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Super zizou world la grande aventure ! (1) - mamlazizou
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Name:Super zizou world la grande aventure ! (1)
Submitted by:mamlazizou
Author(s):mamlazizou
Length:13 levels
Demo:Yes
Description:Salut a tous je suis francais donc un hack francais ! Jouer am mon hack !!!! C'est ma parti un il y aura bientot la parti deux !

IPS Link

Removal Reason(s):
First of all, your hack has the "bad checksum" thing on Snes9x, but I don't think it's affecting the ROM at all, it's just a friendly warning, now to start the removal... I didn't knew where exactly should start moderating the hack, I was confused because I started in a pipe, then I tried to enter in the pipe and it happened. I just think the hack is supposed to start in previous levels, no?


In other words, your hack has a lot of blatant edits, examples are the levels "GANG DE IGGY !!" and "SUPER MAN VIP !", there you go with examples, more from "GANG DE IGGY !!" level:


To mention the third screenshot, you should put something explaining these question blocks can be destroyed with fireballs, thought, it's odd because question blocks are supposed to be question blocks and not what you tried, also obvious cutoffs in the sixth screenshot, as for the seventh, as far LuigiBlood translated to me, "so kirby is dumb but mario nope try to decipher this sentence! 30-10 plus 4 to activate P and there do it by yourself" isn't a good text to put on it, just saying.

There's also some weird stuff in your hack, I'm not sure if some are intentional, but here we go again.


I think the first and second screenshots are a bit self-explanatory, for the third and fourth, it's a bug happening because it's a big boo boss battle and Mario and other sprites are disappearing, you should be sure to put the correct sprite header, in this case, 09. The fifth screenshot shows an invisible bullet bill shooter, that's not good for hacks and can hurt the player by surprise (mainly if you're a bit distracted), the sixth is probably self-explanatory too, the seventh shows more sprite header issues and the last screen, ehh... a black kirby, that's odd, really.

Your hack isn't bad, but you need to work more on it, for more sure, I'll suggest you to hire testers, as for level design, you should read APPALLED, I'll also recommend you to try playing our recent accepted hacks and to be sure to read the hack submission guidelines, it'll help you a lot. Feel free to submit your hack again once what I mentioned be fixed, thanks for your time.
Earlier today, I played through the whole hack while mentioning what I saw in it in #smwc (mostly putting the contents of the message boxes and castle clear messages in there). I didn't bother translating the messages, since the text was devoid of any proper capitalisation, punctuation and grammar.

Here's the IRC log. (note: Yuyuko = me)

Major thanks to LuigiBlood for translating every single one of the messages while trying to keep the typos in them.

Of note that the IRC log is supposed to help mamlazizou where the mistakes are (though I don't mention how to fix them, since I'm not a hack mod) and thus should not be used to humiliate/insult him.

(note: if the IRC log violates the rules as of now, I will remove the offending lines, though it should be good, since I and Alcaro revised it together)

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Twitter account

Steam Community profile
J'ai corriger quelque faute d'orthographe en metant la nouvelle vertion et que j'espere ne sera pas rejeter encore une foi
IPS Link

Removal Reasons:

None of the things in ShadowPhoenix's removal log were fixed, except that the player now start in the right place.
Actually, a new error appeared in this update: The pipe after the first castle doesn't work, it just sends the player nowhere.

By the way, pretty much every level in World 1 is a blatant edit. Use Ctrl+Del to remove original SMW's original levels before editing them!
There are two other things that ShadowPhoenix and Purple Rex not listed:

The Turn Block animation is wrong here;


He forgot to uninstall the Title Screen Record.

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През горите, през полята, под звездите, над житата
The first issue you mentioned isn't mandatory in hacks. You can leave it as a suggestion for the hack author, though.

As for the second, I haven't noticed when moderating the hack, so thanks for pointing this.
mamlazizou > Si ton hack n'est pas accepté, c'est SURTOUT à cause de nombreux bugs et des quelques niveaux qui ne sont pas originaux et qui sont de simples modifications, ce qui n'est pas accepté. Le texte laisse également à désirer, et pas seulement au niveau des fautes. Le hack n'est pas SI mauvais en soi, mais il a besoin de changements majeurs.

J'irai plus en détail plus tard, mais si tu comprends ce qu'on veut te dire, ça sera déjà pas mal.
IPS Link

Removal Reason:

Only change made is that it's now possible to enter World 2 now. Other than that, nothing's different from the previous update.

If you can't understand english well, read LuigiBlood's post.

Originally posted by LuigiBlood
mamlazizou > Si ton hack n'est pas accepté, c'est SURTOUT à cause de nombreux bugs et des quelques niveaux qui ne sont pas originaux et qui sont de simples modifications, ce qui n'est pas accepté. Le texte laisse également à désirer, et pas seulement au niveau des fautes. Le hack n'est pas SI mauvais en soi, mais il a besoin de changements majeurs.

