Just a simple hack that I've started, and if it has positive feedback then I'll continue working on it.
OW = Unchanged, simply because I didn't see the point in changing it for something that I may not continue.
Ignore secret exit in "Dark Sewers", it's only there for placement, not for actual use.
Hey I moderated a hack with the same title before! Anyways, your hack has a fair amount of flaws spread out through 5 levels. Here is its removal reasons:
This was your only screenshot, the title. You need to submit some actual gameplay screenshots. This would benefit you as well because it might interest people to play it.
You shouldn't be able to die on the intro level, otherwise you can end up with a weird life counter.
I really recommend you make a custom submap, even if it's for a demo.
Looks yellow to me, but whatever.
glitched bottom pipe graphic. Also I can't enter it so I'm trapped until the time runs out.
I'd still block this off with something.
If you're big and go up here because you anticipate a powerup, Mario gets stuck and morphs through the wall and kills himself. Just move the
over one tile to the right.
Not a removal reason, but those munchers have an out-of-place yellow-brownish outline that clashes with the blue on them.
This is mean. I chose the wrong path and now I must die. How was I supposed to know?
Missing corner tile.
Another glitched tile graphic.
I assume this is where the game ends because it's just a flat piece of water. You should tell the player when it's the end of your demo.
I'd still recommend you change your submap. It doesn't take long at all to do. If you know how to do it, but don't bother with it, it's like saying 'screw it.'
Which seems like you don't want to put in the effort. Also it makes your hack looks amateurish. You don't have
to do it, it's just highly recommended.
Fix all those and complete the last level then we'll see again. Make sure that we can't play the original game levels after your demo is completed. Another reason to edit the submap.
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