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C'mon, man, I try my best.
これは「なにか」ですわ
SAN値!ピンチ!
GvS @smwcentral.net ~ u:11380
Sorry but these levels seem just very bland. Looks like someone got inspired by The Muncher Run eh? Don't copy it. We already have 2 muncher runs. Your title screen realy needs a new level, and your grammar... Just no. You also forgot to use capital letters and dots some where. Always press Cntrl+ Delete before you start making a level.
GvS @smwcentral.net ~ u:11380
Originally posted by MARiO42
Ok,this is my first try to make a good hack

If so, good job of you that you posted it here instead of submitting it! So, in the future press Cntrl+Delete and try to spice up the levels abit. I hope your hack will come out better ~_^
Seeing as your new, i'm not going to be harsh.

This concept has been done.
Basically, you might wan't to find a new concept than running over munchers. (however, I do like the customized muncher GFX to reduce cut-off)
Since this is your first hack, I suggest making a Normal generic hack, you know, level after level with a basic storyline. Your levels have potental, without the munchers.

I mean, this:

This is pretty darn creative for a new user. (You know, if it didn't have all those munchers)
Go with this, instead of a gimmick hack.

End conclusion:
- Find a new concept.
- Remove the munchers, Go with level design

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Originally posted by Brad172
Seeing as your new, i'm not going to be harsh.

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End conclusion:
- Find a new concept.
- Remove the munchers, Go with level design


(this is to the TC): I will be as harsh as I am with any other person on this site. New users deserve respect. Just because you're new doesn't make you any less of a hacker than anyone else.

That being said, I recommend not listening to Brad172. Even though the concept has been done before doesn't mean you still can't make your own. The concept of "peach being kidnapped" has been done before. Why stray from your original idea of the star/muncher which has only been done twice (literally) than a 'peach is kidnapped by bowser' which has been done at least 100 times. I'm not even kidding. I would like to see you're original idea. Also, from the screen shots your hack looks pretty fun and well thought out. I would try to say something bad but I can't right now. See that as a good sign.

I look forward to any progress you make.

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Everyone else has already said what I would say otherwise, so no point in redundancy. However, you should not under any circumstances make entering the second level instant death if you haven't beaten the Yellow Switch Palace. That's a real dick move.

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Originally posted by MARiO42
Originally posted by Midna
Everyone else has already said what I would say otherwise, so no point in redundancy. However, you should not under any circumstances make entering the second level instant death if you haven't beaten the Yellow Switch Palace. That's a real dick move.

oops,sorry for this,here is the actual beginning of the level 2:


And a reset door:


I think is more better now.


So side exit enabled? That's much better.
Also, good you included a reset door, those are most certainly required for what your making.

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Hey you!
Check out my SMW Blog!

Ok, maybe a bit dead


Also, Visit my Youtube Page!
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Depth in Detail:


WLC Entry:

Play?
This is where you would read the first line of text of my signature, but it is currently pointless.

Projects:
- Serious thing kinda happening.
- on hold for some time :|
I have to say, one thing I like about this hack is that you used different blocks for munchers that would be stacked or floating otherwise. However, other than that, Muncher-based hacks are generally very bad. Try using different gimmicks for levels.
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