J'irai plus en détail plus tard, mais si tu comprends ce qu'on veut te dire, ça sera déjà pas mal.
Hack Name: Super zizou world la grande aventure ! (1)
Username: mamlazizou
Verdict: A Big O' Fat Denied
IPS: IPS Link (why bother really?)

Overall:
Honestly, have you been listening to the advice given by ShadowPhoenix, LuigiBlood, fsvgm777, and Purple Rex? Are you making a sincere attempt to try to fix your hack? Because if you expect to achieve different results by submitting a barely slightly modified hack to different moderators, it ain't gonna fly with anyone.

EDIT: Your design is okay (some questionable things at times), but it's covered up by so much graphical garbage that it's hard to see the good things.

The Main Problems:
My assessment is short and simple, it's a hot mess. Spare everyone's time and stop submitting until you fix it for good (or better). It pretty much violates every single cardinal rule of APPALLED. The fact that I'm not pointing out every error in screenshot form is enough to know I'll be here until next week in order to point out everything that needs to be fixed. You have 3 options at this point: (a) start over (b) make a sincere attempt to fix all of these problems or (c) [which probably will happen] keep it the same and get instantly trashed and denied. This below is only a small summary of what needs to be done. Exact examples are provided by ShadowPhoenix which are good ones.

- Too many sprites that end up missing on the screen
- Graphical glitches (specifically the point system)
- Cutoff
- Too Many Moons (spam)
- No Sprite Buoyancy
- Bad Palettes
- Blocks that don't function as they are supposed to
- Abundant Power-ups
- Blatant Edits
- Disappearing Mario
- Bad Sprite Memory
- Bad Sprite Placements (particularly the Podoboos)
- Exits that lead to Level 0
- Hidden Hazards
- Jumps into the Unknown
- Boring/Flat or No Enemy areas
- Land that is on the bottom row
- Floating Munchers
- Tiles that are not used properly (fences/slopes).
- Vertical Scrolling needed
- OW that starts on the wrong level.
- Cutoff on the OW.
- Cutoff on the Title Screen
- etc. etc. etc. the list goes on and on and on

P.S. I don't usually get this irritated by the hack, but it's irritating that the updates are not improving and you are continuing to not listen to the advice given either in English or by LuigiBlood.
Originally posted by cstutor89
IPS: [url=http://www.smwcentral.net/download.php?id=6532&type=hack]IPS Link[/url]

That one broke when you removed the hack. You're supposed to upload a copy to here or here.
I put a copy here in case you deleted yours; please copy it to somewhere more persistent.

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<blm> zsnes users are the flatearthers of emulation
Okay thanks Alcaro.

Sorry about that ... that means I screwed up the other 2 too >_<. I still have their IPSes, I better go fix them now.
*sigh* Some people never learn.

I guess we're taking the high road [Choice C] for this one ... 90%+ of the errors are still there.
IPS Link

Removal Reasons:

Again, nothing was fixed, and now the player starts in a random level in W2.

Put the word "electrolysis" in the submission notes or description after you fix the things mentioned, or your hack will be removed because you're not listening to our removal logs.
Hello I'm going to put my hack again and this time if all the bugs vou had called me were settle I hope it will not once again reject ...
Hack Name: Super zizou world la grande aventure ! (1)
Username: mamlazizou
Verdict: D.E.N.I.E.D!
IPS: Why bother, it's the same as what PurpleRex had in his last post.

Overall:
What more is there to say? You continue to make little to no effort at all to do better and continue to expect an approval. You also don't ask people to help you at all to make any attempt at actually trying to make it better. Which means it's becoming a joke for the moderators.

Most of the initial problems, described by ShadowPhoenix, that first plagued your hack and the problems others have pointed out are still there. Stop posting new versions when nothing has been really revised.
thank you for not banned me is kind of you. Ok but if vout please you can send me the picture to which bugs because I still listen to your advice, but you said that no, I thank you not understand then send all the images of what bugs goodbye. and sorry it took and put my hack as version was not yet fixed
I will post new errors once you fix the problems that are stated by ShadowPheonix at the beginning of this thread.
this is good all is now set you can send me other errors
Okay, there's about a 100 errors here...mainly because the level design is kind of sub-par. It needs a lot of work and more attention to the quality rather than quantity. Some of the errors might be the same as what SP said, I'd ignore those if they are the same.

Please refer to other comments that other people have said because most of the problems that I've found are the same as other people. Please start over the levels that are the same as the original game. But if there's something in the link that doesn't make sense, let me know in this thread.

Link => ZIP File with all Screenshots and Error List

Good Luck.
Ok thank you I'll settle everything and I will give my hack with all the good it will set ereur longtemp in about 3 or 2 weeks ... but yeah it is a erreur? = D
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