Not too bad actually. This just needs some touching up. However I did find one major flaw which will be shown at the end of this removal log.
This message box has wrong grammar. This is implying that Iggy must get the golden egg back. Also the 'y' in 'Yoshi' should capitalized. There's also no period at the end.
"Gets to go to
"just as much as I had making it!"
Just a smidge of cutoff between the purple and green pipes here.
Mario is standing on the water here.
This is the major flaw here.
This is the level with the secret exit, however I couldn't find it so I took a peek in Lunar Magic to see where it was. Apparently the secret exit was through this pipe, but I could not enter it. This is a non exit-enabled pipe, therefore the secret exit was not obtainable.
The level design in this was pretty fun. Make sure to test your game thoroughly with every exit first before you submit your hack though.
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