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Endless fanfic (The golden orb)
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Well, I've continued my interactive fanfic and decided to push it a little bit farther.

Rules:
1: The signs... () are for thoughts. ~~ are for moves. Bold is for narration and underline would be for meanwhiles or elsewheres, but it is not the most important point, as it is in theory also narration.
Exemple:

Bowser: I'm an exemple! ~punches you in the face~ (that punch was awesome!)

The narrator also thinks it was an awesome punch.

2: Do not be random or unreal. Try being coherent to characters' mind.
3: It is allowed to include persons from this forum, as well as characters from the Mario universe. Purely imagined characters are also accepted. That is, NOTHING LIKE NARUTO!
4: Do not kill someone just to kill someone. Some people actally wants their character not to die shortly after introduction.
5: Ending notes and such to explain briefly your move are appreciated.
6: If anyone wants to add a character to the BIOs here, PM me. This BIO section is meant to explain to newbes more details of the fanfic, it is therefore not of utemost importance.
Also, if someone doesn't understand something, PM me or simply ask.
7: If anyone plans in starting a new chapter or wants to change the title of the chapter, PM me (again). Remember a chapter is a full adventure tough, and that this topic is made of IMPROVISATION, do not give a title that could limit the possibilities. (anyway, I control it all!)
8: Before writing your post, say "I'll go on" and then edit your post. It will stop anyone fro posting before or after you by mistake. Removal of this rule. Apparently, editing a post and making it really long by editing it is considered illegal by the mecanics of this forum. It's therefore impossible to apply it.

BIOs SECTION:

~previously introduced characters~

Tama Yoshi: Slightly arrogant green yoshi, bearing a black cape, yellow shoes with little wings which are in fact peguasus shoes, allowing him to run at unreal speeds. He was raised by his father, but his father himself was killed by Palace. He therefore was raised in the evil hands of Palace, until he was saved by his wisdomful uncle Yoster. He also is learning little of the mind power fo Yoster.

Blink: The pink (I strangely alws picture her light blue...) yoshi. She is a princess of the yoshi kingdom, but doesn't act as such. Being one gives her multiple abilities that are unsuspected. She is also the very attached girlfriend of Tama.

Yoster: A wisdomful green Yoshi, uncle of Tama. He bears mind power, which he learned during his long life. He has a long beard. He is known by many yoshis from yoshis Island. He even has an island named after him (Yo'ster's island form SMRPG). He also constantly carries a stick, to help him walk or something. Yoster is technically dead. In his earlier adventures, he got killed. Except he kept an active life in yoshi's heaven. Eventually, Tama and co. got in touble and he HAD to leave paradise. Which he did. Strangely, a dead soul whom is not in heaven turns to stone. He did not. Rumors has it that the heaven's king Spiritual Angel wanted him to help Tama for some reasons.

Demonsul: A human, with a shadowy background. Although he wields the power of the Shadows, he has already 'paid the price' and often shows up to aid the side of good. He has black hair, and wears a black cloak that conceals his entire form. Under the cloak, he wears shadowy armor and during combat he wields a shadowy blade. Although he often has ideas, they often rely on blind luck, and he does have a tendency to get bashed around a lot.

Palace: He is a dark man, cloaked in dark, with a black cape, with his purple hair covering his right eye. There are also strange golden writings all over his shirt. He is what some calls a "calm master". It's a strange title to define a magician that doesnt use pure strength as offensive. Indeed, his two only main powers are to move objects around and teleport. He himself has some other magical knowledge. He can happen to be evily wise at moments.

Commander Yoshi: He used to work as the commander of the yoshis in the yoshi paradise. His color... I forgot his color, but I always picture him red/brown. He was a remarcable guy. Evntually, he became old. And in his latest adventures, he lost both eyes in terrible ways. He somehow retrieved one. He no longer works as a military yoshi, but he does still like adventure!

Spiritual angel: A strange being of incredible and unknown power. He is an angel with green hair and a rarely used sword. In the past, he did horrible things to yoshis. The "gods" then decided to punish him for his foolishness. He now is the king of the heaven of the yoshis. But from then on, anytime a yoshi suffers, he also does. There is no need to say this man has a dark heart. But Yoster has always seen him as a man with potential.

E.Gadd: (he plays quite a role so I thought I'd mention HIM) In this fanfic, the strange professor acts like a pretty random guy. (yes! This is a random character! Doing randomness with him is ok!) He actually really likes talking about his strange inventions. He used to be addicted to cheese and ice cream, bu we're over that...

~description of important areas~

Yoshi's island: The main and center area of the fanfic (for now at least) Homeland of Tama Yoshi, Blink, Yoster and more.

Yoshi's heaven: Where lost yoshi souls go, after their death. But there is really some sort of portal or something that connects it to Yoshi's island. It is ruled by Spiritual angel and normally, any souls leaving it will turn to stone. Similar to the overthere I guess.

ADDED BY DEMONSUL:
The Fire Wastes: A massive plain, once an ice world. After a meteor impact, it turned to a stony realm with rivers of magma. There are charred remains of various habitations here, and the entire landscape is covered in a blanket of dark clouds.

ADDED BY CONDORTALON:
The Barren Cliffs: An icy-cold crevasse devastated by the impact of the meteor. Magma still flows throughout the low areas, and anyone who falls of the cliffs is certain to meet a horrible, scorching death.

~new characters~

ADDED BY DEMONSUL:
Exemplar Templar: A holy knight of a destroyed religious order that worships a golden sphere. He is the last of his order.

ADDED BY GIGA:
Giga - For his appearance, think Knuckles from the Sonic series, but green instead of red. Also, he's usually wearing a green sweatshirt, and grey pants. His pants pockets reach an alternate dimension where he stores all his crap, like ammo for his bazooka, the bazooka itself, food, a toy mallet, and sometimes he even sleeps there. He's super powerful, and when he's in mortal danger, a pink shield comes up to protect him - think Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. He'll keep to himself a lot, and is usually the one behind any random unnatural occurance, like the meteor shower, but he's not exactly evil. Just bored. He has the ability to slightly manipulate physics, for example to create wind to help him glide, or move stone to his bidding, or give the moon the ability to be lit on fire with no oxygen to sustain said fire. About 5'10" in size, in case you were mistaken.

