Hack Name: Super Mario World Collaboration
Length: 6 exits
Author: Nintendo, Glitch.Mr, LeChuck, TasVideos.org, Error 52, SMWCentral.net, Game Freak, FuSoYa, Wikipedia - Submitted by: Glitch.Mr
Cool hack with very tricky. I beaten that without savestates. Can you make this same? Very hard!

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Reasons


When you press start, the file select covers of most of the names. You will have to make room to fit them closer to the top of the screen.


This was the first level. Sense = 0


So now I can't even enter this level. D: That sure was fun.


I could not find any way out of the place. I even looked in Lunar Magic. Either I'm totally missing something, or there really is no way out. Also, crappy looking cutoff face.


Even without the switch pressed, there is no way out D:

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Well for starters, I couldn't make it passed the first 'level'. Even if I did, while looking in Lunar Magic, this does not look very good at all. A bunch of cutoff and bland looking levels that are only a screen or two long. You also edited the overworld a bit but didn't edit the events at all, so that wouldn't have worked either.

Hack Name: Primal Mario World (Demo 2)
Author: PineappleProducer
Description: Demo 2 of my hack, Primal Mario World. This demo has modified levels from the first demo, and also has brand new levels (Worlds 3-4).

It includes:
ExGFX
Custom Sprites
Custom Music
Custom Blocks (But not many)

Please rate and review this demo, so I can correct some mistales (if there are any). Enjoy!!!

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It seems that you have a bad patch here, as I patched it to a clean SMW ROM and nothing loaded. Make sure when making your patch that you use a clean SMW ROM.

Hack Name: super mario universe: iggys moonbase
Length: Unknown
Author: sammy3333 - Submitted by: sammy3333
Description: a 5 level hack (yellow switch palace to) that has some hard levels. its time for a new world(universe).

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Reasons

First of all, this was a ROM... Please submit IPS Patches in the future, as ROMs are illegal. Thanks. As for the issues with the hack... I don't know where to start. Listing each error here would take me way too long, so I'm just going to show some screenshots that I think represent the quality of this hack quite well.

Please do us all a favor and look at both the Hack Submission Guidelines and this video before submitting anything else.

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Hack Name: Mario & Luigi PC Remake
Length: 7 levels
Author: Superjustinbros - Submitted by: Superjustinbros
This is a re-creation of a Super Mario clone originally released in the early 90s for home computers by Mike Wiering. Not all the levels are perfect replicas of the ones in the original game, as some of the levels had to be adjusted in order to access some of the secret areas scattered throughout the game, plus to enable some other minor features.

Instead of returning to the beginning of the game with faster movement and higher jump hight upon completion of all six levels, you are treated to a Bowser fight at the end.

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First off, I want to say I liked this remake, and I had fun playing it. However there are a few things that are blocking its way to acception.

Reasons

The 'and' would look better using the letters without black behind them. 'Luigi' looks a little strange because the palette changes halfway through a letter, but it's not horrible.


The background of this message doesn't match with the black windowing element behind it. Make it black all around. Also (small), the mailbox has a weird palette.


In the actual DOS game, were Goomba's carriable? Would Koopas come out of their shells? If not, find the necessary hex edits to disable such things and make it closer to the original. Remember, when remaking something, you can't be lazy and leave SMW-like elements in the remake -- it seems rushed and not worked on hard enough (this goes to any remake).


In most of the levels, the bumped sprite of these bricks were wrongly colored. A slight palette tweak should fix this. Going back to the remake idea, were the bricks breakable, or turn blocks? You should really match the actual game on this too.


All the yellow pipes in this hack flashed. Since you aren't using Yoshi Coins, you can find the hex edit to disable the flashing color (note this will affect the flashing yellow on the OW too).


The palette of the lava is not the smoothest in the world.


The bumped note block GFX were that of SMW's. Edit the note block GFX in the SP3 GFX file to change that.


Something was wacky about your Podoboos in this level. Sometimes they would go really really high off the screen. I think it may have to do with the type of lava you are using, but I'm not sure.


The cement blocks cutoff the bush at the bottom, just use normal ground here.


Apply the fade fix patch to fix this problem (unless you replace it with ground like I mentioned, then you wouldn't need to).


The palette in this castle isn't the greatest either. The main problem is the gradients not being very smooth. Use Alt+Right Click in the palette editor to create perfectly smooth gradients.


Main reason for rejection is this. Try a different Castle tileset to fix the sprites' lava splashes.


You need fade fix here too, or replace with normal ground. Also, the flames stick out, so choose a BG without candles and remove the flames.



Sprites go behind Layer 2 here for some reason which looks odd. I really don't know how to fix this, but a search around the forums shouldn't be too hard.


