Yoshi Random Demo 2
-Fixed Dry bone
-Fixed World 1-4
-New Music Title
-error world 1-4
This hack is almost acceptable, the level design is good enough, expect for a few things I'll explain later, and there weren't to many big issues. However, the main reason why I can't accept it is because it seems you used BroDute's GFX without his permission, which is considered as theft.
Originally posted by Hack submission guidelines
3.Do not steal content.
Any hack containing content that was used or copied without permission (i.e. stolen) will be removed.
About the level design, as I said, it's good in general, except for a few places like this
where I have to wait and do nothing, or some empty segments like this one
or this level
and easy obstacles, but they weren't very commun. The most recurring level design issue was the stars, in many levels you placed stars in the way which kind of kills the game because all I have to do is run straigh forward, stars themselves aren't the problem, but the player should fight a bit more to get them. Also, there were a lot of easy 3-up moons in the way, you even placed one of them at the very beginning of a level.
There were a few graphical issues too, like this horrible cutoff
in the bonus game. Most of them were remainders of Mario, like the "Mario Start" message, this
or the flying animation
; if you're going to change the player, you should also get rid or any text/graphics that have Mario in it.
Basically, what you need to do is:
-Take out BroDute's graphics.
-Improve the level design a little (mostly remove the stars and easy 3-up moons)
-Remove all remainders of Mario.
Three easy steps and you will get this hack accepted.