Corona - A catgirl, the same age as Giga, and his girlfriend. She's a fire mage, and can do any number of things with fire, including setting whole planets on fire at once, or absorbing fire to heal herself. She's so faithful to Giga that even if her life was saved by someone else, even if the world broke in two, and even if she would lose her own life if she stayed with Giga, she'd stay with him. The same goes for Giga about Corona. Corona is quite playful, and knows how to use just about every type of machinery in existance. Quite the genius herself. Being a mage, she's also quite protective of herself, and knows how to avert mind control - controlling the mind of the one trying to control her. It takes a while for her to cast that spell, though.

ADDED BY CONDORTALON
Pyra: Human, female, red hair, long, covering one of her eyes, which are red, wears a red t-shirt and black jeans with flame decal. Wears red fingerless gloves, and black running shoes. Tomboy. Controls the element of fire. She does not have a secondary element. Part of the E-Six. Can perform:
Flamebolt: Shoots a fireball at someone.
Blazing Wave: Slams her fist into the ground, causing flames to shoot up in a straight line.
Burning Force: Creates a fiery shield around her or a target of her choice. Can be used to protect and ally, or damage an enemy.
Firestorm: Creates a giant dragon made of fire, which flies aroud the area throwing fire everywhere. Ultimate attack.

Hydro: Human, male, blue, uncombed hair, and blue eyes. Wears a blue t-shirt with a whitish-blue long sleeve underneath. Wears blue jeans. Controls the elements of water. His secondary element is ice. Part of the E-Six. Can perform:
Aqua Bomb: Throws a bubble that explodes on impact.
Frost Beam: IMMA FIRIN MAH ICY LAZER! But not THAT strong.
Winter Wave: Shoots a wave of frost that freezes anyone it comes in contact with.
Tidal Crash: Shoots a blast of water forward that homes in on the target of his choice. When it makes contact, the water solidifies into a giant ice pillar, that eventually shatters, sending ice shards in all directions. Ultimate attack.

ADDED BY PIRATEYOSHI
Pirate Yoshi: A mysterious bandit with a very big criminal record. Has been charged with assault, thievery on many accounts and even kidnapping someone.
Wears a black leather cape, a black bandit mask and a regular (and rather ratty) pair of jeans.
He used to be the leader of a group of pirates that terrorized the universe, but all of the members were taken in by interpol except for the Yoshi himself, who is also known for his sneakiness.

Pirate Yoshi's Mother: The mother of Pirate Yoshi.
Wears a pink apron, a checkered shirt and an old-looking bonnet thing.
She's a very good cook.

Garras: One of the previous members of Pirate Yoshi's band of thieves.
Wears black and red armour with a helmet that shows only his eyes.
Is known for his brute strength and defense.

Kilk: One of the previous members of Pirate Yoshi's band of thieves.
Wears a red karate outfit and has a katana stashed away somewhere...
He is a master of the martial arts, particularily the kind that requires extreme focus of the body. He is the man for the job if it requires flips and walking on celing and stuff.

Kleetos: One of the previous members of Pirate Yoshi's band of thieves.
Wears a Mage's robe, with a staff possessing powers unknown...
He is a wielder of magic and can heal or cast attack spells. If he manages to gather enough energy, he can even morph things into other things.

ADDED BY SUPERBOWSERJR.
Yoshi86UP: A white Yoshi with a purple cap on his head. He feels very friendlish and very happy all the time. He usually goes strategic from shooting guns (Whenever he finds one or owns one) and all around of skills. He sometimes goes to find adventures, helping other people and takes his skills to the max in a computer. Also there is a rumor that he has 86 lives.

Super Bowser Jr = Bowser jr, Son of Bowser, he ran from home, don't upset him, he could reduce you to ashes or punch you to death, even though that is unlikely. He is arrogant and egocentric.

ADDED BY LINKSPETYOSHI
LinksPetYoshi/LPY: A blue colored yoshi bearing wings, which he uses to fly. He is the son of a orphan, although he has never seen his mother, he has sometimes seen her in his dreams. He is the ruler of a tribe of Yoshis living at the Summit of a Moutain. Just recently did he abandon them to search for his mum.
His specialties are...
Flying: He can use his Flying Abilities to send groups of enemys into the sky before burning them with his Fire Breath.
Shooting Fireballs: He can shoot Fireballs across the Battle field to catch multiple nemys on fire.
And Evading Attacks: Look above you Idiot.
He still can't tell the difference between HEROS and VILLIANS, guess it's lucky he chose us... Right? He was apparently looking for his mum when he met up with Tama & the others. And he HATES when people make fun of his size. He is afraid that by abondoning his tribe, he has lost the honor of being the tribe's leader.

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For more helpful info, you can always ask me questions (or look at the previous fanfic.) The chapter 2 hasn't yet been started.

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Our world will stop advancing once humans manage to create sufficient magnificence for a whole lifetime. Until then, I just create.
Awesome video game music on my youtube channel
I await the new chapter with eagerness.
Meh, I decided to start the big thing. Anyone can continue (but I guess the only one currently willing to make it's move is really Demonsul...)

We give another look yet on the Yoshi's island, approximatey 2 months after the meteor shower incident. Demonsul has left a while ago and was told still to wander around (meh) and Blink and Tama's couple had unpredictably been destroyed by Blink's will. She therefore went to yoshi paradise for little vacations. Tama himself wasn't really shocked of this.

Flashback!

Tama: NOOOOOOooooo! ~bangs his head on the wall~

End of flashback!

Tama somehow started hating slightly Demonsul, since it seemed Blink had fell for him a bunch of days earlier. But none really knows why Blink left Tama. WELL, now to begin some actual story, in yoshi's island...

