This is the original The Lost Land, well, when I say that, a few changes have been made since the last one for the vanilla contest entry a couple of years ago:
> Fixed a few dodgy palettes,
> Fixed the cut off in the castle exterior,
This is not as good as my standard of hacks nowadays, but it's the hack before The Lost Land 2 - The 4 Switches.
This hack is vanilla, so it has no need for credits and stuff.
I found this hack fun at certain times. The cutscenes don't really add much but eh. Anyways, a couple things to do and recommendations to.. Well.. Recommend. Removal reasons:
I can fly under the land here and keep yoshi, thus breaking the level. Then I'm stuck in this cutscene forever because Yoshi can't go through doors. Also the music doesn't change when you enter the cutscene, unless you didn't want it to.
Lots of slowdown. If you remove a football duder maybe it'll speed up.
A) You should record a new intro or add in a sprite that stops Mario (Luigi?) from hopping around in a box.
B) When you enter the level and go through the text cutscene, maybe have the timer set to 000 and then start the timer once the actual level starts so you can't die during an intro from time out. I know it's set to 900 seconds, that's why it's just a recommendation.
D) On the final screen there's star music. On the room before that there's all those chucks and stuff with Bowser battle music. I don't know... It just doesn't seem to fit well but it's not a removal reason.