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Super zizou world la grande aventure ! (1) - mamlazizou
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It's good I finished setting all the error was a bit long but in the fight against boo is normal that you can not skip it in writing that the block boo sent him a lot! I'll send my good hack!
I'll give you one thing, it's more improved than the last time I saw it (which is a good thing). But there's still errors that haven't been fixed.
Of note that several grammar/capitalisation/punctuation issues still haven't been fixed (ex. World 1 Castle Clear message). On another note, I die immediately after taking the second warp star in "kirby dream land!". Anyway, what cstutor89 meant by "Land that is on the bottom row" is that it's invisible when you actually play the hack (very apparent in "L'ami trailli!", less so in "Sonic! Avec Idris!").

Also, is "L'ami trailli!" supposed to have a secret exit?

EDIT: Post refers to the version that's being moderated (submitted on June 16th).

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À noter que plusieurs erreurs d'orthographe/de grammaire n'ont toujours pas été corrigés (p. ex. le message qui apparaît après avoir battu le château du premier monde ("GANG DE IGGY !")). Par ailleurs, je meurs immédiatement après avoir pris la deuxième Étoile Warp dans "kirby dream land!". En tout cas, ce que cstutor89 voulait dire avec "Land that is on the bottom row" (terre étant sur la rangée la plus basse) est qu'il est invisible quand on joue au hack pour de vrai (très apparent dans "L'ami trailli!", moins dans "Sonic! Avec Idris!").

Ah oui, "L'ami trailli!" est-il censé avoir une sortie secrète?

EDIT: Ce message refère à la version qui est en train d'être modérée.

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no there is no secret exit in trailli friend but for the sins of hortographe this is not a problem because there is no need to translate the game I'll do it myself. so my hack will be rejected or not custor? I hope not ...
Originally posted by mamlazizou
no there is no secret exit in trailli friend but for the sins of hortographe this is not a problem because there is no need to translate the game I'll do it myself. so my hack will be rejected or not custor? I hope not ...


If I was moderating it, it most likely would be rejected. But I'm not moderating your hack at this time, so who knows ...
J'ai jouer au hack il y a trop de bug !
Tu doit bien t'occuper de ton hack au sinnon il ne sera toujours pas accepter ;)
Click sur mon pseudo va voir dans mes fichiers j'ai régler des trucs dans ton hack ;)

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While some of the graphics were changed and look better, the design, the main problem of the hack, the design, still wasn't fixed. There are quite a few blatant edits (SUPER MAN VIP!, GANG DE IGGY!, mistere land!!), and the design overall is very boring and uninspired.

By the way, two new bugs appeared in this patch:

-Some of the Overworld paths are glitched, probably because you forgot to uninstall the Title Moves Recording ASM. They were fixed when I restarted the game, though, so that could be just me.

-The player automatically dies after getting one of the Warp Stars in "kirby dream land!", making it impossible to complete the hack.




Honestly, I think it would be better to start another hack (or at least remake the levels).
The level design is pretty bland and not really interesting overall, and there are also quite a few blatant edits.

I recommend reading APPALLED and playing some of our accepted hacks to see what we are expecting design-wise.
Hack Name: Super zizou world la grande aventure ! (1)
Username: mamlazizou
Verdict: Denied
IPS: IPS

Overall:
Pretty much, there are still many problems that exist as point before (i.e. palettes, flying Koopas, too many power-ups, etc). It needs more work (as PurpleRex has stated).

Also one of your versions starts with the wrong tile.
Name:Super zizou world la grande aventure part 1 (fr) version fixe
Submitted by:mamlazizou
Author(s):mamlazizou
Length:13 levels
Demo:No
Description:Salut a tous mon hack est français il a été rejeter plusieurs fois car il y avait 100 erreur que j'ai régler, désoler pour ce qui parlent anglais mais la version anglaise n'est pas sorti je vais en faire une... ceci est ma parti 1 j'entrain de faire ma partie 2 je vais bientôt envoyer la démo bon j'espère que mon hack vous plaira a tous ! au revoir !

Hi to all my hack is French it was rejected several times because there were 100 mistake I set, sorry for that speak English but the English version is not released I'll make a ... this is my party one I actually doing my part 2 I will soon send the good demo I hope you enjoy my hack at all! goodbye!

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And the same issues pointed out by me and all the hack mods who have moderated your hack still haven't been fixed. I'm wondering if you're really paying attention for our removal logs. My only advice for now is for you start your hack from stratch, because it doesn't seem you're going to fix the issues we pointed out.

Sorry, I'm just being honest.
Mamlazizou ton hack est pas mal y a juste quelques bugs a vérifier comme le disait Yayayoub . Bonne Chance pour les correction j'ai hate de voir le hack entier #w{=)}
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