Yoster: Practice, nephew, practice. Patience is the key!

Tama: ~is standing in balance on a spike on one foot~ Gee, I know my weak point is the fact I trip often, but is this really going to help me?!

Yoster: Calm down, don't speak. Be one with the world. Be one at all. Free your mind of anything that doesn't concern what you try to accomplish.

Tama: What did you just sa-- ACK! ~falls~

Yoster: Concentrate, little one!

Tama: Dang... I'm not getting bette am I?

Yoster: I shall utter no word on this...

Tama: I'm really that bad?

All of a sudden, the doors of the house opened. Behind it was an old man with barely no hair at all and some funky glasses. He had as much teeth as a baby.

Yoster: Professor Elvin Gadd?

Tama: Go away! I'm trying to concentrate!

Yoster: Your training is over.

Tama: ~whispers~ No it's not.

Yoster: What do you want, professor?

E.Gadd: I wanted to show you my last inventon! It's the most amazing thing in the world and will change the very meaning of life you think you have ever thought it had simply for the fact that one sees the invention!

Tama: Funny... I think I've heard you saying that a bunch of times before.

Yoster: What is it?

E.Gadd: Well, it's a pretty complicated thing to expain. You should follow me.

And they all headed to a great house which looked just like a theater, yoshi-style. With leaves and rocks and stuff, I mean. A bunch of yoshis had already herd of the news. E.Gadd stood on the scene and talked.

E.Gadd: I reunited you all to present my latest invention! It is... ~presses a button on his Ephone, creating the odd sound of a drumroll~
The shiny fancy thingy! ~grabs something in his pocket and reveals a golden shining orb~

Crowd: OOooohhhh! AAaaahhhh! YYyyyhhhh!

Older Yoshi: Ahem, but what exactly does it serve for?

E.Gadd: Uh, well... (that question had to be asked... crud!) This is pretty embarassing! I really don't know.

Crowd: WHAAAT?! This is not possible! How could you? What does that mean?! I want my money back! It doesn't cost anything to enter in the yoshi theater you idiot.

Other Yoshi: How is it possibl that a man creates an ivention and doesn't even know the meaning of it's creation?!

Other other Yoshi: Must I add that you claim that this is the most awesome etc. invention you hve created. How can you say that if you don't know how it works?!

E.Gadd: Well, I don't know. ...Well... It came naturally to me and I don't know what it does exactly, but it can do miracles! And I jus KNOW it's perfect!

Then, for a brief moment, everyone was so stunned that none uttered a word. Then, a small being walked in the room and claimed weakly...

???: Umm... Can you give this thing to me please? It... Is an order.

Who is this strange and not persuasive at all being? Is this really E.Gadd's creation? What does it really serve for? YOU decide!

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Our world will stop advancing once humans manage to create sufficient magnificence for a whole lifetime. Until then, I just create.
Awesome video game music on my youtube channel
Neah. I don't want to spoil or wreck this story. You go on ahead. By the way, you said that I want to do the ending, but I feel like not doing this fanfic thing. It's like doing a big, hard, imagine script. Also, I hate when new people tried to do it and you have to correct them. I feel like I'M ONE OF THEM! Until then, I'm not helping fanfic unless you make the script easier.

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News:
1: FOUR YEARS WITH SMWC! THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS!
2: Jubeat Saucer is coming! It's a great game in the series
SMW:
- Super Mega Mario World. Current level in progress: World 3 LVL 5
- STILL Doing a Let's Play on Facebook
SMK: Getting started. No data available
DDR: Files and installer are Here. Link to blog is HERE. Pack 8: The SMASHING PACK. PM me if you want to put recommended Super Smash Brothers Brawl songs so I could put into my list (NOTE: 1 character per song (I only have Mario, Marth and Yoshi done) so I have like over 30 more songs to go). Next song: A song from Snake
Super Bowser Jr, we just want less spontaneous plot-reroutings and insanity. Just practive or something.

LET MY CONTRIBUTION COMMENCE!

Demonsul was wondering through the Fire Wastes, his head lowered.

Demonsul: So many memories...lost, forever...

???: Stop, right there!

Demonsul: ~stopping suddenly~ Who said that?!

???: ~a bush stands up, revealing a camoflagued armored knight~ Halt, nonbeliever! Thou shalt not pass!

Demonsul: Wha---? Who the hell are you?

???: I am the Exemplar Templar, and thou are barred from this place, foul demon!

Demonsul: ~wincing~ Now there's no need to call names. Why am I barred?

Exemplar Templar: All beings of shadow are not allowed into the holy sanctuary!

Demonsul: WHAT sanctuary? This place is barren for miles around!

Exemplar Templar: The sanctuary of the golden orb was...uh...destroyed by the meteor impact a while back. I surevived by hiding under that rock. ~points to large rock~ I'm afraid I am the last of my order...

Demonsul: So I am barred from a place that doesn't exist anymore?Wow, that makes sense.

Exemplar Templar: The orb is special. When it is destroyed, the idea of the orb escapes and temporarily takes control of the mind of a genius, in order for it to be made whole again. It will surely return with time.

Demonsul: Why did I need to know that?

Exemplar Templar: ...I'm so lonely...

Demonsul: Oh come on! This is pointless. ~turns to go~

Exemplar Templar: Don't go! I need help to get the orb back!

Demonsul: ~turning back~ You just said it would come back on it's own, and besides, you said something about me being barred, remember?

Exemplar Templar: It doesn't matter what I said, I just need that orb back! It has incredible power, and it should probably be finished by now! You need to help me find the genius who created it!

Demonsul: Well, you got the wrong--genius? Oh, E.Gadd!

Exemplar Templar: You know who--?

Demonsul: Hell, this will be a disaster! Follow me!

They both set off at a run towards Yoshi's Island...

End of my go.