For the credits, original SMW GFX are seen and a bunch of enemies that you didn't even use are there too. I suggest creating your own 'credits level', and make it so the Bowser fight does not trigger the credits (I think you can do that...).

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Overall, I thought this was a fun little hack, and I will gladly accept this once most (read: all) of these problems are fixed.

Hack Name: Super Omelette world
Author: Whoamme
Description: Mario finds himself hungry one day, and decides to have a snack. He wants to eat an omelette, so he sets out to find some eggs.

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All I have to say is, this hack has potential. I enjoyed it alot; however, it suffered from bland areas (no enemies, flat terrain, etc) and very minor graphical errors, as well as a few spots of lolwtf unfair.






All these areas have flat terrain with few, if any, enemies. There were others, but I feel these were the most noticeable. It would be nice if you could spice it up, but not completely necessary.

On to other screenies



If I walk to the right on the intro message, I can see the ground cutoff. Make sure the intro message is 1 screen long, or extend the ground.



You supplied a blue koopa shell here. If someone accidentally destroys it, they would have to re-enter the pipe I'm above. It would be dandy, but the time limit is kinda short.



Mario starts one block too high.



This looks like the munchers are floating :/



Holy carp bullets everywhere and small spaces too. This ain't Touhou D:



Super-eensy-teensy-tiny 1 pixel cutoff where the ropes meet the pipe.



The goal post is floating by 1 pixel. Also, the cement blocks create bigger cutoff. I don't see why you need them, so I suggest you remove them.



Your top secret area has the blue coins that still act like coins even though they look solid when a P-switch is pressed. I recommend not using them.



When I hit the fence door, those tiles appear when I am going behind. I dunno what you did wrong here.



There's a floating fence tile about a screen away from the last screenshot I took. It probably has to do with the fence door as well.



The overworld pipe is a bit too high, as Mario and Yoshi get covered by the border, though this isn't really a problem. Also, some of your paths are jagged.



Again with the blue coins.



This is technically the same as this screenie I took a few pictures up, except if I destroy the koopa shell I have to either kill myself or abandon Yoshi. If I abandon Yoshi...



...I meet this pit of doom.



Kinda odd how the railing goes in front of me yet behind the door. Also, cutoff railing to the right, next to the wood wall. There were other places where this happened too, but I do not feel like pointing them out and will instead leave it to your hunting skills.



Too many things on screen cause some of the boos to disappear.



If I accidentally collect that coin to the right, then I have to kill myself to start the puzzle over. Place a reset pipe por favor.



Likewise, if I never brought the silver P-switch I would be lolstuck.



This is kinda hard to do without getting hit, don'tcha think?



Yoshi spits out lolgarbage when I swallow a rainbow shell in this level. Don't put anything that uses SP3 or SP4 in this room.



The screen shifts quickly to the left when I enter the boss room.



If that is supposed to be snow, then I am curious as to what snow looks like where you live. (Serious post: The palette looks kinda weird)



FG Initial position is set too high. Lower it a bit.



I lol'd



lol'd here too



It's kind of annoying having to repeat what is seen here for a few more screens (pressing P-switches and watnot)



I am, like, stuck here. I pressed a P-switch a while back, so now I have to either abandon Yoshi or wait out the time. For Yoshi's sake, I will wait.



MORE BLUE COIN BLOCKS FGSDFSD



I can go inside this pipe... Make the smal vertical pipe 1 tile bigger and move it to the right 1 tile.



Cover the area behind Mario or someone could drop the switch.



MORE OF THESE DARN BLUE COINS AAA



That Blue Koopa (which you can only see the feet of, at the top) sometimes dies by his own shell, meaning I can;t get the P-switch that you need to proceed.



Foolish people might not make it past the blocks in time and be forced to wait the time.



For some reason these gates won't flip when I hit them... is this on purpose?



Finally, it's spelled "FuSoYa", not "FoSoYa" <_<


That's it. Just improve on making the levels more lively and remove as many errors as you can and you will be good to go

Hack Removed:

Hack Name: !!SMW the New Saga (beta 1.5) - 181.9 KB - 27 downloads.
Length: 7 levels
Author: mariolpmadness - Submitted by: mariolpmadness
Description: i mostly vanilla hack that was based on fun level design with a few challanges.
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My Short Review:
I enjoyed the hack it was fun to play though I couldn't decide if I should remove this or not I did because there was rather a few things that need fixing.
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Reasons:

The fish right here in the beginning falls down because sprite buoyancy isn't turned on. Turn it on so he swims.


Yoshi is a person so the "Y" should be capitalized.


On my left there is a bad corner tile, there's no correct corner tile for that so you have to fix it by moving the corner edge over.


