Description: This is Demo Version. There are 2 levels on the demo version, I Made it overworld super mario bros 3, and toad house i make it quickly. easy, and enjoy it.
If you knew that it had 2 levels, put that in the Length category, not in the description... Removal reasons:
The grammar has problems. This is a huge run on sentence. Get someone to proofread your messages. Also:
cement blocks + water = cutoff
Using cement blocks to stop the flat ground is creating cutoff as well.
Change go to gone.
You should change the overworld design... Very boring and uncreative here. Add some shapes, water, decorations, etc.
The yellow on the breakable blocks looks out of place. Just change that to brown.
Extreme slowdown. Way too many sprites, which happens in both bonus areas. Also the background just stops below the status bar, extend that.
This hack isn't long enough. Two regular length levels aren't long enough.
#5 - Your hack should be of a reasonable length.
Unless you intend to make your hack contain very long and very high quality levels, demos which are too short to provide any feedback on or be enjoyable will be subject to removal. A general rule of thumb is that the hack should feature at least one complete world with about five levels, or should feature around at least 15 minutes of game time.
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