NEW BIO:
Exemplar Templar: A holy knight of a destroyed religious order that worships a golden sphere. He is the last of his order. *will be updated as character develops*
Exemplar templar O.o That looks like those lame word jokes >.> Meh.

Super Bowser jr. and how exactly is the script complicated?! You have Tama, Demonsul, Yoster and E.gadd. E.gadd brings out an invention which apparently origins from some higher technology that perpetuates through people's mind when destroyed!

It's that simple (besides perpetuate maybe). I basically jus don't want you to have that feel of doing the story while not caring about most details of the previous moves. For exemple, I noticed you go into using more your characers than others (well, I guess it's not that bad, we all tend to do those kind of things eventually)

WE SHALT CONTINUEST!

Back at the theater with the odd little guy

Tama: What ARE you?

???: You MUST give it to me please! I might use force if whatever might ensue wrongly.

The strange man was yellow in color, very small insize and kirby in shape. He seemed polite with his elegant little mustache.

Tama: What the heck! I'm twice your size!

Yoster: Tama... I think we might all be underestimating our foe right now.

???: You probably are all right. I need the ... "shiny fancy thingy". Now! ...Please. I don't want to push you over or anything. You must obey. (Gah, I'm so bad at this...)

E.Gadd: Why, here it is! ~hands the shiny thingy something~

Tama: NO!

Tama ran to the orb before a finger of the strange man touched it. He then backed of a few steps

Tama: There's no way I'm seeing any of you getting orders from a something like this! Even Egads.

E.Gadd: Ahem, E.Gadd.

???: (I am getting nowhere. Maybe I have to use of a different approach.) Hmm, excuse me for the rudeness. My names are Finey, Bigs, Taylesh and Unleashed. You can call me Finey.

Tama: Umm... I'm Tama.

Finey: I know. No that we are friends, can you pass me the orb.

Tama: Oh, SURE.

Finey: Thanks. ...Well?

Tama: ~looks annoyed at the ball shaped man~ It was sarcasm.

Finey: Sarcasm isn't perfectly ethic to the politness protocol isn't it?

All: ...

Finey: Give that ball to me OR ELSE!

Yoshi in crowd: Oohh! I'm scared!

Yoster: Wait, didn't you just say you had nameS?

Finey: Well of crouse sir. I must say I have multiple identities. I have quite a stack of personnalities also. I currently am known as Finey.

Tama: So what the heck are you? A spy agent?

Finey: Heh, Not exacty. I actually--

All of a sudden, the doors slamed open and Finey who was standing next to them and light in weight was sent flying away. Demonsul and the Exemplar Templar entered the room.

Demonsul: There! HE has it! ~points E.Gadd who was still carrying the orb~

And E.Gadd did a surprised face. Have you ever seen a movie called awesome center redux? If yes, do you remember the first face the guy did? Now, Think about E.Gadd doing that face. Sigh... So much for a little description.

E.Gadd: My orb?

Exemplar Templar: The Golden orb! ~bows to the golden orb then grabs it furiously~ Thanks, perpetuer. Now, off I go!

Demonsul: Wait... That's really all?

Tama: Umm... Demonsul?

Exemplar Templar: Why, yes! My job is done. I bear no reasons to carry on with a dark hearted being like you. ~coughs~

Demonsul: That's all you do? Wha a lame life you have.

Exempla Tempar: Well, actually--

There was a deep noise coming from the where mr. Finey had been propeled.

Finey: YOU GIVE THE ORB TO MEH!

Quick reunion with Demonsul and Tama... and Yoster... and E.Gadd.
Then, There is also this mr Finey. After being smashed the crud out of the room, he doesn't see polite anymore. What is he? YOU DECIDE!


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Our world will stop advancing once humans manage to create sufficient magnificence for a whole lifetime. Until then, I just create.
Awesome video game music on my youtube channel
Oh my. It reminds me like Dooplis in Paper Mario! Or Tac from Kirby Super Star........... Wait!

After that escape (I HATE LITERATURE!), even though Mr. Finey took the orb in MAGIC, he also teleported himself and also planted a teleport block to Demonsul and Tama (I will suck(Maybe) a lot)

E.gadd: Lets find him while I carry the- wait... ~looks at his bare hands~ well mind my dear. Mr. Finey is a criminal mastermind. What will happen to us. Discuss friend- Were are they.

As they teleported in a familiar place, Mr. Finey has turned into Bigs! He looks like a bear with maneuver skin. That smells like Justin from Total Drama Island (People who didn't know him or the show, I'll tell you. Justin is very popular, if you look at his body or smell his body, you will be controlled by him. Now, shall we continue?). Tama and Demonsul walked together in an awkward way

~Hotel Mario Music (HEY!!!) plays~
~Tama and Demonsul walks together on a walkway~
~Bigs laughs and hides~

Demonsul: Nice of E.gadd who will invite us over for a picnic gay Tama?

Tama: I hope you make- Hey? What happened to us? Were are we? Were is the orb? ~Looks at Demonsul awkwardly and kicks his chin~ WAKE UP DEMONSUL!

Demonsul ignores Tama and continues being like Mario in Hotel Mario

Bigs: With my scent, I could control Demonsul and trick Tama as I teleport somewhere else.

~Demonsul keeps ignoring Tama as Tama keeps kicking at him~

Tama: ...Finely (He would change in person) How could I get this boy into shape.. .. .. ..~IDEA~

~Tama picks up a posion mushroom and gave it to Demonsul~

Demonsul: We gotta find the- Ackh! ~Chokes~

~Tama gives the 1up mushroom~

Demonsul: What happened? Were are we?

Tama: Elementary my dear. Elementary.

~Demonsul is puzzled~

Demonsul: Can we get back and were are we?

Tama: Were in the game Hotel Mario. We can't get back. ~Looks everywhere~ Hey, is that a pipe? Lets go!

Tama and Demonsul came into the pipe back into the real place. But found themselves into Eggman's castle. How did they get here in the first place? When will they get back? How about the orb? The next episode will come next.

