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A Volcanic Adventure Final Mix - by peytonbanks1234
Forum Index - Valley of Bowser - Moderation Questions - Hacks - A Volcanic Adventure Final Mix - by peytonbanks1234
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First of all, the hack was a bit too short. 1-level hacks are fine as long as they are long enough, but this hack took about 6-7 minutes for me, which isn't that great. Either try to make your hack a bit longer or add more levels.

Also, two things about screenshots:
- you should submit more screenshots, showing different areas of your hack
- the only screenshot you submitted was unnecessarily resized and edited, read this to learn how to submit proper screenshots.



Mario can die in the title screen which leads to glitches.



Several cutoff tiles on the overworld (water + ground). Also, why is there water in the volcano?



I'm not sure why is vertical camera movement not allowed, and the pipe + lava combo create cutoff.



More cutoff (bones+lava).





It's pretty weird how Mario can bump into lava sometimes and he doesn't even get hurt.



This 3UP Moon was a bit...khm, easy. They're supposed to be hidden.



Don't use red Buzzy Beetles as Spinies. It's a bit distracting and unprofessional.



Stacked Munchers = no.

I suggest you to do the following things:

- Read the Hack Submission Guidelines
- Watch this video
Hack Name: A Volcanic Adventure Final Mix
Length: 1 exit
Author: peytonbanks1234 - Submitted by: peytonbanks1234
Description: This is a hack that I created. I am pretty proud of it. This is the final version. This hack has custom sprites from smw redrawn. Enjoy it! I expect good reviews. Give me your own opinion on this so I can fix some things that look buggish / glitchy.



Reason

A newer version was submitted.

On a side note, remember you don't have to change what's in the "Author" field - just leave your user ID in there and it'll turn into a link once submitted.

 
Hack Name: A Volcanic Adventure Final Mix (Update)
Author: peytonbanks1234
Description: This is the updated version of my hack. A volcanic Adventure now has an extra room and i made the boss door room a tiny bit more difficult and i no longer have stacked munchers and the kudos moons are hidden really well.
However, you forgot to fix something so major, we have a rule about it:
Originally posted by the site staff in the Hack Submission Guidelines
6.) The player should not be able to die in the title screen or intro level.

The title screen can glitch up if Mario collects a star, hits a P-Switch, enters a door/pipe, or dies. The life counter will also glitch up if Mario is able to die in the intro level. Please try to avoid these errors.
This was pointed out by Hadron in a previous submission, but you still have not fixed it.
Read the Hack Submission Guidelines.

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Hack Name: A Volcanic Adventure Final Mix Demo - 208.6 KB - 49 downloads.
Length: 4 levels
Author: peytonbanks1234 - Submitted by: peytonbanks1234
Description: This is my uhhhh....third attempt to post this. I updated The Volcano Based Adventure.

Reasons
Originally posted by Techokami
However, you forgot to fix something so major, we have a rule about it:
Originally posted by the site staff in the Hack Submission Guidelines
6.) The player should not be able to die in the title screen or intro level.

The title screen can glitch up if Mario collects a star, hits a P-Switch, enters a door/pipe, or dies. The life counter will also glitch up if Mario is able to die in the intro level. Please try to avoid these errors.
This was pointed out by Hadron in a previous submission, but you still have not fixed it.
Read the Hack Submission Guidelines.


This is the third time this hack has been moderated now, and the same issue has not been resolved. Resubmitting rejected content is grounds for a temporary ban, which I will be applying now as a result of your repeated resubmissions.

Overall, this hack needs a lot of work before it will be up to SMWCentral's standard of quality. Please take the time to read over the Tips Of The Day. You should play through some of the site's Featured Hacks to get an idea of what you should be aiming for. Last but not least, replay some of the classic Super Mario games to get inspiration for good level design.

Please watch this video by cyphermur9t -- it gives a lot of good tips for beginners and also outlines several bad habits that are commonly frowned upon by our community.

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If I moderated your hack, there was apparently a 90 percent chance it was rejected.
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