|Name:||Super zizou world la grande aventure ! (1)|
|Description:||Salut a tous je suis francais donc un hack francais ! Jouer am mon hack !!!! C'est ma parti un il y aura bientot la parti deux !|
First of all, your hack has the "bad checksum" thing on Snes9x, but I don't think it's affecting the ROM at all, it's just a friendly warning, now to start the removal... I didn't knew where exactly should start moderating the hack, I was confused because I started in a pipe, then I tried to enter in the pipe and it happened. I just think the hack is supposed to start in previous levels, no?
In other words, your hack has a lot of blatant edits, examples are the levels "GANG DE IGGY !!" and "SUPER MAN VIP !", there you go with examples, more from "GANG DE IGGY !!" level:
To mention the third screenshot, you should put something explaining these question blocks can be destroyed with fireballs, thought, it's odd because question blocks are supposed to be question blocks and not what you tried, also obvious cutoffs in the sixth screenshot, as for the seventh, as far LuigiBlood translated to me, "so kirby is dumb but mario nope try to decipher this sentence! 30-10 plus 4 to activate P and there do it by yourself" isn't a good text to put on it, just saying.
There's also some weird stuff in your hack, I'm not sure if some are intentional, but here we go again.
I think the first and second screenshots are a bit self-explanatory, for the third and fourth, it's a bug happening because it's a big boo boss battle and Mario and other sprites are disappearing, you should be sure to put the correct sprite header, in this case, 09
. The fifth screenshot shows an invisible bullet bill shooter, that's not good for hacks and can hurt the player by surprise (mainly if you're a bit distracted), the sixth is probably self-explanatory too, the seventh shows more sprite header issues and the last screen, ehh... a black kirby, that's odd, really.
Your hack isn't bad, but you need to work more on it, for more sure, I'll suggest you to hire testers
, as for level design, you should read APPALLED
, I'll also recommend you to try playing our recent accepted hacks and to be sure to read the hack submission guidelines
, it'll help you a lot. Feel free to submit your hack again once what I mentioned be fixed, thanks for your time.