I hope, I HOPE It is good.

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News:
1: FOUR YEARS WITH SMWC! THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS!
2: Jubeat Saucer is coming! It's a great game in the series
SMW:
- Super Mega Mario World. Current level in progress: World 3 LVL 5
- STILL Doing a Let's Play on Facebook
SMK: Getting started. No data available
DDR: Files and installer are Here. Link to blog is HERE. Pack 8: The SMASHING PACK. PM me if you want to put recommended Super Smash Brothers Brawl songs so I could put into my list (NOTE: 1 character per song (I only have Mario, Marth and Yoshi done) so I have like over 30 more songs to go). Next song: A song from Snake
Demonsul: What? What on earth?!

Tama: I don't think so...

E.Gadd: As far as I can tell, that Finey character teleported the orb out of my hands and escaped!

Tama: So why are we here?

E.Gadd: Umm...I'm guessing he trapped us here so we couldn't chase him.

???: Halt, intruder! Stop your intruding right there!

Demonsul: Shut up, Templar...

Exemplar Templar: You again! ~has his hands as if he is holding the orb~ Get away, foul shadow! The orb is ours, and needs protecting!

E.Gadd: What orb?! It got teleported out of your hands while you were taking it from me...

Exemplar Templar: The orb is in my hands! It's golden glow radiates for miles--

Tama: ~whispering to E.Gadd and Demonsul~ I think he's gone insane.

E.Gadd: That or Finey is controlling him like he did Demonsul...

Demonsul: ...it's a very strong mind control method! We need to break him out of it!

Tama: Why? He will be nothing but a hindrance...

Demonsul: He knows the most about the orb. He might be important.

E.Gadd: I suggest we keep the maniac.

Tama: ...fine. Any ideas on how we free him? I don't see any mushrooms around here...

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Will they free Exemplar Templar? Will Finey/Bigs take any further action against them? Will Eggman notice they are in his castle? Find out next time!

End of my *quick* go. It may be edited to be longer later if nobody else replies.
Meh. I don't really like the fact we're in eggman's castle since it breaks a rule. But I would be much too evil to ignore both those posts -.- Also, I have never played hotel mario. Is this that horrible game that once was reviewed by AVGN? I think...

Back at EggMan's fortress...

Yoster: I have an idea!

All: ~looks at Yoster in surprise~

Tama: You came too?

Yoster: Well, I also was in the theater where all of you got struck by madness. This Finey... or Bigs or whatever character is pretty tough. He seems like some sort of shape shifting character like Mimi or Doopliss. Except there's something more to it... It doesn't seem like he mimics others. It seems he has his own individual shapes! There is also this strange fact that he did not shapeshift until he really got angry!

Demonsul: Maybe he just waited for the tactical moment. Or maybe his MOOD affects his shape...

Yoster: Maybe. He really did seem angry.

Exemplar Templar: ~pokes Demonsul in disgust~ You shall not interfere!

Demonsul: CAN YOU DO SOMETHING ABOUT HIM?!

Yoster: Hmm... Well...

Tama: Wait! I've an idea! ~whacks the heck out of the Templar who immediatly fell KO on the floor~ There.

Demonsul: ~chuckles~ And how is THAT going to help?

Tama: Well, remember when YOU "died" because of the mushroom? You "revived" as non-possessed. So probably the weirdo guy can only really take control of someone when he is countiount or something.

Demonsul: Well, it means it's going to be someone else's turn.

E.Gadd: HOW?! WHY?! ...WHO WHEN THEN?!

They all looked at E.Gadd in comprehension.

Tama: Cool. The weirdo has it! And it doesn't make a damn difference!

Demonsul: One problem solved. We must find Bigs.

Yoster: There are very good chances that this isn't even Eggman's base. Maybe it's just an illusion from Bigs' great plans of confusing us.

Demonsul: Umm... I think we really are in Eggman's base. ~points at a blue man which was shooting lasers at some robots in the background~.

Tama: But that doesn't help us. We need to find Bigs! He could be ANYWHERE! Don't you have a radar that detects weirdo, E.Gadd?

E.Gadd: I LIKE RADARS! THEY TASTE GOOD! ESPECIALLY ON TUESDAY MORNING FOR DINER! THEY REALLY CONTAIN THEIR VALUE OF VITAMIN C!

Tama: How is it that when we need him, as astoundingly ipossible as it seems, he's possessed?!

Bigs (elsewhere): YOU HAS MADE ME ANGRY! YOU PAY FOR LAUGH AT MEH!

Yoster: Something's coming...

E.Gadd is madder than ever, and everyone is stuck in this other world which they know practically nothing of. They must find Bigs somehow! How will they? YOU DECIDE!

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Hey, I'm back again. Promise to actually come back to the thread this time. I'll give bios for my characters first, then continue the story.
Also, I'd really like it if you guys didn't start controlling them out of the blue, without my permission. =\ I won't do it to your characters.

Giga - For his appearance, think Knuckles from the Sonic series, but green instead of red. Also, he's usually wearing a green sweatshirt, and grey pants. His pants pockets reach an alternate dimension where he stores all his crap, like ammo for his bazooka, the bazooka itself, food, a toy mallet, and sometimes he even sleeps there. He's super powerful, and when he's in mortal danger, a pink shield comes up to protect him - think Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. He'll keep to himself a lot, and is usually the one behind any random unnatural occurance, like the meteor shower, but he's not exactly evil. Just bored. He has the ability to slightly manipulate physics, for example to create wind to help him glide, or move stone to his bidding, or give the moon the ability to be lit on fire with no oxygen to sustain said fire.

Corona - A catgirl, the same age as Giga, and his girlfriend. She's a fire mage, and can do any number of things with fire, including setting whole planets on fire at once, or absorbing fire to heal herself. She's so faithful to Giga that even if her life was saved by someone else, even if the world broke in two, and even if she would lose her own life if she stayed with Giga, she'd stay with him. The same goes for Giga about Corona. Corona is quite playful, and knows how to use just about every type of machinery in existance. Quite the genius herself. Being a mage, she's also quite protective of herself, and knows how to avert mind control - controlling the mind of the one trying to control her. It takes a while for her to cast that spell, though.

