NAME: Super Hacked World (V1.1) [Demo Release 1]
AUTHOR: videolegoboy123
DESCRIPTION: My first hack I worked hard on. I've gotten one Lets Player so far to do this hack, And all the errors hes told me about (Which was mostly grammar, and spelling) So enjoy and contact me about it.
DENIED!
(I wonder what kind of LPer that guy was.. you should have better got a real beta tester!)
The black surrounding of your name in the Title Screen looks odd. Also the W from WORLD has a weird black stroke.
It otherwise looks kind of cluttered but nothing to worry about.
There are some odd Map16 issues in your Yoshi's House. Fix them.
Now let's see about the cutoffness..
The bushes need to be placed on a complete ledge, not over an edge tile. Also the BG palette could use some touch-up.
This ain't work.
This ain't work either. Use proper (not cutoffness creating) linking tiles or use ExGFX.
The pipe cuts into the ground here. Same as with the above picture.
Hint: Not every English word gets capitalized. I Don't Write Like This Either.
Hello and*
contact*
errors*
Simply get a beta tester who's also fluent in English.
Now let's focus on palettes....
Self-explanatory
I can hardly see that arrow..
lol
"Bowser wasn't that color intended for ... your wall?!"
Finally some more issues:
The note block animation GFX are glitched which is very bad.
Self-explanatory
I messed up. And now?
Also what's the above room for anyway if I don't get anything and I could easily jump through that oddly brownish pipe and save some time?
Obvious level edit? Not on Smwcentral.
↓
To cut it short: YOu have to fix quite a lot. The music was pretty nice but in terms of level design, graphics, overworld design etc. you have to learn quite a bunch. Play some hacks and just keep trying. Also don't forget to get a beta tester!
Check out
my hack thread (Taomb)
my twitch (currently only hosting Pokemon runs, inactive)
Exits done: >50, Overworld: 99.8%
Play through Taomb Demo 3
Taomb is almost finished. It will definitely be relased in 2025 after 17 years of work!
AUTHOR: videolegoboy123
DESCRIPTION: My first hack I worked hard on. I've gotten one Lets Player so far to do this hack, And all the errors hes told me about (Which was mostly grammar, and spelling) So enjoy and contact me about it.
DENIED!
(I wonder what kind of LPer that guy was.. you should have better got a real beta tester!)
The black surrounding of your name in the Title Screen looks odd. Also the W from WORLD has a weird black stroke.
It otherwise looks kind of cluttered but nothing to worry about.
There are some odd Map16 issues in your Yoshi's House. Fix them.
Now let's see about the cutoffness..
The bushes need to be placed on a complete ledge, not over an edge tile. Also the BG palette could use some touch-up.
This ain't work.
This ain't work either. Use proper (not cutoffness creating) linking tiles or use ExGFX.
The pipe cuts into the ground here. Same as with the above picture.
Hint: Not every English word gets capitalized. I Don't Write Like This Either.
Hello and*
contact*
errors*
Simply get a beta tester who's also fluent in English.
Now let's focus on palettes....
Self-explanatory
I can hardly see that arrow..
lol
"Bowser wasn't that color intended for ... your wall?!"
Finally some more issues:
The note block animation GFX are glitched which is very bad.
Self-explanatory
I messed up. And now?
Also what's the above room for anyway if I don't get anything and I could easily jump through that oddly brownish pipe and save some time?
Obvious level edit? Not on Smwcentral.
↓
To cut it short: YOu have to fix quite a lot. The music was pretty nice but in terms of level design, graphics, overworld design etc. you have to learn quite a bunch. Play some hacks and just keep trying. Also don't forget to get a beta tester!
Check out
my hack thread (Taomb)
my twitch (currently only hosting Pokemon runs, inactive)
Exits done: >50, Overworld: 99.8%
Play through Taomb Demo 3
Taomb is almost finished. It will definitely be relased in 2025 after 17 years of work!
