|First Strike [DEMO]
|Hack Name: ||First Strike [DEMO] - 241.7 kB - 38 downloads.
|Length: ||10 levels
|Author: ||camoslash - Submitted by: camoslash
|Description: ||The First Strike Demo by Camoslash! Well I finally got rid of all the bugs, (at least I am pretty sure!!) and it is ready for action!
Who had the first strike? Bowser... or Mario? One day Bowser was on a stroll. Such a nice guy, enjoying the sweet breeze of the ocean. Then Bowser met the most beautiful woman, Princess Peach. He had been admiring her from afar, until he eventually worked up a substantual amount of courage to go meet her. They starting talking, began to become such great friends. Later on in the day, Mario was on a walk through Toad Town. As he was walking past Princess Peach's Castle, he saw Bowser With Princess Peach. Not thinking he sprung into an uncontrolable rage, setting a fire in the pit of his stomache. Bowser loved the Princess but Peach told him that she was already in love, with Mario. Bowser's soul sunk deep within in the pit of his heart... So. Who had the first strike? You find out in the hack: First Strike! Brought to you by Camoslash!
First off, let me say this was a fun game and you had some good level design! It kept me interested and played it from start to finish in one go. But there are still some removal reasons:
Green behind the berry is lighter than the bush but it's no big deal.
wants*, Also there's a missing tile at the bottom left.
Lots of slowdown.
In 'Dark Depths', there's major cutoff here.
After I beat 'House of the Dead', a random event tile appeared up here.
Wrong corner tile.
Sprite memory error.
Was an SMWCP used as a base? I'm just getting major vibes from it.
Good hack. Fix those and it should be ready to get accepted. This is all very simple stuff to fix.
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