And now for the story!

Out in space, before this even started...

Giga: "Corona! Are you okay?!" ~Giga spaceswam as fast as he could towards Corona.~
Corona: "Hhh... I think so. I..." ~Corona falls limp.~
Giga: "Gah. Corona!" ~Giga starts shaking Corona, trying to wake her. After a while, with no success, he stops, and starts to spaceswim towards Earth.~ "I'll get you healed, don't worry!"

And then, after Demonsul and Exemplar Templar left the Fire Wastes...

~Giga and Corona exit the atmosphere, and freefall to the earth. Giga is trying his best to get enough wind to slow their fall.~
Giga: "Not enough...!" ~Giga then gets an idea. He falls until he almost reaches the ground, which Yoster predicted - and that's how long the fall took, too. He then uses the game mechanic all echidna are programmed with - gliding! And by gliding, he resets his vertical speed. Sorta like slowing your fall with a cape in Mario World. Giga slides across the ground a bit, Corona on his back.~ "Here we go... Corona?"
Corona: "Mm... Giga...?" ~Corona opens her eyes.~ "...Where are we?"
Giga: "The site of the moon falling, I think."
Corona: ~She opens her eyes completely.~ "Ooh. Mind if I jump in your pocket for a bit?"
~Giga puts a quizzical glance on his face.~
Corona: "I wanna take a picture of this. Also, hunger.
Giga: "Alright, you go ahead. I'll wait." ~Corona climbs into Giga's dimensional pocket. Giga takes a look around him, and notices a large evil-villain type base. Eggman's fortress.~ "...Er? That shouldn't even be IN this dimension. I guess we're gonna do something about it."

End post. =D

This is a thing that's happening, now. Achievements in old video games.
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Inside the fortress, which for plothole reasons was teleported here from a parallel dimension by Bigs...

Demonsul: What?!

Tama: ~pointing towards camera~ It's HIM!

Camera rotates around to reveal...BIGS!

Bigs: You won't like me when I'm angry! [/crappyquote]

Exemplar Templar: ~getting up~ ...wha?

E.Gadd: Quick! We need a way to clam him down!

Demonsul: Calming down...Andy the bomb...RvB! Professor, do you have any more electric ice cream?

E.Gadd: What do you mean? I quit that vile substance, it is a nasty drug that causes all kinds of...

Everyone else: ~meaningful look~

E.Gadd: ...Here's some.

Demonsul pulls out a black box from under his cloak. It has 'Glastic Devices Ltd.' written on it. He sticks the ice cream into the battery slot and tunes a dial...and a projection comes up of various Halo characters running round in a canyon!

Box: ~humorous Red vs Blue script~

Bigs: Huh? He...heheh...hahahaHAHAHA!!! ~collapses on floor laughing~

Demonsul: Let's see how long he can hold his angry form while in hysterics...

Tama: What gave you that idea?

Demonsul: When in doubt, use the internet.

Indeed, Bigs is gradually morphing into a different form...Taylesh! As he morphs, Eggman's castle gradually returns to it's alternated dimension, leaving everyone in the Fire Wastes. Taylesh looks like...

Tama: He looks like a Yoshi!

Yoster: No, look carefully, his spikes are sharper and he has spiky gloves.

Demonsul: I've not seen many all-white Yoshis before, either...

Taylesh: Hehehe...what? why am I stuck in this form again?!..MUAHAHAHA! You will all die, anyway! Feel the power!

Taylesh disappears in a puff of smoke, and the earth shakes a power builds up...suddenly, a bolt of lightning discharges into Exemplar Templar's shiny metal armor

Exemplar Templar: YEEOW! ~dazed~...I'm okay...

Tama: Thunder attack! Scatter!

E.Gadd: Technically it's a lightning--

Another bolt misses E.Gadd by millimeters

E.Gadd: Thunder attack! Scatter!

They all start dodging about, avoiding lightning strikes

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Our heroes are under attack by Finey's third form! Will Finey revert to an earlier form to make another attack? Will we see the dreaded Unleashed form? How long can our heroes resist the lightning? Will Giga do anything to help?

Find out next time in THE ENDLESS FANFIC!


End of my go.
~Giga is still looking over at the base, which disappeared. He scratches his head.~
Giga: "Er?"
~Corona pops her head out of Giga's pocket.~
Corona: "What happened?"
Giga: "...There was a giant technological base over there, and it just disappeared." ~Giga dodges some lightning.~ "And a fight's going on, with projectile attacks. Let's check it out."
Corona: "Right-o. Tell me who to set fire to when you figure it out, okay?"
Giga: "Gotcha."

End.

This is a thing that's happening, now. Achievements in old video games.
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[19:24:05] <~Impetus> i only got staff because i own # and BotServ on irc
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E.Gadd says ice cream = drugs? XD
Corona has some sort of illness, which isn't that obvious. Meh.

Back to the "fighting site"...

E.Gadd: AHHHH! I need a protection! There's nothing to take cover from those thunder bolts! *!* ~stops and looks at Tayles while doing some awful stretched smile then remains still~

Tama: ~dodges a thunder bolt barely by hiding behind a little bush which catches immediately on fire~ Crud! What the heck! ~jumps to dodge yet another thunder bolt~ I can't dodge them all! ~notices E.Gadd~ What the heck are you doing?! RUN AWAY YOU IDIOT! WHY ARE YOU STANDING STILL LIKE THAT!?

E.Gadd: Shhh... ~mutters~ If I don't move he doesn't know exist!

Demonsul: Those are for beasts you idiot! That man has intelligence!

E.Gadd: What does that mean...? OH NOES! ~throws himself on the floor to avoid an upcoming bolt, but strangely enough, the lens of his huge, ulgy glasses deflected it in the woods~

Giga had had the time to run to where the lightnings were coming from. The deflected bolt went to an inch of him before he even noticed there was one.

