Originally posted by B.B.Link
So, what now? You want to ruin my whole comeback and make me feel worse over some stupid stuff I did way back then? Or are you going to let it go and let me make up for my mistakes by finishing this hack? Your choice.
Sorry, I didn't mean to ruin your comeback(not being sarcastic). I don't want to make you feel terrible, I didn't know I was, I thought I was being pretty nice about it, in fact. Anyways, of course I've already let it go. I probably shouldn't've brought it up in the first place, I was just thinking if you were remaking the hack to toss out that level and start fresh. If you'd like to continue this conversation, I'd be happy to through PMing.
Anyways, I was meaning to comment on each individual screeny, so here we go:
screeny 1: looks nice. Are you going to add in "redrawn"?
screeny 2: I like the graphics. However, I'm not so much a fan of the yellow sky. Additionally, the 2 colors used for grass are so similar, it looks like a solid tone of green, which is pretty bad. Also, not really under your control, but the grass wedges that you place inside dirt could look better... it's probably the black line against the solid bright green that hurts my eyes. Some playing around in YY-CHR and making the black a dark green should do the trick.
screeny 3: I like the toads ^^ I think the furniture might clash with everything else do to lack of detail, but it's not a big problem.
screeny 4: nothing to complain about here. In fact, I'm loving both the idea of using a giant virus as a replacement for big boo, and the graphics itself.
screeny 5: I like the giant boulder and the other graphics.
screeny 6: I must say, the blue and the red are way too saturated.
screeny 7: lots going on here, I see. I like the dirt palette. The grass is a little borked, but I'm honestly too tired to describe how, so I guess you can leave it. I'm curious as to whom the white-dresses princess and viking-guy is(is he a mouser replacement that throws SMB2 veggies?). Also, I'm not too sure what those orange things are. They sort of look like badminton birdies. They also kind of look like SMB2 potions with little ? marked pieces of paper inside.
screeny 8: I don't know about the iceblocks. Eh. Everything else looks good.
screeny 9: Can't really comment due to lack of knowledge of this virus's attacks. His graphics are cool, though.
screeny 10: Oh cool, SML2 ants!
screeny 11: The trees look a bit odd(they use different tiles than they usually do). I think the ground would look even better if you edited it so it's brown under the top part, and green on the top part. Not that it looks bad currently. Also, why does Wiggler's nose have a green spot on it?
screeny 12: I laughed for some reason. I'm guessing you're inside sick Toad after he indulged himself in quite a few pieces of candy.
screeny 13: I don't exactly like the BG/FG graphics here for whatever reason. The SML2 bees are cute, though. Is icegoom the yoshi coin replacement?
screeny 14: I know some people don't like bramble mazes, but I for one do. So I'll be looking forward to this level.
screeny 15: cool(sorry, I'm getting lazy and I don't really have anything to say about it).
screeny 16: again, quite nice.
screeny 17: read my comment on screeny 6.
screeny 18: not too fond of the FG palette. The bushes/FG have a brown outline for some reason. It looks odd. Make it a bit darker, or perhaps green. The Yoshi's Cookie sign has a red outline which looks weird. Also, not saying you copied the title, but the title is really similar to Super Mario - The Cookie Crisis, as you said. To avoid consfusion, I might just change the crisis to a different word(chaos, or some other word that starts with C).
Also the levels redrawn or did you redo them from scratch?
On a last note, let me reiterate that I apologize for hurting your feelings or offending you.
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