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Yoshi's adventure to save someone - BroDute
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Yoshi's adventure to save someone
Hack Name: Yoshi's adventure to save someone   - 186.4 kB - 44 downloads.
Length: 6 exits
Author: BroDute - Submitted by: BroDute
Description:  This is a short demo of my hack "Yoshi's adventure to save someone".
It has 6 exits and 4 playable levels.

Credit:
I redraw some main gfx without the yoshi and the overworld gfx, everything other goes to smwcentral.


Seriously, don't be discouraged because the hack got removed. You really did a good job here! It's just that the shorter the game, the more strict the removal log will be. It shouldn't take long at all to fix this. So with that being said, here's some things to touch up:

wonderful*, and the last sentence should not end with '?' it should end with a period or '...' (Ellipsis)


trapped*


then*


The Big fish can't jump high enough to eat me, so they're not even a threat.


The pipe is messed up in level 000 and 100.




A) Not a big deal, but I can hear Mario (Yoshi) hopping in the title screen. But like I said before it's not a big deal and doesn't count towards removal.

B) You should really give more time in the level "It's sunset" (Around 500-600) because the puzzle is more of a scavenger hunt. Or if you don't want to add time you could leave a message box explaining to the player they should search the flip boxes and they'll figure out the rest from there.

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That's a pretty creative title.
I, actually, have played this hack. Despite some minor nitpicks, I found it pretty enjoyable, and felt like it has great potential to be a top-notch project.

The major complaints I had were with:

> The first level, because of the invisible blocks. There's no trace or clue at all of where they may appear, and this turned the level unfair. Died various times on a muncher because of that.

> The sunset level. Finding the exit was pretty painful (only did it after looking on Lunar Magic). You need to find a blue P-switch and a key, and you must use the key to be able to enter the P-switch door because it's 1 tile high over the ground. Plus, the brown block where the key is supposed to be placed to enter that door turns into a coin when the switch is pressed. It was still possible to enter that door, but:

Brown block + 1-tile high door + door only accesible via P-switch = key falls from the brown block due to turining into a coin. Fail.

Guess the major removal reason was the pipe in Level 0/Level 100, and if I was moderating, then I would point these two issues as well. I wouldn't consider bad grammar/spelling as an enormous issue (I have my faults, too), unless it's something realy, really awful, lazy or hard to understand. But I get the point cyphermur9t said: it's just that the shorter the game, the more strict the removal log will be.

Anyway, cheers up, BroDute. You showed us you have potential, so don't give up!

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I think a "," (comma) should also be inserted after "Yoshi".
Originally posted by cyphermur9t
The Big fish can't jump high enough to eat me, so they're not even a threat.


For the record, the big fish's name is Boss Bass.


Yeah the puzzle was an odd one for me. I don't know why the chosen format was with the written 'TEST' in unused levels, but as long as it works. That's why I have that note B.

Originally posted by Blind Devil
> The first level, because of the invisible blocks. There's no trace or clue at all of where they may appear, and this turned the level unfair. Died various times on a muncher because of that.

I found the invisible note blocks a bit odd too, but they never caused me to die. *shrug* Guess it's just our gaming styles. That might be why I never noticed this issue.

Originally posted by Luigi-San
For the record, the big fish's name is Boss Bass.

I knew he had a name but I couldn't remember it and didn't bother looking it up. Guess I was just feeling lazy yesterday.

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Dat bass! I honestly blame my childhood fear of Boss Bass.

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When I said the proper word to use was then* you replaced the wrong word. Oh well guess I'll just write it all out. It should say this:
Some levels have a secret exit to switch palaces. You can only find them if the timer is under 100 sec. Look around for changes around you then!


I didn't know that water would kill me. You should state so in a message box or sign.


Whoa this reset door sets you all the way back to the start? That's quite the backtrack don't you think? I won't have enough time to complete the level now anyways.


That enemy there doesn't serve much purpose as he just kills himself before I even get near him.


I'm not even sure what this means. I guess it's a cryptic poem?


replace find with found* (Remove the first now)


After completing world 2, the first world showed up and kept backing in and out of it forever.


Also, how is anyone supposed to find the secret exit in Dark Old House? It is way too hidden. The only way people can find it is if they go into Lunar Magic and find it themselves. Falling into what looks like a bottomless pit? Finding an invisible door in the middle of nothing? Nothing to go on? No one would figure that out.

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Originally posted by cyphermur9t
I didn't know that water would kill me. You should state so in a message box or sign.

Possibly the return of Death Water?

Sorry, I had to.
I don't know. It may be just me who thinks this way but most of the time If see water that isn't any shade blue or a color it shouldn't be (Green & Purple in such.) I assume it isn't safe to swim in, which seems to be the case just about almost all the time in hacks.

Edited: Also, other ways to tell something isn't safe is just to pay attention to how the design is, if you aren't too sure rather the water's safe or not.

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I think the purple water should be obvious for people who played NSMBW (it had deadly purple water in W5). Hovewer, a sign would be great for people, who didn't play NSMBW.
Well it did look blue when I first saw it. Maybe change it to completely purple would help.

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