Super mario world: The island of wishes - Works in Progress

Storyline: It's late at night and mario and peach are watching shooting stars fall. They both make a wish. meanwhile, bowser makes an evil wish. These are special stars, their wishes willcome true on the island of wishes. Mario goes with peach to the island of wishes to see if their wishes have come true, but peach dissapears in a a bunch of shadowy clouds. It's time for mario to save wish island, the mushroom kingdom, and rescue princess peach.

Screenies:

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Wha do you guys think?

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It's not too bad so far you could add some more enemies to the levels. In the fourth SS the only way to get passed that area is with Yoshi which is unfair. Never make areas where the player may need to get hurt to move on.

EDIT: If it's for exit a secret then it should be ok. My bad.

Originally posted by Henrawr

Storyline: It's late at night and mario and peach are watching shooting stars fall. They both make a wish. meanwhile, bowser makes an evil wish. These are special stars, their wishes willcome true on the island of wishes. Mario goes with peach to the island of wishes to see if their wishes have come true, but peach dissapears in a a bunch of shadowy clouds. It's time for mario to save wish island, the mushroom kingdom, and rescue princess peach.

Screenies:

Wha do you guys think?

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That enemy looks cute, :3

It looks pretty good, actually. There's nothing wrong with your screenshots that I can see, although unless there's a few offscreen platforms in the fourth screenshot you'll have to abandon Yoshi to get over the ledge. Some people don't like doing that.

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