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Super Zario World: A new Legend is born

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Zario is Mario in a different dimension (Zario world) , so Zario go's
to Mario world to see Mario but Bowzer the evil koopa king from Zario world wants to take down Zario. Thats why he whats to see Mario to unite to take down Bowzer! Bowzer will be seen in Super Zario World 2 Zario's dimension. So will Zario and Mario take down Bowzer?





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Thanks to Tom Servo for the awesome new layout!

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Thanks to Tom Servo for the awesome new layout!
Boing, try not to be aggressive next time.
Please.

Well unfortunately, it doesn't look so good. D:

First screen looks bland.

Second screen is bad also.

Fourth and Fifth screen is really bland.

I'm not going to explain the Sixth screen.




Bottom line: Needs a lot of work.
Try playing other hacks and compare yours.
Originally posted by Orbis

I'm not going to explain the Sixth screen.


You won't, then I will.

1.) You put a bunch of green tiles around other objects. Just change the BG color to green.
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Honestly I think your first screen looks nice.

Second screen get rid of the door and that weird line under it

Third screen maybe add some sprites

Fourth screen add more obstacles and sprites

Fifth I dont know what its supposed to be but get rid of the brown blocks for you can see white around them.
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the last screen was the INSIDE of Yoshi's long houseNothing to put here at the time being.
Thanks to Tom Servo for the awesome new layout!
Originally posted by marioman
the last screen was the INSIDE of Yoshi's long house

Since when was Yoshi's house a green void made of cement and used blocks, along with block and door edges that don't match the BG?
look guys, its chaos complexx :D
Not really.
marioman, you must work more on it.



Reminds me of dario's adventure. Not the best hack ever. If you're going to use a new character in a hack, make it more than just a pallette change. And cement blocks do not look very good. Also, i'm not sure if you're level design is good or not, but try a new idea every level, but don't get to gimmicky. Insanely hard hacks are never very fun either. Also, if you do gfx changes, make sure you can tell what everything is, and know what you are doing at all times. In the second screen it looks as if you are climbing nothing.

Boing you can edit your post of rage now that he put screenshots up...

I cant say that it looks good, I can see your new to this stuff because my hacks used to start out like yours when I first began this too. The best thing you can do is play the featured hacks and compare yours to theirs like Orbis said.
Originally posted by Skull Kid/Internoob
Second screen get rid of the door and that weird line under it

I think that's supposed to be a door suspended on a ledge that you can climb up to. If that's the case, make the line look better and get rid of that empty space on the corners of the door (The two little blank spots.)
Zario more like fartio LOL
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Umm? To me the 4th screen looks like a NSMB 1-1 remake, but I could be wrong.
Hum... This blank space is no longer blank.

uuuuhhh could everyone say crappy?. Not original man. Zario and Bowzer? Wow just Z's? Screens don't look good either.
Kawaii !!



[Bluemoon: Umm? To me the 4th screen looks like a NSMB 1-1


You are correct
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Level Remakes = INSTA FAIL
Ban this.
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