Banner
Views: 783,763,995
Time:
18 users online:  Atari2.0, autisticsceptile1993, bandicoot, BanzaiChuck, Christian07, Daizo Dee Von, Evernn, FailSandwich, Green Jerry, kellykelster, Magmatic, Maxodex, Nicoke42,  Ninja Boy, Quaza, rosysunrise_, StrikeForcer,  Thomas - Guests: 49 - Bots: 301 Users: 41,003 (1,570 active)
Latest: JamesD28
Tip: If you place too many sprites on the same screen, it will slow the game down and cause frustration to the player.Not logged in.
MARIO - by Nokiaar1
Forum Index - Valley of Bowser - Moderation Questions - Hacks - MARIO - by Nokiaar1
Pages: « 1 »
Hack Name: MARIO - 157.4 KB - 1 download.
Length: 2 exits
Author: Nokiaar1 - Submitted by: Nokiaar1
Description: No story included :D

A little minihack by me..
The music needs an update..

Won´t say more .. play!! :)
Please review cause it´s my first one :)



Reasons

Mostly aesthetical issues, but with a hack this short I can't help but be more strict.


Palettes are actually the main removal reason here. In all honesty, all of your palettes could use a lot of work - they're just not a pretty sight at all.
Here, this tutorial might help you improve them.


Not as big a deal, but the cement block palette looks off here as well.


If you don't react fast enough here, the Rex will block your way, leaving you no option but to commit suicide. I see what you were trying to do, but this way it's just... not exactly fair.


The last two commas aren't necessary, and if you want to improve the grammar even further, you might want to change the "which" to "that". A minor issue though.


The triangle doesn't act quite right. Remember to make the tile beneath it act like tile 1EB.


Slightly cutoff corner here.


Is there any reason for you not to enable vertical scroll at will ()? The level scrolls while climbing anyway, so you've got nothing to hide.




Once you've fixed the issues mentioned (the bad palettes in particular), feel free to resubmit your hack. In the meantime, if you haven't already, you might want to take a look at our Hack Submission Guidelines and this video.

 
Removed
Hack Name: MARIO - 105 KB - 17 downloads.
Length: 2 exits
Author: Nokiaar1 - Submitted by: Nokiaar1
Description: This is my first hack.
I wanna show it to you because there´s no reason for it ;)
Also there´s no story included cause it´s a fun hack ;)
A few things need to be fixed in the next time..
So have fun!

Reasons
Comparing the previous removal log by WhiteYoshiEgg and your newer screenshots, I can see that you have made a lot of progress from your first submission. I think you're off to a good start, based on that alone.

One concern I do have, though, is the length of your hack. Typically, we don't accept hacks with fewer than a world's worth of levels (around five or so) or that can be played through in less than 10 minutes or so.

Unfortunately, I could not play your hack. When I applied the IPS to a clean 512 KB SMW ROM, nothing seemed to change on the output end. Please read over these instructions and try submitting your hack again (with some more levels, hopefully).

--------------------

[?] Miscellaneous Helpful Hints
If I moderated your hack, there was apparently a 90 percent chance it was rejected.
Pages: « 1 »
Forum Index - Valley of Bowser - Moderation Questions - Hacks - MARIO - by Nokiaar1

The purpose of this site is not to distribute copyrighted material, but to honor one of our favourite games.

Copyright © 2005 - 2019 - SMW Central
Legal Information - Privacy Policy - Link To Us


Total queries: 7

Menu

Follow Us On

  • YouTube
  • Twitch
  • Twitter

Affiliates

  • Talkhaus
  • SMBX Community
  • GTx0
  • Super Luigi Bros
  • ROMhacking.net
  • MFGG
  • Gaming Reinvented