Hack Name: SMW The Adventures of A Plumber (2)
A pretty good hack overall, which has been fixed up a bit from the last version that I played. However, there are carry-over errors that are from the original post that are needed to be fixed and some new ones with the new levels created. Please see SS 2,3,7-9,13 from my original post to fix those up
As far as the new version, here are the new SS's for this one:
SS 1. This event tile next to the Castle should be removed. You can do without showing this one. It looks weird when it's actually coming about:
SS 2. A power-up at the beginning of the section + a hidden Mushroom. Remove the mushroom. The status bar palettes don't look very good here.
SS 3. (Optional) This Midway Point seems really long - shorten it maybe.
SS 4-5. Turn on Buoyancy here.
SS 6. Is that white supposed to be there on the Yellow Switch Block?
SS 7-11. Slowdown Central.
SS 12. The cause of the slowdown, plus do we really need 3 power-ups here?
SS 13-14. Glitched Graphics.
SS 15. Is this supposed to be bad or good?
SS 16. Very hard to get out of this spot, lower the note blocks by one square.
SS 17. Your game crashes (due to the music) in this level [DEFINITELY FIX THIS]
SS 18. Bad Palettes
SS 19. Too many power-ups.
SS 20. A free 1-Up for doing nothing but entering the level. (Is loopable).
Also, as a suggestion, finishing up World 2 is a sufficient length for the hack as a demo.
@Dipalon There are rules on how long a hack should be that can be submitted for approval. 3-4 levels is really not long enough.
As far as the text is concerned, it is NOT fine. If you are going to use English, you have to write grammatically correct sentences in English. The player has no idea what the designer is talking about otherwise. Spacing is a different story. It is acceptable to have no adjusted lines that are auto-spaced, however it looks funny when a line with 2 words on it has a huge gap and a line with 4 words have small gaps.
As far as the color palettes are on the midway points, that needs to be fixed because it doesn't look good. The colors are inverted and don't belong with the colors of the other side of the midway point.