Not gonna remind you this time, no need.
Also, NEVER use Message Boxes with a Layer 3 effect, like you have in this level- hit it, and the layer 3 effect vanishes. This is not good, ESPECIALLY in a level that has a tide, AND has you using it to get across the level, like in Mondo and Vanilla Secret 3! If they vanish...you must die to get out. This is never okay. Now, such a thing doesn't happen here, but you still shouldn't use a message box with a Layer 3 effect. Ever. (This includes the Layer 3 Smash thing used in Iggy's Castle and Bowser's Castle.)
Why do the Nursa-Nursas turn into Koopa-Koopas when you stomp them? (And the sprite that was once a Rex? You never replaced the squished Rex GFX.)
Ledge up top is cutoff at the bottom
Cement Block cuts into the wall, don't do that.
Message Box making Layer 3 vanish is back for revenge!
HORRENDOUS slowdown here! PLEASE remove a GREAT many of these sprites.
You put a TON of sprites at the exit here, but I got no slowdown. If you get enough on-screen at the end, you get glitched 1-Ups/Coin-Ups (Hidden sprites normally only seen through bouncing off of Wigglers in Forest of Illusion 1, and are always glitched) from the enemies. PLEASE remove ALL the enemies. Or just leave one or two.
Why is there a hole there? It's cutoff. Fix it. D:
More cutoff wall
Yoshi Egg. Do not use Yoshi Eggs with the Castle or Ghost House spritesets- they're incompatible...
Level loads too far to the left??? No, you're up really high. But it gives the illusion it loads too far to the left, so lower the player a good deal, okay? Really minor, doesn't hurt anything, just a tiny thing that irks me.
You have a "transparent" tile here behind that castle. The BG color changes depending on the back area color (I think) of the last level you were in, so please...just put normal ground tiles there..
Now, please help me welcome...
MAJOR GLITCH! *applause*
...Sorry, it seems the Major is sick. Oh well.
Looks harmless, huh? This is not a Red Screen of Death, but...oh no wait, it is. You get this screen upon clearing the first level (not the one that's called "WHICH WAY?!?!"), and after that, you can't enter any level again. If you do, the game freezes on "MARIO START!". D: Please fix now~
So uhh... Check if your ROM is clean. If it isn't, port everything to a VERIFIED clean ROM, and it should be fixed.
(Kyoseron, chime in with added info if you want.)
<Adam> I feel like smwc is a prostitute now, because we put up a porn ad for money