Cut-off vines.


On the top-right there is cut-off.


If I enter the "Bonus room" area and if I go past the end there are floating munchers. I know it was on purpose since it spells out "floating munchers." They are bad take them out. Also I can't beat this area because there's no goal post, I have avoid taking the pipe to advance on. Not good.


*All. (Capitalization need here.)


This 3-up moon is rather easy to get since I accidentally fell. Make 3-up moons harder and rarer to get. Also that ledge has a wrong corner tile.


*Mario. (He's a person too.)


Forgot to mention if I try to go back by entering the pipe it won't lead me back and I exit out of the sky, make the player exit out of a pipe.


*I.


*Play. *They. (You need to space "play" and "they" and capitalize "They" Also why would you have to make the player go in Lunar Magic to play the other levels? I checked the levels out and they are unfinished and there is some glitchyness. That's pretty much part of the demo you know?)
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Conclusion:
Like I said I had fun with the demo, fix those errors and it should be accepted!

Hack Removed:

Hack Name: Motormaster's challange - 374.7 KB - 3 downloads.
Length: 1 level
Author: Motorm - Submitted by: Motorm
Description: It's a small hack i made to test my skills at making hacks if i need improvements on my work plz tell me A.S.A.P. Well Enjoy...
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My Short Review:
I would assume this is a 1st hack but if so it was pretty decent but there errors that need fixing.
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Reasons:

*only. *I. (The "O" in "Only" needs to have a small "o" and the "I" needs to be capitalized) Also internet memes in hacks are rather dumb, don't use useless messages for message blocks.


Use proper English.


Useless and nonsense message boxes.


The cement blocks create cut-off on the pipe.


The poor rex's are stuck in a cement block causing them to make them dance horribly. Move them up one tile so they're walking and not dancing.


I can't even see what's going on up here. Enable vertical scrolling.


I already went over this.


Cut-off and it's pretty hard to get up there unless you have a cape.


The arrow sign is floating.


Don't use the bottom row of Lunar Magic as things won't appear ingame.
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Conclusion:
You should really play some Featured Hacks so you know what makes good level design.

Hack Name: Motormaster's challange - 386.8 KB - 9 downloads.
Length: 2 levels
Author: Motorm - Submitted by: Motorm
Description: I updated it and added a second level Aka Yoshi's house oh and some how i think i changed the over world music in Yoshi's island area...

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DO NOT SUBMIT ROMS.
Here's your complementary 72 hour ban. Ersanio go!

Hack Removed:

Hack Name: Pou's Puzzle Level - 372.9 KB - 2 downloads.
Length: 1 level
Author: pou - Submitted by: pou
Description: A puzzle level.
This is a demo for a hack I am making.
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My Short Review:
It's good you fixed a lot of things but there are errors that need fixing. Also, like I said before One Level Demo's aren't allowed.
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Reasons:

There are a few errors here. 1st, that BG is glitched, 2nd, the black around "Demo" shouldn't go with the title screen like that, change it. Lastly I die in the intro screen, this is not good, the player shouldn't be able to die in the intro.


Take out those level tiles that spell "POU" Also there's a cloud near Mario and it's cut-off.


Don't use the bottom row of Lunar Magic as it will not appear ingame.


The ground above the pipe is cut-off because of the pipe.


There's cut-off right next to the turn block.


What's up with the invisible blocks around this area?


Floating and stacked munchers are bad. >


If I fall here I am stuck unless I have a cape or a item. Not good.


I can get stuck here too.


If I was small, I have to take the hit here and die. Also the muncher above the P-switch is floating.


I couldn't figure how to get pass here so I had to shell jump. This is bad.


I couldn't get passed here either, I had to P-switch jump here which is bad mostly because it's a glitch.


The pipe is cut-off because of the cement blocks.
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Conclusion:
This needs some work. The errors are easy to fix, and don't resubmit until you got at least 5 levels done.

Hack Name: the void: the matrix (demo1level)
Length: Unknown
Author: sammy3333 - Submitted by: sammy3333
Description: its a demo so its just 1 level edited! full version will have 5 levels!

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Reasons

1. Your hack is too short. It should have at least 5 levels when you submit it, unless it's a one-level hack.
2. You included ZSNES and a (useless) shortcut to Lunar IPS in the zip. Don't do that - it needlessly increases the file size, and everyone alrady has these programs.
3. The patch didn't work properly - all I got was a black screen. Please make sure to use a clean ROM, and test your patch before submitting it!
4. The most important reason: To be brutally honest, your hack screenshots looked horrible. Please look at both the Hack Submission Guidelines and this video before you submit anything else.

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Frankly, I think it would be best for you to just start a new hack from scratch.