Giga: WOAH! Missed!

The bolt that had gone loose in the jungle had hit a tree, which burnt it's base and made it fall right on Giga.

Giga: Grw! ~is flattened by the tree, then lifts it off of him to stand up again~ Now WHAT?! WHO DID THIS?!

All pointed to Taylesh which was flying in the air, throwing bolts in all directions while laughing maddly.

Giga: Corona...

Corona: ~Pops her head out of the pocket~ What now?

Giga: HIM!

Corona: Oh! Cool! ~she barely pointed Taylesh that he was already running in circle desperatly~

Tayler: WATER! AHAHAHA! It burns! AHAHAHA! No, seriously! HAHA! Why the heckam I laughing!? Ha...

E.Gadd: Here I am! ~picks a ball the size of a baseball ball from his pocket and throws it at Taylesh, on impact, the ball generated 10 liters of water which lit off Taylesh~

Tama: Why did you do that!?

When the steam wore off, Taylesh was in fact Finey.

Finey: Thanks a lot.

Tama: Oh... alright.

Giga: Can anyone explain me... No, it doesn't matter. I need a healer.

Everyone then realized in surprise who was in fact the man that had seemingly set fire to their foe. They ddn't know wheither to feel terrorized by the being that had almost ruined their whole island or friendly to the one who had just saved them... Finey was back to his not dangerous form. But does that make him less of a treat? What will finally happen of that golden orb?! YOU decide!!111one!

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Our world will stop advancing once humans manage to create sufficient magnificence for a whole lifetime. Until then, I just create.
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Originally posted by Giga
Also, I'd really like it if you guys didn't start controlling them out of the blue, without my permission. =\ I won't do it to your characters.
Also, nobody really knows that it was Giga who was punching meteors at the planet. Anyways...

Corona: "Why would you need a healer, Giga?"
Giga: "Well, you fell unconscious earlier, when our spaceship was attacked. Did eating make you feel better?"
Corona: "Much!" =3 ~Corona climbs out of Giga's pocket, stands up straight, and kisses Giga on the cheek.~
Giga: "Ehe..." ~^w^
Finey: "Stop ignoring me." >_<
Giga: "First off, tell me and Cor who the hell you are, and why you almost threw a tree at me."
Corona: "Oh, I have to get something. Be right back, kay~?" ~Corona climbs back into Giga's pocket.~
Tama: "Well... Do you want the whole story, or just his reason?" ~Tama points at Finey.~
Giga: "May as well give me the whole story."

And so he did. Giga gains the knowledge of what has happened to the group so far.

Giga: "Huh. Well then." ~Corona climbs back out of Giga's pocket, holding a large black gun shaped thing.~ "That?"
Corona: "Yup!" X3
Giga: "Alright. But you know that that setting doesn't work on boss opponents, right?"
Corona: "Doesn't matter, I can just use the Massacre."
Giga: "Good point." ~Corona lights herself on fire. Her clothes do not burn, nor does her skin. The fire seems to be restrained to be just covering her figure, not rising up like regular flame.~
Giga: "Let's do this. You say you want the golden orb?" ~Corona starts to move her mouth very slightly, murmuring.~
Finey: "Fuck ye-" !! "What-"
Giga: "By the way, it's not the gun doing that."
Corona: "The gun does this!" ~Corona fires the gun, and a stream of explosions shoot towards Finey. Corona continues murmuring enchantments. The fire around her depletes a little. Finey gets blasted away, towards the Mushroom Kingdom.~
Tama: "...I don't think you know what you just did."
Giga: "I don't think YOU know what Corona just did. May I have the nanogun, please?"
Corona: "Sure." ~Corona hands Giga the nanogun, and they both walk away about two metres.~
Giga: "Say goodnight." ~A small beep is heard across the world, as time freezes for three seconds. After the freeze, nothing happens. Giga shakes his head, looking a little disoriented.~ "Well, this means you only have a 50% chance of being my enemy."

This is a thing that's happening, now. Achievements in old video games.
Thank you for the layout, Erik557.
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NEW STUFF! Holy cow!

Characters:

Pyra: Human, female, red hair, long, covering one of her eyes, which are red, wears a red t-shirt and black jeans with flame decal. Wears red fingerless gloves, and black running shoes. Tomboy. Controls the element of fire. She does not have a secondary element. Part of the E-Six.

Moves:
Flamebolt: Shoots a fireball at someone.
Blazing Wave: Slams her fist into the ground, causing flames to shoot up in a straight line.
Burning Force: Creates a fiery shield around her or a target of her choice. Can be used to protect and ally, or damage an enemy.
Firestorm: Creates a giant dragon made of fire, which flies aroud the area throwing fire everywhere. Ultimate attack.


Hydro: Human, male, blue, uncombed hair, and blue eyes. Wears a blue t-shirt with a whitish-blue long sleeve underneath. Wears blue jeans. Controls the elements of water. His secondary element is ice. Part of the E-Six.

Moves:
Aqua Bomb: Throws a bubble that explodes on impact.
Frost Beam: IMMA FIRIN MAH ICY LAZER! But not THAT strong.
Winter Wave: Shoots a wave of frost that freezes anyone it comes in contact with.
Tidal Crash: Shoots a blast of water forward that homes in on the target of his choice. When it makes contact, the water solidifies into a giant ice pillar, that eventually shatters, sending ice shards in all directions. Ultimate attack.

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Locations:

The Barren Cliffs: An icy-cold crevasse devastated by the impact of the meteor. Magma still flows throughout the low areas, and anyone who falls of the cliffs is certain to meet a horrible, scorching death.

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Somewhere, in the Barren Cliffs...

Hydro: Urgh... Unh... Where am I? ~~looks around, sees no one, gets up and walks around~~

Pyra: *From a distance* Hey! Over here!

