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Hack Name: Yoshi's missing
Length: 5 levels
Author: TheLordMax
Description: Very fun hack with sense of humor and not hard -it is an 5 level hack of Yoshi's kidnapp.Mario needs to defeat Ultimate Koopa and save yoshi .
Reasons:
Where to begin...
-Ugly black behind the title screen lettering.
-Spelling errors - "resque" should be "rescue", "meens" should be "means"
-Overworld is cut off in numerous places, tiles are misaligned on the western island, misproportioned, etc.
-Horizontal pipe cuts the vertical pipe and vine off.
-Incorrect ground corner tile used (left of the rope).
-When I got this flower, the block animation turned really funky. If you insist on changing the graphics, change the animations to prevent glitches - otherwise, leave the graphics as the original.
-The bushes to the right are cut off.
-Should be "Yoshi has been here. Looks like he is in the Cannon Creek".
-As you can see, I am being eaten by a jumping Pirhana. This is because the diagonal pipe you put in fired me directly into it. Move the pipe and the pirhana away from that position to prevent unfairness.
-Lag in this area. Remove some of the sprites.
-Vertical pipe cuts the horizontal one.
-Those Goomas change their graphic when they hit the ground, and it looks ugly.
-If you do not jump off of that Paragoomba, you will be trapped here forever. Add a cement block or something so the player can escape.
-White pipe cuts off the horizontal one. Also, huge lag here.
-This should say "This Lakitu is sent from U. Koopa. That means Ultimate Koopa is hiding somewhere."
-Use normal lettering for KOOPA, and not the ugly blue lettering.
-Lakitu head on the Pirhana Plant. I would .. strongly suggest removing that sprite.
-White pipe cuts off the horizontal one.
-Heavy lag here. Remove some sprites.
-I will let the <13 year olds here interpret what this palette reminds me of.
-This should read "Ultimate Koopa plans to defeat you at all costs - beat U. Koopa's army and defeat the roadblocks up ahead."
-Use normal lettering for KOOPA, and not the ugly blue lettering.
-Yellow pipes cut into the ugly dirt.
-Cut off corner to the left of the bottom ? block.
-Give the dirt a left edge tile - it cuts off.
-The lava waterfall is cut off at the bottom and on the left side. Remove it, or alter it so that it is not cut off.
-Randomly falling chainsaws are not a good idea.
-This should read "Yoshi isn't here. Looks like it's up to Ultimate Koopa's Mountain!" (Thanks for the translation Spade!)
-Fix the ugly KOOPA text again.
-Signs on the mountain look wrong.
-Fix the ugly KOOPA text again.
-Fix the ugly KOOPA text again.
-These blocks animate as regular turn blocks. If you are not going to change the animation, use the original GFX
-Random falling chainsaws again.
-This big mass of blocks is ugly.
-Large amount of lag here due to sprite overload.
-Blue Koopas get stuck in the pipe.
-Pipe tops are yellow. Fix that.
-Glitchy Koopa head goal sphere.
-Might want to play with this event, along with many other events. Most were glitchy.
-Should be "Ultimate Koopa is defeated and Mario is here. The mission to save Yoshi is going to be successful."
-Ugly KOOPA text again. Fix it.
-"saved" *
-"happily" *
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You really need to touch up on the design of this hack before you submit it again. Please read through the log carefully, and fix up all of the errors.