Hydro: Pyra? Hey, wait up! ~~runs after her~~

Pyra: Hey! Do you know where we are? How did we get here? Where are the others?

Hydro: Well, Hrrgh... ~~grabs head~~ (Damn, my head hurts...) All I... remember is this bright blue light, and then... and then... (What happened? I... I can't remember...)

Pyra: Well, now what do we do? We're lost... the others are gone... We have to find them!

Hydro: But... ~~sees Pyra already ran off~~ *sigh*...

Who are these mysterious people? Where are they? What does this have to do with the current storyline? Where are my pants? Find out, next time!
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Your turn.
@Giga: What do you mean, they didn't know he threw the meteors? Didn't you read the first chapter? I don't think so. And I think it is pretty cleverly written how everyone eventually figures out that Giga threw meteors. But it is true that since people didn't know who you were, we pretended you were a "giant" of some sort, which wasn't very true to your character indeed. Also, you want me not to interact so much with Giga and Corona, does that mean I've actually breached the limit in the other post? If it IS so, then, I can hardly do better than this, especially considering how your characters are where everything happens! It's all about not screwing up with the characters in the end. (Finey is polite, for instence. Having him say the F word isn't very true to him, but anyway way, it's not a big problem)

@CondorTalon: The barren cliffs location looks a lot like The fire wasteland, I'm not going to add it...


Finey had be thrown away with some insane strength, he was already gone, there, in the mushroom kingdom, but... Wait... That must make him pretty mad, doesn't it?! Anyway, back to Tama...

Tama: Wha-- Wait, what the heck was that?! It felt like time had stopped or something... Like a bug or something. And what the heck do you mean by there's only 50% chance we're friends?!

Yoster: Calm down Tama, you'd rather consider THEM as friend, no matter what they pretend. It's the difference between a meteor shower and your biggest problems burnt to ashes!

Very small turn because I have very little time and very little inspiration...

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Our world will stop advancing once humans manage to create sufficient magnificence for a whole lifetime. Until then, I just create.
Awesome video game music on my youtube channel
Wait, is the Fire Wastes a world or an area? Because if it's a world, then I'll change it, but if it's an area (As in, part of a world), then you can consider the Barren Cliffs as another area in that world (Like if the Fire Wastes was part of like a fire world, and then the Barren Cliffs is also part of that world).
Say, is the impact "of the meteor" related to chapter 1 or unrelated? Because it's some weird coincidence.

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Our world will stop advancing once humans manage to create sufficient magnificence for a whole lifetime. Until then, I just create.
Awesome video game music on my youtube channel
Well, I was planning on having the Barren Cliffs be close by to the location the rest of the characters are in, so I figured the whatever hit the Fire Wastes also affected the Barren Cliffs.

As the two humans walk through the Barren Cliffs, they see someone in the distance

Hydro: Huh. Who's that?

Pyra: Uh... looks like...

???: Hi!

Pyra: Um... excuse me, who are you?

???: Oh, me? I'm Kandice! ~~Her voice suddenly changes~~ YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH THAT!?

Hydro: Whoa! Um... are you OK?

Kandice: ~~voice is back to normal~~ Sure I am, why wouldn't I be?

Pyra: Uh... right. Um, do you, perhaps, know where we are?

Kandice: Sure I do! ~~voice becomes angry again~~ BUT WHY WOULD I TELL YOU!? ~~shoots a giant ball of energy that barely misses Pyra and Hydro~~

Pyra: Rrrright. Run away?

Hydro: Yup.

Pyra & Hydro: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!

And so, the two humans turned tail and ran, from the girl who seemed to have schizo. Who is she? I dunno, you'll just have to find out.


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...Corana? Really? Anyways...

Corona: "Does it really matter right now, Giga?" ~The fire surrounding Corona dies out, without any smoke.~
Giga: "No, I guess not." ~Giga turns to Tama and the group.~ "Hi. What I mean by us only having a 50% chance of being friends is, you would've exploded, all of you, if we were enemies, and you were just regular lackeys. This means you either are boss characters, or friendly." ~Giga lowers the gun.~ "Anyways, what I just fired was the Null Driver setting on this girl. It doesn't take any ammunition, and immediately destroys every non-boss enemy within a 24 foot radius, but there are side effects." ~Giga holds his left hand on his forehead, closes his eyes, and groans a little.~ "One of those effects is slightly losing your perception of reality. Fuck the ground for turning into metal..."
Corona: "The effect wears off after sleep. People like me, who aren't very strong physically, get even weaker after firing the Null Driver. People who are strong, probably you, Tama, would only get migranes from it. Giga only gets medium strength headaches, like you would from being on the computer for too long. What I fired was the Massacre, which takes a bit of your health away whenever you fire it. Twenty shots means your death if you don't do something about it inbetween, less if you've been hurt. That's why I had that fire surrounding me." ~Giga shakes his head a bit, then opens his eyes. His left hand falls to his side.~
Giga: "There's more settings on this, but most of them take ammo. The ones that don't are the Shotgun, Resonance Detonator, and Resonance Reflector. Shotgun's pretty obvious, but firing the Resonance Detonator is just like kicking something within its radius, about 3 feet. It has a horrible cooldown time, though. The Resonance Reflector also has a radius of 3 feet, and the same cooldown time, but it reflects mass based projectiles." ~Giga presses a button on the Nanogun.~ "Like, throw your shoe at me, Tama."
Tama: "...Alright." ~Tama takes off his shoe, and throws it at Giga. Giga fires the gun when the shoe is just about to hit him, and it bounces away, right back at Tama. Tama is unprepared, and the shoe hits him in the face. Giga laughs.~ "Ha ha ha... Weren't expecting it to come right back at you, were you?"
Tama: "You could've told me about that." ~Tama puts his shoe back on.~
Giga: "It's mainly used to repel rockets, fired from other Nanoguns, back at the person who fired them. Rockets, or rocket type things. Maybe I'll tell you about all the settings one day."

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